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PART:1
IT IS FEB MONTH
It is still one hour left for the sun to set
One car was speeding from the high way, but it controlled its speed after coming to the village limits
The person driving the car suddenly controlled his speed was enjoying the outside view, he switched of his ac, and took the car glasses down ,
The air is fresh, he feeling the fresh air, he took long breaths as if enjoying the fresh aroma ,
There were farm lands either side of the road, he could hear the temple bells ringing
The temple is situated on a small hill, ,some about 50-75 steps are there, he parked the car near the gate, and started the taking the steps, when he reached the hilltop,
He was lost in the scenic beauty, it was almost the time of sunset,there was small pond near the temple, first he went into the temple to take a quick darshan of Krishna
Pujari saw him, there, he took the arti tahli, and did arthi for the god,
Maan beta when you came from Mumbai
Abhi ,abhi...I did not go to house , I have to go
Everything is fine a maan beta
Ha pujariji...
He took arathi from the thali and went to sit near the pond
He loves that place, many memories are there attached to this place, he sat quietly as if enjoying the calmness and peaceful of the place he was there till the sun set and afterwards went down and started his journey towards the mansion
Savitri devi was pacing in the living room ,she was waiting for maan to come,
Seeing her, everyone feel like , she is leading her life happily, but they do not know the ups and downs of her life, losing her kids , at their young age, bringing up the grand sons , seeing the death of husband , when maan was hardly 20, when maan needed him most, taking care of the business, now maan became older enough to take care of the business, she is complete retirement from the business and settled in her ancestors house, first maan pressurized her to come to Mumbai and be with her, but she denied saying that she want to stay in that house where her husbands memories are filled , and she wants to die in the same house, where her husband had died, so maan used to for every 2-3 months to see her dadima , now her only aim in her life is maan marriage, at any cost she want her maan marriage
She has seen one nice girl for maan, in a marriage function, she immediately liked her , she has no one only chacha , chachi,she is having only one sister but she also died because of ill health , so she immediately called maan to come
Now she is waiting for maan to come
At the same one black car stopped near the gate
Maan entered the room ,
What happened dadima , everything is okay,
Nothing maan you have come see everything will right
But what dadima,, why you called me so urgently
Relax maan beta, just now you came you relax
kali di I want the coffee, I missed your black coffee,
maan beta go to your room , I will bring it
maan went to his room,he missed his room here,the fresh air coming from the windows, there was big swing in the balcony facing to the garden, he sat quietly on the swing , deeply thinking about something
at the same dadima entered the room she saw maan sitting quietly on the swing, she went there and gave coffeepot
what happened dadima, why you brought , kalidi is not there,
no maan beta, I want to talk to some thing that is why I called you here
I have taken one decision, I feel happy if you accept it
Tell me dadima, I will do it
See maan I fixed marriage , I will be marry that girl, I have selected for you
Hearing the word'.the cup in his hand slightly shivered
See maan the girl is very good, very beautiful, your pair will be good, she is best person in your life
But maan was not listening to her words, he was slowly sipping his coffee, as if enjoying it
Maan why you are not replying
What should I talk now, why you called me for this purpose, you would told this news in phone itself, why called me unnecessarily, you know how much busy I was , with work, i cancelled all my meeting for coming here
Work...work..., work can stop maan
This is also important work, it is about your life , if this alliance is fixed, you have to marry her
Then why you called me for this , you would have talked me on the phone, you would called me directly after fixing the date
I THOUGHT LIKE THAT ONLY BUT I WANT YOU SEE THE GIRL ONCE, YOU KNOW SHE IS VERY GOOD
Then why you called dadima, nakul take my car outside tell driver not to park in the shed I will go
Nakul'.nakul'
There was no reply from nakul
Nakul is not there
Why'. Where he went
I sent to girl house'..
