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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
superb part i think bahut kuch fishy he
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
amazing part.
Feeling bad 4 dev.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Waiting 4 d mystry to b revealed
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Posted: 12 years ago
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why is Geet really behaving so...

Maan is getting irritated by all this...

but now suddenly Dev's death...

there is some mystery...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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whats the string between this..y geet behaving alien..n saying dev 2 be careful..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Awesome!

So dev died n marriage nevr happnd.
N moreover thr is so much of suspense btween geet n dev.

Plz conti soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the update
intresting precap
eager to see maaneet's relation starting
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
nice ff
continue soon waiting for next part...😛😊😊😊👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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updating one hour
anyone waiting for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART:5

It was accident, he was walking, truck in the opposite direction came and collided with him,

He is the the person who has brought him there

Sir, he IS walking , when suddenly a truck came and hit hi,, he fell down, there was blood all over , local tried to catch, the truck driver, but he fled, we immediately shifted him to the hospital ,

Maan immediately went inside THE ICU

He could see dev was sleeping very peacefully, HIS head was full covered with bandages

Maan went near him, he slowly hold his hands , ,

Dev came to his sense when maan holed his hands

Maan... Maan...he was gasping

Dev please be calm...nothing will happen to you..., I will not let anything to happen you

Maan I know ... my end is near...

His heart is beating very fast

Take care... take care of ...

Geet...vicky...

Saying that he fell down

He eyes were closed

Maan did not understand what happening, he immediately rushed calling doctor

Doctor came and examined

Sorry maan

He is no more

Maan became blank... How could this be

He could not digest the news

At the same time sekhar came

Maan sir I informed the dadima she will be coming in 3-4 house

I also sent a message to geet madam she in the farm house

Maan was nodding his head

He was blank.. he was feeling as if the world stopped before him

He remembered all those past incidents

Where he used to enjoy with dev

Dadima came she was crying falling on dev

I love dev... i was never angry on you, I want to to keep in discipline , I was never against you

Maan was hearing

He want to cry but he was not able to

Tears were not coming

He went mechanically and prepared the rituals

Over every thing is over,

Almost it is now 3 days over after dev death

Maan was in his room

At the same time nakul

Maan sir some one has come to meet you...

No nakul I do not want meet any one please sent them away

Without hearing his full words

He saw nakul came back again after 5 min

What nakul I told you already do not disturb me

No sir the madam went away, she gave this brief case to you

Madam

Ha sir she told her name is geet

Geet... Nakul why you did not tell me before that geet has come

But sir you did not listen to me fully

How could he do like this.. how many times dev told him to look after geet ..at his last stage also

The only 2 names geet and Vicky...

Who is this Vicky... I never heard this name...

There were no one in his friends whose name is Vicky

How could he forgot geet

What she would have thought about me

I was in my own ...

It my minimum courtesy to console her

She has no one here, to take care of her

His eyes went on the suitcase

He opened and saw the jewellery bua kai hai , dev ke mummy ka... the whole khadhani jewelery

Worth about more than 10 crores

Geet came here to return this, that means dev has operated the locker and gave her...

He immediately closed and rushed to go to the farm house to meet geet. But when he went there he saw there was no one in the farm house, security guard has told that madam has already left the farm house

How could I do this

Why did not contact geet

He immediately rushed to station , but could find her, he searched all the bus stations , but he could not find her

He immediately called detectives and gave the information , but he do not have her photos, which could have helped them

It was tenth day , relative have come for the puja which was held in the memory of dev

Maan I want to talk to you urgently

What happened lawyer , we can talk later, you are seeing no puja is going ,

maan after this puja you come I want to talk you

Maan could not understand why lawyer wants to talk to him like this

When he went to study room , he saw lawyer was waiting for him

What that urgency lawyer you could not wait until everyone left

Maan this is urgent

Tell me

Dev has written his will

What ...

Ha dev has written his will... The company which are now started by you in partnership of dev. you want were which dev was major share holder...

Was now in the name of geet

What ... Dev has written the will and I do not know that

Yes maan

How you know this

2 days back pathak has came to my office, he told that dev has come and has written this will, he told that he wants to disclose in your house before everyone but I managed him saying that I will first tell you first

Maan saw the date it was 1 month before his death

He remembered that day, he came suddenly to the house,

He was surprised

What dev , all of a sudden'

Ha maan muje anna pada ek kam keliye

I will go back in the evening

So soon

Ha maan but I will come back again with some good news but now I have to go back

Saying that he went away

That means that day dev has come for this will

He was in shock

Maan now dev has written his will, so all the shares and this all properties which were in the name of dev goes in the name of geet

Maan was not listening to his words

He was just staring at the will

Dev has not even once mentioned about the will

Maine itna paraya hogatha tha kya

Ye geet koun, dev ke jindage kab aiye

Dev itna trust karte hai ke usne sare shares inke naam karde

Geet... geet

Who came all of sudden in his life... Brought his life upside and down and vanished into thin air



precape: the search continues


friends thanks for your likes and comments




Edited by rsusmita - 12 years ago

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