Mayur Os-Ms.Gawky&Mr.Crummy Last Prt,Pg-19 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sagarvidya4ver

OMG🤪MayUr☺️!!! I LOVE THIS OS hayeee


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: preethis

awesome awesome dear...




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ridzzi

ha finally ur link worked...read all ur parts...
beautiful n amaing...
nup's is getting crazy on mayank...he had effected her that much she imagined him in her bathroom...ha ha...she is really getting mad...
n mayank is a smoker...no man but i m really liking his attitude...
n mayu is teasing her...oh poor nups can't do anything...liked the last part...u know ahem ahem one...
do update soon n plz provide proper link this time ok...
luv u... :-)




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

nyc update dear!
luvd it!❤️




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Roses-khushi

nice update thanks for pm me



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wish you all a very happy Ganesh Chathurti.



Here is my another update..
Hope you all liked it...

Ms.Gawky & Mr.Crummy
Part-4(Friendship)

They both were unaware of surroundings, they don't know where they are heading...they were just flowing...flowing and flwoing...

And being in this flow...the distance between their lips were also slowly reducing…

It was a cm gap between their lips...Mayank's hot breathe was mingling on her lips and a voice came don't know who said it

"I don't know..."

And their lips met…initially it was just a smooch... just a simple kiss…but soon it was gaining it's passion... And slowly slowly nupur parted her lips and allow his tougue to enter her mouth and explore her mouth; even she too explored his mouth through her tounge….both were kissing, nubbling, sucking each other lips …. Their kiss was showing a kind of urgency, I kind of need….as they were dying to kiss each other.

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Soon due to urgency of need of oxygen they pulled off...Not able to

meet their gaze.

Without saying anything Mayank walked out from her room as he does not want to make her uncomfortable.he came to another room and scolds himself."What had happened to you dude…, you had certainly behaved like a jerk... but….i couldn't able to stop myself…I was so lost in her eyes…omg... her eyes... so much they were saying to me as if they were meant for me only..She is such an innocent child…., I hope she is not angry with me...gosh her lips were so soft...i couldn't control myself man... she is so fragile..,you are a jerk..Mayank Sharma, now definitely you had became a bad boy... how I will face her..."

Mind:"Oh!!Com on dude... you have just kissed her, nothing else...so chill...let's smoke"

Heart:"Are you nuts...have you lost you power thinking also... god dammit he kissed a girl... it's not small issue...

Mind: "oh...please… don't start okay…you must feel happy that for the first time in his life he has kissed a girl..."

Heart:"You have certainly lost your common sense or I say sense of thinking …"

Mind:"I think you are becoming too emotional..."

Heart."No.. I am not... you are behaving like insane..."

Mind:"No... It's you..."

Heart..."You"

Mind."You.."

OH... SHUT UP YOU BOTH YOU…YOU BOTH JUST NEED A TOPIC TO FIGHT WITH EACH OTHER...ONLY BECOZ OF YOUR THIS SILLY FIGHT I NEVER ABLE TO TAKE A PROPER DECISION….

Finally Mayank looses his patience and scolds his mind and heart….

Mayank's P.O.V.

Got dude...

You just kissed a girl..this is something so new to me….i know till now I haven't kissed a girl…but I really don't' know how I should react to this...

See as for me it was just a kiss... simple kiss...it just happen just due to the flow of emotions...but still I feel that more than those flowing emotions something else was also present in that aroma…. her eyes... beautifull, black deep eyes made me to do so…Oh!!Man... She has such beautifull eyes, so innocent, so cute, as if they were saying me not to leave them, always be there for her in every turn of her life..and I was returning this promise through my kiss….but do I actually feel it….arghh!!!!Why I am thinking about her…It's better...Let's smoke...

As soon as Mayank took out his cigratte and his fingers brushed with his lips …. moment of their steaming kiss flashed infront of his eyes.He slowly touched his lips and could still feel the essence of her lips on his.Shrugging his though he again tries to put cigrette in his mouth but couldn't as again and again Nupur's face and their incident flashing in front of his eyes…

Her lips were so soft...so fragile and so perfectly as they are meant for me only...What a lovely cute smile she has…she is sweetest desert in the whole world …I can't stop myself about thinking her again and again..I didn't even expect that the visit to her house would turn so…awsome..so…………unpridectable…

He throws his cigrette away as he was sure ..he couldn't able to smoke today atleast and for a few days…..because of this….kiss….She recalls how he joined this institution and met with Nupur.

I had to joined that study course ….as to join my Father's business ,I need to learn some computer languages and their aaplication, I still remember the morning incident when I was getting ready and drove to the institution as fast I could and due that I splashed a handfull of mud to a girl who was riding her scooty at the equal speed .. But you see how could a scooty compete with the speed of the Bullet Bike...and then…I was waking upwards litting my cigrette when a girl bumped to me letting my cigrrette fall...I was so frustated becoz my cigrette fall down and burst out my anger on her.. And didn't even noticed her...Then again when she was the one who is going help me in this course I was so not happy... I don't want to be with a clumsy girl who falls after every 5 or 10 steps. …but today when she was about to fall then automayically I forwarded my self to hold her as How could I let her fall….down…why I was so worried about her.. why I didn't let her fall…

And today when I get to know that she is none other than Bhushan uncle's daughter so I thought to endup...this not-so-good type of cold war and start a new friendship with her unknown to fact that the result of this would be a kiss….I am not A bad boy it's just that I am also not a good boy….and here this girl says I am a bad boy…..and I suppose through my this act I had proved that I am a bad boy….i am sooo bad…yaar….but she is sooo…sweet….

……This girl is getting into my head…I need to have some peace...let's move for Street race... may it provide me some peace of mind.

