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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats dear
loved both the parts
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: dreamymishti88

Congrats dear
loved both the parts
continue soon




thanks dear for loving my story
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Posted: 12 years ago
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will start reading this one soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART:3

MAAN STARTED TO STARE THE GIRL, HE WAS SO LOST I N HER DEEP FISH LIKE EYES

Mr. who are you

Suddenly maan cam back into the sense

Dev' where is dev

He is not in the house , he went out side

He do not what to do.. he was in dilemma whether to go inside or not.

That girl was staring at him

Do you want to tell something ?

She was asking him

Oh actually dev has asked to me arrange a marriage and one pandit

App maan haina'..

Please come inside

But maan hesitated, to go inside

No I will come after wards

No..no..

If you do not come dev will surely will kill me '.dev was already was tensed up with the marriage , bechara '.she suddenly laughed

Maan lost in her smile, while she smiles a dimple form near her chin, making her more beautiful

Please come inside

No I will out side in the garden

Saying that he went away sitting in the lawn and lost in her thoughts

How she is looking very beautiful with simple

Who is this girl, I have to ask dev

Ji suniye

He came into this world hearing her sweet voice

Take this

He took the coffee mug from her hand

His hands slightly touched her fingers , giving him shivers in the spine

He do not but he want to hug, her crush her under his hug, wants take her lips into his' what happened to him why iam getting like this wild thoughts'

No I have to control myself, what is happening to me it is not that I have never seen any girl before '..

He was holding the cup and thinking of dev and sipped it , it was same as his taste

How this girl knows that I love black coffee

As if reading his thoughts

Dev told everything about , every time he talks about you

This is standard dialogue that everyone who ever meet him , tell this, that dev tell about him a lot

He was staring at her, her long hair, , he just loved her long hair

At the same they saw the main gate open and dev was coming

See dev has come

Hearing the foot steps

Manu when you came

Just now

At the same he took girl hands

Sorry misthy did you became bore

Ha I got very bore'.. pouting her lips I thought you will not come in this life time , with this bore ness I would have died , but this person has came and ringed the bell ,I told him to come inside but no he wants to sit outside

I have seen him sitting like budh bhaghavan , so I came here and disturbed him,

Dev was laughing the way she told

A slight smile came on the maan lips

Wait I will bring coffee for you

Saying that she went away

Thanks maanu you came ,

You met geet

Geet'..geet'..

Ha geet my wife'''..honewali hai' abhi tak nahi hui

Maan was shocked with dev words

That means , till now '''.

He got angry on himself he tightened his fists as if trying to control his anger

Maan did you tell to dadima about us

No geet, I was about to tell tonight

No maan please do not tell

Why dev , it is big thing , this is your marriage issue, how can I cannot tell that

Tell me first one thing

You were so much against marriage, but suddenly what is this, where you met geet why this sudden marriage

Maan I wan to tell you everything , but wait until this marriage, please I will tell you

See dev you never hide anything from me

But now because of this geet you are doing this

Maan please do think bad about geet , she is a good girl, you will know her,

Promise me that you will be always be there for her in support

What is this dev why you are talking like this

Do not tell about us to dadima

Why dev why are you angry on dadima

You know that maan she was reason for my father death

I do not want geet to suffer from her

Promise me that you will there for her

Why dev why are you talking like this, what are you thinking

now maan tell me about marriage preparations

ya tomorrow night your marriage will be there in temple as per your wish, I have talked to pandit

what about shopping, did you buy any thing for her saree, mangalsutra

NO maan I did not buy anything , you are there , so I thought we can go and buy

Okay it is already night we can go tomorrow and buy the bridal dress and mangalsutr, come we will go out side and eat something

At the same time geet came, 'no I will make dinner we can eat here

Yes maan geet is correct ,

But maan got angry with this

See you never was against my decisions, , abhi shaadi nahi hue aur tum uska side le raheo. He was just cribbing just like a small kid

Dev it is okay

Aisa nahi ki, ye bache ki tarah rona shuru hojayaga ,

Maan saw her with angry eyes,

Dev we will go fast, for dinner aisa nahi ki ye gusse se

muje kha jayega

dev tried to stop this tom and jerry fight

maan chalo we will go Punjabi dhaba , geet ko bahut pasad hai Punjabi khana

geet was surprised when maan has taken to some Italian restaurant

maan was seing her antics

she was talking to herself and

looking up

he did not understand , what she talking and why she is looking up

maan do not be shocked usko apni babaji se baat karne ki bahut shouk hai ,tab usko gussa ati hai to vo bahut jyada baat karti hai

maan could not understand the dev dialogues

he was thinking how can anyone talk like this

seeing maan immediately the hotel manger came and took their roof garden their fav place

geet became very calm,

maan gave menu card to geet and told her to order

she just ordered some salads and fruits

geet you can order, some thing to eat it is salads

no it it is okay muje ye kahssphoos khana muje nahi khana , okay i can adjust for I oneday ,

just then their order came

maan and dev have same fav 'pasta , spring rolls

geet please taste this,, I promise tomorrow I will take to place where you fav food is available

maan did not like dev, the way he is pampering geet but he controlled himself

, why dev is behaving like this, he was against marriage , he did not like this marriage concept, I do not know what this geet has done, dev has changed a lot

Rest of dinner they ate in silence

They come outside and started going ,

Slight drizzling has started ,maan stop the car please

Why geet , no you do not go out side you will catch cold

Please dev please, I want to please'.

seeing her like this

okay geet I gave up , I know you will convince me like this only, always you do like this only

maan just stop the car once

maan did not like this '. But he cannot the deny the words of dev, he immediately stopped the car, geet like a small kid , went out immediately and started drenching in the water

maan please take care of geet, she just like kid, she do not know have anyone on this world , other than us, even if iam there or not

why dev why are you talking like this, you are talking as if you are going somewhere and leaving her with me

do not know what the destiny maan but please take care of geet

suddenly there was thunderstorm, dev came out side of the car and staring at geet , until now geet was happy but what happened suddenly , she was lost some where

dev went near her

she immediately hugged dev and started crying

maan was seeing all this from the car,

he was feeling some uneasiness

he saw dev was consoling geet

he did not understand why geet was behaving like this , until now she was happy, but what happened to her suddenly



precape: marriage preparation wait for a twist for until next Tuesday

until then bye ... friends

Edited by rsusmita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update
oh no one week have to wait for the twist😭
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
nice part...
so geet is the girl...
bt y dev is talking like this?? kya use kuch honewala hai??
it confusing yaar...
kuch toh gadbad hai... dev n geet both r hiding sumthing from maan...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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there is some suspense...why is Dev saying again and again to Maan that take care of Geet when I am gone...

Maan is attracted to Geet...he is suffering from conflicting emotions...one way he don't like Dev and Geet's closeness and another way he don't like Dev is taking care of Geet's words more than his...his ego is getting hurt...

Maan to really ajeeb hai...dono ke liye jealous hai...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Amazing update😊

Eagerly waiting for the next update

Thankz for the pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey the update made me curious
what's in store next?
please continue soon
waiting with baited breath
that was a superb update
loved it

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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
so did the marriage happened?

and what happened to dev?

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