To tell them that maan will come to see the girl
Suddenly maan felt very angry on his dadima, he sat on the bed not knowing what to do
I TOLD DADIMA, THERE IS NO NEED FOR ME TO SEE THE GIRL
But they want to see you,the girl has already seen your photo
The girl has already seen photo ,
who gave her my photo. Why' and how
I only gave the photo, she came to here, , I only invited them, she saw this photo, she pointed put the photo frame where maan and dev were standing dev was keeping his hand on maan shoulders, , she saw this photo, this room she liked that swing
Maan got irritated to that news, that some unknown girl has come into his room, and sat on his swing, he got more irritated, when dadima was unnecessarily giving the certificate that the girl is very good
Dadima why cannot you understand I have to develop our company, I cannot fulfill the responsibility of a husband now, why cannot you understand me
Dadima was feeling bad for his irritation, her eyes became moist with water
Seeing this maan really felt very bad, okay dadima thre is no need to go and see there, if you have photo I will see,
Dadima felt very happy listening to his words
Maan I will show you photo, she immediately open his bed drawer
Dadima what you are doing
Maan you asked the photo I am showing it ,
Dadima how could you keep other girls photo in my room
Maan was feeling irritated, how could dadima can keep a stranger photo in his room
I did not like her
What maan without seeing how can you tell that see, everyone will laugh at us, see how beautiful she is, if she stand s besides you will look like a perfect couples
Saying she was showed him photo
But was maan was in his mood he was not showing any interest in seeing photo he just throwed the photo on the bed
Seeing this mood of the maan dadima felt very bad,
She started to cry why maan , at least see the photo and tell the opinion why you are doing like this
At the same time , maan saw the photo lying on the bed, he ws shocked seeing her
My god what dadima is telling about her
Is this true or I am dreaming,for the last 2 years whom I am searching for is before him,
Dadima is still crying
He slowly went near her
Dadima ' he called her
Dadima how you know about this girl, where they stay
He is trying to control himself and behave normally before her
Sukanaya my friend you know her, , her grand daughter friend , she is her friend , I saw in her marrraige,
She lost her parents in her childhood, recently her sister also dies because of ill health, she is now al alone , she is searching for some job,
Maan do not reject her, she is good in every aspect and she is having all the qualities , what I thought
Dadima I do not want to hurt, but I have some problems
Seeing the photo
Okay dadima I will go and see the girl tomorrow
Dadima face lightened hearing these words
You know her name
Her name is geet' so nice name
You wait here maan I am bring something to eat, feeling very happy listening to his grandson words,
Maan was staring at the photo
From the last 2 years how he searched for her, even his lawyers could not trace her
He lay down on the bed , and was thinking
How he meet her and all of sudden she disappeared, in the thin air,
From the last 2 years how she hunted in his dreams, how his lawyers were searching for her ,but they could not trace her, she came and brought storms in his life and went away , how could she agree to marry him,
He is feeling irritated, angry and frustration on geet decision, he was staring at the geet photo
How could geet can take like this decision, after coming to this room, seeing his and dev photo ,he was restlessly moving on the bed
Geet. He still remembered the first day when he meet her
precape: past geet and maan first encounter
PART:2
HE STILL REMEMBERED THAT DAY WHEN HE MET HER
When he was in board meeting ,dev called him and told he will coming to Mumbai the next day and told him to arrange for good house to live
Maan lost in dev thoughts
Maan and dev were both cousins, his father and his mother were siblings,
Lekin bua did love marriage and went away from the house, both his grand parents became very angry for this ,especially dadima
When he was 10 years he remembered ,that day
Bua came back with dev ,his maa did a big issue for this, she cannot stay in this anymore , then dadima suggested them stay here and they took bua and dev to their village and settled in their ancestral house
In vacation he used go there and play with dev,
Dadima used pressurizes bua for remarriage, and never help to solve the couple misunderstanding, dev loves his dad very much , he knows that dadima does not loves his father, so always he tries to irritate her... not able to take pressure , bua took the extreme step of suicide
Dev father also died due to illness ,