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After the kiss incident when Mayank left her room, Nupur's condition was also not in her controls…she was breathing heavly and mumbling", omg..!! I kissed hm... I kissed him... you are just a fool, what he will be thinking as if you are a despo...though I want to kiss him.. But it wills happpen so soon that to this way was certainly I had not expected.Now how I would face him…argh…!!!...His lips were so delicious ,soft as if they were meant to be kissed by me…And the way Mayank was holding me ,I was loosing my sense in each passing second…minute…Haaye…..But How could kissed him.. I mean I barely know him, nor he knows me and it's been a day we know each other and on the second meet you shared a steaming kiss with this man... who has a perfectly toned body and sexy smile… ""Wow... Ms.Nupur Bhushan you were so soft……""No... More discussion I am already feeling sleepy…."

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Mayank grabbed his bike eyes and moved out of his room…while going out he passes across Nupur's room her door was open and was at the same place from where he had left it half-opened.He slowly moves inside her room , seeing her retreating figure..

She looks so cute while sleeping…..

Keeping his thoughts aside he moved closer to her tucked the blanket till her neck...switched of the night lamb and place a sweet peck on her forhead and whispers goodnight to her, and himself went towards his room to sleep as he was sure after watching her sleeping like this he is no more able to concentrate on his race….

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"Mujhpe to jaadoo tera jaadoo… chal gaya…"

Both slept on their respective rooms thinking of this and just waiting for tomorrow .As they hardly had any power left for any more thinking after such steaming and passionate kiss.

And praying that this incident won't haunt their dreams…Well it would become impossible for them...

Becoz as soon as both were trying to sleep after a moment their thoughts were shifted towrads their kiss...turning their side again and again…Mayank and Nupur not able to sleep properly whole night and were constantly thinking about each other and ways that how they are going to face each other….Finaaly giving up the thought That he could not able sleep today.. he thought of taking something to eat.. that waould surely divert his mind.

He marched towards kitchen when he heard some sounds coming from kitchen.. he thought a thief has entered into the house…so slowing ans steading went towards where the voice was coming and holds the thief …pinned it to the wall and closes his mouth so that he won't shout…and letting others sleep disturb … he switched on the light and after that what he saw.. he forgot to blink his eyes..Nupur was standing infront og him and was struggling so that he could leave her but mayank's grip was far far more stronger than that of Her so couldn't able to freed herself.Seeing Nupur's struggle Mayank realises that Nupr's was struggling to free herself…He releases her hand from his mouth still holding his hands in his strong grip.

Nupur:"Leave me…Mr.Mayak Sharma…."

Mayank:"what are you doing.. Here that to this late.."

Nupur:"Leave me……."

Mayank:"This is not the answer of my question.."

Nupur:"I said leave me."

Mayank:"No.. First tell.. me…."

Nupur:"You are stubborn…"

Mayank:"Company effects.."

Nupur:"I was feeling hungry.. so I thought to grab something from fridge…By the way what are you doing in my kitchen ….at this hour of time…"

Mayank:"You are not the one who is feeling hungry in this whole world….and what do you mean by "my kitchen" this is not your kitchen…"

Nupur:"Excuse me.. Mr.Sharma.. Let me clarify this doubt.. This my kitchen.. …."

Mayank:"No this kitchen is of marble flooring and wooden architecture.. How could it be yours.."

Saying so.. mayank grins …and Nupur fumes in anger…

Nupur:"Did anyone told you ..you have a poor sense of humor.. so please never ever try to be funny from nowwards infront of anyone else..he or she would surely beat you till blue and black."

Mayank:"You.. will be there to save me.. na.."

He says so innocently that Nupur couldn't stop herself and just nod her head in yes.She feels that his grip from her hands was loosing which occurred events which occurred in their flashed in front of her eyes.. Before she could protest or say anything thing..

Mayank:" Nupur….I want to say something.."

Nupur:"hmmm…."

Mayank:*serious tone*:"Nupur.. I wont say sorry.. because I am ashamed of kising you…it's true that whatever happen had happen suddenly ..we both not able to understand how did it happen and when it happen..but still I am not ashamed .. rather I felt a kind of peace a kind of satidfaction as a..aa….kind of happiness in the deep inside my heart.. I can't able to elaborate ..i hope u r understanding what I am trying to say….

Nupur nod her her yes as if Mayank was conveying her feelings also….

Nupur:"I guesss… you are right Mayank…Do you also thing there was something else also between us.. which we are not able to figure out…"

Mayank:"You are right…*after a brief pause*I have an idea..see we don't know exactly.. what are these weird feelings and emotions so it's better we start it with the name of friendship…

"MUJHSE DOSTI KAROGI…"

Nupur:"Why not….but only if you leave my hand.."hey

Mayank:"vese mann to nahi kar raha hain.. well….abhi k liye…I'll leave your hand..","So will you be my friend.."

Nupur:"Sure…"

They both start their new journey a journey of friendship….well time will decide wether this friendship will turn in love or not….

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They both chated for long hours.. talking about each other like and dislike from this Nupur gets to know that Though Mayank smokes ..or goes to places which are not suitable for*sharif ghar k log* but still she is happy that he is not a womenizer he equally repects women.Mayank also realises that Nupur is a clumsy girl but very sweet and innocent from heart.u morning and new journey…..


That's for all now...



Hope you all liked it...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow!! Mayur kissed.Their first kiss.
Shaffy It ws very beautiful update.Bothr confused of their feelings.Lets c how they wil realize their feelings?
Edited by Irum. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely part...
MN moment wr cute...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Auroni.92

Lovely part...
MN moment wr cute...
Cont..




I was very nervous while writing it down..Thought it wont' come in the good form

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