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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -padma-

waiting for the next part


you have to wait till Tuesday dear
i will update on Tuesday only
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
fabulous update
liked a lot
continue soon
waiting for more
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART-16

geet went away hearing those words

WHEN HE ENTERED THE ROOM HE SAW THERE WERE NO FLOWER ARRANGEMENTS GEET WAS STANDING NEAR THE WINDOW .. LOOKING AT THE FULL MOON ..SHE WAS WEARING A SIMPLE JEWELERY .. WEARING A SIMPLE SAREE

At one min he wants to go near her .. geet I married you whole heartedly …please we will forget about past about dev .. we will lead our life .. We will think about future

But at the same time he controlled his feelings how could he think like this .. geet approached him .. as last straw.. there was no options left for her other than marrying him, geet approached him for her safety ,..and freedom.. and now as a husband showing his right I cannot take her right and freedom ….how can she forget dev… once they thought of marrying .. may be she still cannot able to forgot dev…

At the same time geet saw maan was staring at her..

As if he was caught drooling on her.. he immediately adjusted himself…


Vo.. water… there is no water I think I will get them

Maan water is here… I will give..

Saying that she pour the water into the glass form the jug…

Maan was staring at geet.. there was no nervous or hesitation in her …

He was surprised …how could she be like this.. this is their first night .. every girl feel nervous about their first night but geet is looking very calm..

Maan took the pillow and blanket went the balcony which was attached to the room at one second he stopped and turned back towards geet

Geet I know you will face this problems for 2 days , after we go to Mumbai you will have your own room so there is no need to worry saying that he immediately left the place

Geet did not reply any thing ..

After 2 min she saw in the balcony the lights were off

Maan saw geet did not close door.. he felt relieved that at lest she believes in him

Geet quietly switched off the bed light , a lone tear escape from her eyes

Next day geet was in kitchen preparing the sweet dish and breakfast according to the custom

Maan was having his sip of black coffee , he was immersed himself in the paper, keeping one eye on geet , he was enjoying his glaring section, at the same time

Dadima settled beside him

Maan bte where are going for your honeymoon

Maan startled hearing those words , the sip of coffee has choked in his throat , making him cough

Maan beta are you okay..

At the same time he saw geet was arranging the plates and breakfast

He saw her face it was calm as usual.. how can she like that.. is she is not having any fear.. going out with him.. or she is thinking that he will solve all the problems

Maan beta what you are thinking .. and why are you staring at geet .. I just asked you when you are going for honeymoon..

Geet was not looking at him

Dadima vo.. I have lot work I will think about it later..

Geet beta you do not live him like that .. okay

Geet just nooded to her words s with a small smile..

Maan did not understand whether she is ready to go with him or not

Dadima has taken both the couple to the krisna mandir

She wants to take the blessing of the god after the marriage….

Maan thoughts drifted into the past how the last week has changed his life completely after meeting with the geet, he never thought he would meet geet like this.. and marry like this their encounter in the mandir that day…

Savitri devi started giving instruction maan after coming to know that they will be leaving tomorrow to Mumbai..

See maan you should come early from the office .. you should take care of gate..

Dadima first you tell me that .. me apka pota ye geet apka poti.. shaadi ke bad ap geet ko bahut support kar rahe hai

Geet jab maan tumko paresh kar rah hai to muje turant phone karlena teek hai

Geet was nodding her head

Geet do you think I am going to torture you.. geet nodded her head.in yes

What…

Nahi.. it is not like that



precape: maneet in mumbai

Edited by rsusmita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank guys for your lovely support and comments ...

please give your support and comments likes this only
i will pm all my stories later on
sorry for the dealy

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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely
Geet has a lot of trust on Maan
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update but too short😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update
precap is interesting
thanx for the pm dear
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 16
nice part...
shes just nodding her head for everything...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part..u said what maan feels..his attraction n wanting 2 move on with her..
but want 2 know about geets pov..y she is trusting him..or she wants to behave maan like her husband or not..
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part..u said what maan feels..his attraction n wanting 2 move on with her..
but want 2 know about geets pov..y she is trusting him..or she wants to behave maan like her husband or not..
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it will take time dear
you will be knowing geet feeling ...after some time
Edited by rsusmita - 12 years ago

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