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Posted: 12 years ago
take care...will be waiting for the update
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thanks your friends for your lovely support and comments


PART-20

At the same time her cell rings..

Yes I am coming'.. I know'. Do not worry , tell Vicky that I will be coming in 10 min,

At the she tried to stop but she was surprised when driver told maan sir had sent the car exclusively for her. and she must use this car'.

With no option left she stepped into the car' she saw one jeep was following with body guards'.

IT TOOK ALMOST 20 MIN WHEN THE CAR ENTERED THE ORPHANGE

Dev has started this orphanage with the help of his friends

There are almost 20-25 old persons, and 15 kids .

Mayuri, takes care of this orphanage . when she saw geet coming from the car.. she went near and hugged her

I was missing you lot geet' are waiting for you '..especially your vicky

Where is he .

Ha I know that '.i was also missing all of you

Seeing her coming everyone surrounded her

Geet what happned to you bahut din hogaye we are all missing you

At the same time she heard the voice'

Ma' ma'.3 years old kid he was running and coming towards her

Seeing voice she tuned around and saw vicky coming towards her

She immediately went and bend down on knees and hugged him' placing kiss on his cheeks

Maa.. where you gone.. I was missing you a lot.. please do not leave and go.. I missing you

Sorry vicky see now I came no.. I will not again

Promise'.

Pakaa promise okay '..

He did not leave her, for one second she played with him

She saw the watch , it is almost 8 she has to go house , maan will be waiting for her, but vicky .. she made him to eat something, and trying to make him sleep'

But he no mood to sleep seeing his mother after so many days '

Vicky why you do not sleep see it is already 8 you should sleep know..

Nahi iam not going to sleep'

If I sleep you will again go leaving me here

Hearing those words'.her heart became heavy hearing those words'.tears came out from her eyes

Nahi vicky I will never do that.. she from onwards I will stay here ..i will just go for job , see you are going for school no..

I have to earn money that , that is why I am doing job'.

She tried to explain him '

Sachi app muje chodokar nahi jayage'

Ha I will never leave and go.. pakka promise'

Tears came from her eyes seeing vicky like this

At the same mayuri came

Seeing mayuri geet immediately tried to wipe her tears'

Geet you cannot hide your tears from me'.

When you are planning to take vicky with you'.you know he cannot live without you

Ha mayuri , thanks for taking care of vicky '.from past few days

Do not tell like that geet' It a small thing I am doing comparing what dev done to me,, how much he helped me ' you know'

Ya I know .. thanks for sharing my responsibility'.which dev has given ,me..

It is not only your geet this is my responsibility also , to look after orphanage which dev has started

When maan called the house , he came to know that geet was not there in the house'it is almost 9 where she go' she is new to this place'

Oh god.. i do not know even her cell no

He tried to call the body guard..

He was shocked to the information that geet was in orphanage ..

He was relieved with the information that geet was started from orphanage and coming to home

Making vicky sleep geet quietly came from the place

It was almost 9 when geet entered the house she saw maan ws sitting quietly and doing his work

He did not ask any question

Vo'..

Geet hesitated for min how to start the conversation

Maan knows geet presence '.but did not lift his head, what will he ask ,where is went.. but he knows what geet told before marriage'. Her conditions for this marriage

He cannot come before her responsibilities'.

Hmm..geet tried to seek his attention

App ne khana khaye .

.no.. I was waiting for you

She was feeling guilty

I will arrange

Geet ..

She turned back hearing his voice

kuch nahi .. how to ask her cell no...

Geet could understand how much he was worried in her absence'

But what to do'

Vo'..

I know geet you have to take care of dev reposibitlites, I know I understand '

Saying that he left the place




please guys give your lovely comments and likes


small note

i know every one will shocked to see vicky as geet son...
what is the relation between geen and dev... will be revealed soon ...
ha please do not trash the image of geet that she playing with of emotions of maan
even geet is at pain which she will not show...n to others...
she faced lot of difficulties in her life.. which will revealed later on please have patience...






Edited by rsusmita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Vicky is geetand dev son loved the update
rsusmita thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
please guys give your lovely comments and likes


small note

i know every one will shocked to see vicky as geet son...
what is the relation between geen and dev... will be revealed soon ...
ha please do not trash the image of geet that she playing with of emotions of maan
even geet is at pain which she will not show...n to others...
she faced lot of difficulties in her life.. which will revealed later on please have patience...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Nyc part..
I think vicky is nt biological child of geet...
i jst think so...
Want to c maaneets relation growing..
rsusmita thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gill123

Vicky is geetand dev son loved the update



there is small suspense regarding this.. please wait and see
Hanishadevi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful update..waiting for past to revealed..pls cont soon..
-Gemini- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
poor vicky missing his mom.
pls reveal the suspense soon who is the father of vicky
will be waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
👏wonderful update..waiting for past to revealed..pls cont soon..

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