maaneet ff # 2...CRAZY IN LOVE/LAST PART PAGE 57.. - Page 24

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Posted: 12 years ago
kya yaar chota sa teaser can't wait to read the update jaldi karo
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Posted: 12 years ago
hehe😊..i know i know😛...but my mouth is sealed..😉will not say...🥱
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ye tho bathao when r u updating..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: valli22

ye tho bathao when r u updating..



hehehehehehe depend how many want to kill me after teaser😆

if i get what i want then i update...now itself or may be in night but first tell me how many of u want to kill me for this...😛🤣
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wat is it yaar choti si tsr me pouting...😡
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Lovely teaser dear.my maan is having a plan to run with his geet for honeymoon to marry.coz my maan can to do anything..lol.waiting dear.
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teasing teaser wo bhi itna chota...update soon
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waiting eagerly diii


jaldi update karo
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hi friends!!!!!!! how are u all??????? chalo tell me frankly after reading teaser how many of u plan to kill me...lolzzz😆 ok here u go next update...maan's plan...first thought to give it before itself but then i thought first let maaneet engaged so plan delay ..but no problem now i gave...😊

waise i have 2 option for maan's plan and i m confuse too between them...then i ask Valli di which she like this idea...so i choose this..😉

waise thanks alot to read my non sense bak bak and bear me...😆


PART 37

In mid night 3'o clock maan pacing in his room packing his stuff while rano and soniya helping him.. and both dad and papaji sitting on bed with tensed face...

Soniya – are aap dono kya beithe hain humari help kijiye kaam ne...

Dad – haan bas ab yahi baki reh gaya hain... beta ghar se bhag raha hain aur tum mujhe uski packing mein help karne ko bol rahi hu...

Papaji – sanjay tera to fir bhi tik hain mujhe dekh maan meri beti ko lekar bhag raha hain aur mein iski help kar raha hu...agar kisi ko pata chala to log kya bolenge humare bare mein?????

Maan rolled his eyes on both dad but rano like a typical maa..

Mummyji – haye haye babaji... ji ye tusi ki keh rahe ho badnami wo bhi humari...fir meri geet se shadi koun karega...

Other 4 were shocked what rano saying geet se shadi what non sense..

Maan – maa aap ye kya bol rahi hain geet mere sath ja rahi hain... aur what badnami aap log itni over acting kar rahe ho...and plz no more melodrama..

Mummyji – o haan mein to bhool hi gayi thi itni tension mein..

Raj – sanjay maan to itna confident hain jaise pata nahi kitni baar ladki bhaga chukka ho...

Maan – papaji ab plz aap mat shuru ho jayiye aur jake dekhye rashta saf hain ya nahi mein geet ko lekar aata hu...

Sanjay – par geet ko to kuch pata hi nahi hain agar wo puchegi to ???????

Maan smile naughtily and wink on 4 of them...

Mom – maan tera yu mushkorane se mujhe dar lag raha hain... sach sach bata tu kya karne wala hain ab..

Maan – relax mom geet subah tak nahi jagne wali...

Mummyji – kyu...

Maan – wo isliye ki meine usko sleeping pills khila di chupke se...😉 ab bas use utha k lejaonga..

Dad , papaji – WHATTT yaar tu aur kitne shock aur dega...looks like your profession in this 😲

Maan – haan ab chiye jaldi kijiye warna dadu aur darji jag jayenge unki morning walk k liye now go... papaji aap niche dekhiye dad aap back door pe jayeyi aur dekhiye ki dev adi aur karan car lekar ready hain ya nahi aur maa and mom aap geet ka saman leke niche aayiye..mein geet ko utha ke lata hu.. now come on hurry up..

Maan mom and mummyji come in geet room where geet is sleeping in deep slumber just like an innocent kid...in her two pic night dress...maan come slowly toward her and pick her in his strong arms without disturbing her but geet feeling his scent and warmness in her unconscious too and cuddle up more close to him maan chuckle see her antics and go out of room while mom and mummyji follow him with geet luggage...maan come in back yard where dev adi and karan waiting with dad and papaji...maan gentaly put geet in back sit geet pout her lips missing his warm..maan amazed to see his effect on her and feel great...he turn and hug all 4..who were standing emotional...

Mummyji – maan take care of her..

