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Posted: 12 years ago
omg...who iz behind these attacks...
btw awesome upd
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update!!!!!!
Loved it a lotzz :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 8
nice part...
cont soon...

PS - plz give the direct link for the updates in the pm...not the round about way to Geet era thread...this is the second time its happening...
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Posted: 12 years ago
friends thanks for lovely support and comments

i am able to update this Tues day but from the next week on wards , iam not able to do
iam going out of station for marriage, so if i get time there, , ican update there, if not wait till my return , will be missing you friends , but cannot help majbori hai ,
ha but i promise you that i will be going to start new , story soon , guys need your help , suggest me
would like to see maan sinch khurana as lawyer 😉 or a as usual a business man , tell me guys ,

okay i will stop my boring notes ,
will update now

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Posted: 12 years ago

PART:9

Maan felt shiver in his spine listening to her words

He observed geet , she has lost so weight, she became very pale, they formed dark circles under eyes,

GEET HOW COULD YOU THINK THAT I AM GOING TO MARRY YOU

Geet silently heard his words, her eyes were fixed on the water , the sun is setting slowly, the moon rays are falling in the pond, the scene is looking so beautiful

But it is not at all attracting to maan, he was getting irritated with geet behavior who is talking in riddles , she wants to marry because of dev'is she thinking marriage a game' marriage should be done if they both love each other , but on the basis of force or other obligations, but his thoughts were stopped by geet words

I know maan this marriage will not happen until you agree to this marriage , but what to do dev did not left option for me, he took a promise from me that anything happen to him I have approach you first , I should not talk to anyone about him

Geet did dev know that he is going to die

Yes

What '

He remembered that day when dev was going out telling him to drop geet, ,

Geet was telling dev to take care of himself

Then when dev knows that he has life threatening issues why he did not come near him, he never expressed any doubt on some one

Why dev why you did like this me ,

Me itna paraya hogya tha ki.. tumne ek bar bhi mere pass nahi aye, geet has became so close that you shared everything with her,

Maan feeling he was betrayed by dev

But he tried to controlled his feeling first he has to find out who are behind dev and why

And geet can only can give the answers

Maan for the last 2 years I tried to live myself, but I could not live,

Iam not worried about that I will die but 'as a women they are so many thing..

She stopped in the middle there was slight hesitation in her voice 'her voice was breaking'.as if she was controlling her tears to fall

Geet

I was attacked so many times'in the past 2 years, I could not sleep properly

I used to get blank calls, ..so I did not maintain cell

But it not stopped there.. I got small notes' that iwill be going to die

Once when in was coming from the work I was attacked but at the same one taxi driver saw this, he immediately took in to his taxi and drove back very fastly

I felt living alone is dangerous so I shifted to one pg

But there also..

One day I got message that some one came to meet me

When I went to receptionist I saw some were waiting there, I did not see him before, before I could talk to him, that person was trying to throw something on my face, with presence mind I immediately bend down, it was acid, before I could shout and seek attention the guy went away

Hearing these words maan became shocked

He do not know when he is taken geet hands into his hands

Geet when all this happened why you did not come near me

I felt so many days maan I want to come near to you and tell you everything, and do some job near but I feared, what if you do not believe me, what if any misunderstanding comes between us

What if you tell no to do the that works which dev as given the responsibility, that is why I kept quite

Hearing these words maan became irritated

He slowly left her hands

Geet how do you think that, after this marriage I will allow to take the responsibility which dev has given

that is why iam here before marriage I want to talk to you

before you accept this marriage I have some conditions

maan was staring at her as if she was alien

you should never come into my responsibility , at any cost I will fulfill my duties , which dev has given me , you should not interfere in my decisions , you should not try to control me,

if I don not agree with your conditions

simple the marriage will not work out,

geet marriage are done on conditions , what will you do when I do not agree to this marriage

simple I will leave this place , and try my luck in other places

geet everytime you are thinking about dev, why cannot you think about yourself'.

Will you be happy with his marriage

Maan I am very indebeted dev, I can do anything for him

Why should I do this geet

For the sake of dev ...dev is the reason

For me to come here

You every time dev used to tell about , you are his life , every time he used to talk about , listening to his words.. sometime I feel like seeing you talk to you'..suddenly she topped her words in the middle

Please do not talk about dev like'

Iam sorry geet , but you are not understanding problems and consequences you are going to face after this marriage

Iam ready to face it'.

I will promise you that , I will never bring any problems to you, I will never interferer inn your personal life

Maan was hearing to geet words

He has to agree this marriage for the sake of dev , dadima will also be happy, hearing this, with this marriage at least

geet will get the security

I do not much expectation from marriage, so it is better I accept this marriage

precape: marriage preparations

Edited by rsusmita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update...
Why can't geet tell maan what are dev's dreams...
Who are back of geet..
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Posted: 12 years ago



Maan is ready to marry Geet...

but who is after Geet...

thanx for pm...

I will miss this FF...

please update it when u get time...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update diii

finally geet told him something

i would like to see maan as business tycoon


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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part..marriage with conditions..but whats the relation between dev n geet,,something fishy...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part...
Bt still d mystery is on... Wat work geet is doing..?? N due to wat dev died..?? Aur geet k bare mai??
Chalo.marriage is fixed... Hopefully sab thik hoga

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