There were no one take care of him other than dadima , do not why dev and dadima always used fight with each other, dev likes his father used friendly with each and every one, even he play with servants sons, which dadima never liked that, and always used to scold him,
dadaji used to shuttle between Mumbai and hoshirapur and take care of business
his mother (maan mother )always used busy with the kitty parties and
outings and dady was busy in expanding the business , when they are at at home most of time they used to argue
he only felt peace when he goes to his village, there he and dev used play a lot , he used to teach him how to climb the mango trees , how to do swimming in the rivers, both of them used to go the Krishna temple and stay there till sunset, a lot of memories were attached to this place ,
about 6 years back he also lost his parents in an accident it was major stroke for dadji, he tried to live fro us, he know dev will not help him business and he started training me, but after 3 years due to over stress dadji also died, but before that he made a will that everything will be divided in 2 parts between him and dev
but dev never got interested in the business he used some social work, and dadima was against it, due to this constant fighting ,
suddenly once he came to me
maan I am leaving the house , iam going
what dev what happened, see do not do like this , I have seen nice girl nanintara she is very good marry her,
dev laughed at this word
maan I can never marry, I cannot be under the control of some one, I do not believe in marriage, I have seen
see my parents did love marriage but what happened , a small misunderstanding, they left each other, and dadima never tried to clear misunderstanding, and what happened to your parents , even they married according to dadima wishes but what happened you know better me, seeing all this I lost hope in marriage and I want to be free from this bonding,and maan I am leaving the house and I do not want to stay with dadima any more
dev please do not do like this
no maan I have to leave, see even though I leave , will in touch with you , every day I will call you, other than you no one is there is for me
saying that dev left the office
once in while dev used to call him ,and ask to send money
when he used to send,
prmoptly dev used to reply
maan thanks very much, the money you have sent helped one girl
dev why are asking the money come here, the company is as much as yours, why are you are asking for 1-2000 thousand like that .. please come back hear
but dev never listened to him, he used to tell I do want , this company is yours, it is all your struggle and hard work, that company position is like this ,
he then opened a joint account in the both of their names and send credit cards In the name of dev.
Suddenly he received a call from the dev asking him to arrange a house , he will coming the next day and will be marrying and he has to arrange every thing
He was shocked listening to dev words, but as per dev he arranged the house ,
Next day maan became busy with the meeting so he asked his manger suraj to go and receive dev and take him to the farm house which is little bit far away from the city
When finished the meeting he saw suraj coming
Sir I received dev sir, sir along with him there is one girl also , she was looking very beautiful
Maan became very angry with this statement , do not why but he did not like suraj telling about her like that
Suraj immediately stopped seeing the maan glaring at him,
Sir as you have told I dropped them in farm house
Okay you leave
When maan finished all his work it is was almost night 8, meanwhile he saw his cell phone, there were almost 9-10 missed calls from dev,
Oh my god dev will sure will kill me, it is better from to go and meet him other wise he will definitely will come here and kill me
He don't why he was feeling some what restlessness in his heart when he was reaching the farm house,his heart beat was moving very fast ,
When he knocked the door , but no one has opened has opened, he asked the security ,any one there are not in the house
Sir I have seen the dev sir going out only madam is there , he hesitated ,he thought of going away, but he knows if he goes away dev will definitely scold him, so he gave up the plan and again tried knocking the door , but no one opened ,
He got frustrated
What the hell , what happened to the servants , or there no one here, what happened to that lady, is she is queen or want , cannot she take the door
He was about to knock the door, at the same time door opened by one lady
All his frustration has gone seeing her, I think so god has taken more time in creating her , he was not able to take his eyes from her , her cute lips, the big brown almond eyes, a very long hair almost touching her hips, his heart beat were increasing, this is the first time happened to him like this
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