Maan – i will maa till my last breath u don't worry about her and yaa don't take tansion too much ok...its not good for ur health it just matter of 2 -3 days and we will be back..to live together forever... he touch there feets and sit in car...he put geets head in his lap while dev driving and adi sitting next to him and karan in back sit and middle maaneet...(imagine any big car yaar with 3 rows of seats), they start journey

Dev adi and karan busy in talking while maan lost in thought of last night how they got engaged, how they caught by there friends while romancing in party...

Flashback

Maaneet busy in receiving wishes and gift from guest and media...not able to get time for eachother and both were dying to spend some time with eachother , lights of hall went dim for a dance performance maan take this opportunity and steal geet from there without anyone notice..and take her to guest room in ground floor itself...

He take geet inside the room and hug her tight and geet too hug him back with same passion..y not both were in same condition both craving for each other... they loose hug after don't know how much time but who care about time when ur in ur loves arms... when u know u got right to be in each other arms.. u got what u craving from so many years...

When they loose hug... they se 5 pairs of eyes watching them teasingly... and maaneet were all red due to shyness.. now they know they gone...their friends not leave them..

Karan – maan we know u both get official licence but it doesn't mean u can romancing with each other that too with door open..what happen is someone else come.. karan and all gave them teasing look...

Geet gave fake angry glare to maan like cant u lock the door...and maan make puppy face to her like what should i do when ur with me i forget even myself and ur talking about door..

Dev – see guys they still busy talking with each other silently..what maan buddy have u totally lost it or what...

Maan gave them all angry glare for disturbing his time with geet...

Maan – u know guys ur all become shameless we got licence to do romance but u all forget ur manners to knock the door before entering...

Adi – look guys who is talking about manner , who himself hugging his fianc in open room and asking us to knock the door..

Geet all the while blushing caught red handed and all tease them more seeing geet red... at last geet run from their...

Flash back end...

Dev's voice make maan back to reality..

Dev – tera dreamhouse aagaya... chale...

Maan nod and take geet in his arms while other follow them with luggage , he come inside and take geet in their bedroom and gentaly put her on bed... dev karan and adi put their luggage and

Karan – maan we must leave now aur else our families start doubting on us and it may be possible dad and darji also come to know about ur where abouts..

Maan – i can understand karan... thanks a lot for ur help dudes...

Adi – maan no need to thanks us we all really want that u two always leave together..humne tumhe 16 saalo tak geet ke liye tadapte hue dekha hain.. ab hum nahi chahte kit um aur tadapo... not even for a second...u both look happy only when , when u both are with each other...

Maan nods as he knows its true.. they both love eachother so much crazily that they cant stand a simple moment sepration..adi dev and karan leave and maan settle himself on couch , he sleep admiring his sleeping beauty...

Next morning in khurana mansion...

All were present in living room after breakfast...maaneet is missing from dining table but all 4 elders thought both were sleeping due to tiredness and avoid to wake them up... rano come running from stairs , shouting...

Rano – beejiii darjiii baujiii maajiii...

4 get alert while other 3 giggling mutely on rano's drama..

Beeji – kya hua rano , tum aise chilla kyu rahi ho????????

Rano (panting and dramatically) – beeji geet aapne room mein nahi hain...

Beeji(rolled her eyes) – are to ismein itna hyper hone ki kya baat hain?????? Aapne room mein nahi hain to maan k sath hogi...

Rano – nahi beeji na hi geet ghar mein hain na hi maan , dono bhag gaye ye dekhiye letter chod k gaye hain...all 4 get a mini heart attack and other 4 enjoying their plight...

Dadi – ye kya bol rahi ho rano...maan aur geet aisa nahi kar sakte..

Mom add more spices with her melodrama..

Mom – haye mera bacha kaha chala gaya...pata nahi kis hal mein hoga mera masoom se beta...

Dadi – chup karo soniya aur rano what letter mujhe do...she take letter and start reading it loudly where dadu and darji still in shock...

Dear all,

Hum jante hain aap sab bahut shocked hain...par aap logo ne humare liye koi aur option hi nahi rakha tha...har baar hum dono ko alag kar dete hain ye jante hue bhi ki we cant live without each other...but darji and beeji only think about world , what society think or say not about us..kyu nahi reh sakte darji aap km mein kya ye aapka ghar nahi hain... hain balki mere aur geet k is duniya mein aane k pehle se ye aapka ghar hain...dadu , dadi darji aur beeji ye ghar aap 4 ka sapna hain... ye to dono family janti hain ki yaha har koi ek dusare se kitna pyar karta hain lekin sirf isliye ki duniya kya kahegi ye soch kar to hum alag ho jaye ye to sahi nahi hain na...darji aapne KM se HH jaane ka faisla to leliya lekin ek baar aapne dil se puchiye kya aap dadu se lag reh payenge... nahi aap nahi reh payege...na hi dadi beeji se na dad papaji se aur na maa mom se... fir kyu aap aapni zid mein itne pyari family ko todna chahte hain... ye sach hain ki geet aur mein ek dusre se alag reh kar bahut tadpe hain lekin hum ye bhi jante hain ki aap sab bhi ek dusare k liye bahut tadpe hain... beeji dad dadi se jayada aapko aapni maa mante hain aur papaji dadi ko fir kyu aap ek bte ko aapni maa se alag karna chahte hain... aur rahi baat geet ki...wo to aapki princess hain na darji kya aapne uski aankho mein mujhse aur is pariwar se alag hone ka dard nahi dekha... aap log to uski thodi si chupi se pareshan ho jate ho fir ye dard kaise nahi dekh paye.. aap logo k dar se aapni princess ko kaise dard de sakte ho... aap shayad nahi dekh paye lekin mein aapni geet ki aanko mein dard aur dukh(sadness) nahi dekh sakta isliye mein aur geet ghar se ja rahe hain aur tabhi wapas aayege jab darji aur beeji KM mein rehne ka promise karenge... aur fir kabhi yaha se jaane ki baat nahi karenge...

Yours,

Maan and geet..

All were having tears in their eyes..yaa its true first it was drama but now maan's word touch their heart now all understand what pain was going through maaneet when they heard about their sepration , they all knows maaneet affecting by last separation but they still afraid that someone might be separate them and they need to live without each other...

Darji sit on the couch with thud after hearing letter... mein aisa kaise kar sakta hu... meri bachi ki khushi se bad kar mere liye kuch bhi nahi... are uski ek muskurahat ke liye to mein saari duniya k khilaf ja sakta hu... par meine ye kya kiya uski smile chinne chala tha... nahi mein use duniya ki saari khushiyan dunga aur maan jo mera is ghar ka abhimaan hain usko dard dene jaa raha tha...

Darji lost in his thought when dadu come and put his hand on his shoulder... console him..

Darji – yash mujhse aur simi ji se ye Galati kaise ho gayi hum duniya walo ki khushi mein aapne bacho ki khusi lene chale the...nahi par ab aur nahi hum yahi rahenge...isi ghar mein jisko jo bolna hain bole mujhe isse koi fark nahi padta...

All were happy hearing this news... and then hugging and all...after everyone settle..they try to connect maan and geet but their cell is off...

Here in dream house... its 4 in the evening when geet open her eyes to see only most beautiful scene in front of her eyes... maan sleeping on couch on half lying position...he looks like a innocent kid with pout on his lip due to discomfortness, a beautiful smile crapt on her lip but soon it replaced with shock...how can be maan in my room and sleeping in couch... and shout..

Geet – maannn... maan get up jerk hear geet's shout... run to her worried what happen to her... why she is shouting.. and sit next to her...

Maan – what happen geet why ur shouting?????????

Geet – maan why ur sleeping in my room , what happen if anyone caught u here... what they thought about us haan...hey babaji ye maan na kuch samjhte hi nahi hain...dekho ab itne aaram se yaha beithe hain...geet blabbering continuously without seeing where she is... and maan enjoy her non stop bak bak... after sometime...

Maan (put his plam on her mouth) – chup bilkul chup... geet make baby face to him... pehle ye dekho kit um kaha ho...he said removing his plam from his mouth...

Geet look around and again shout – dream house mein...maan hum yaha kaise????????

Maan this time close his ears to save himself to be deaf hehehehehe😆

Maan irritatingly – geet stop shouting and listen... mein tumhe bhaaga ke laya hu???????

Geet almost get heart attack – what...

Next – geet reaction and what say make them come back soon or do some masti???????😕


fewww my ever longest update

but now i am nervous hope u all like my idea oopsss

maan's idea😆


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hahahaha i m laughing lyk hell while reading the update..awsome ipdate kya mast parents hai nd rano tooo gooddd..lolzzz dey r spending time in dreamhouse nd letter tooo emo..nd rano ka emo reaction lolzzz mast bolkul..loved it.nd geet reaction after knowing hahaha..update next soon

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