MG FF DEMON'S ANGEL Last Pt&Epilogue28/1/2013 P-98

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Posted: 14 years ago

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wow interesting dr...cont soon...👏

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its awsome yaar
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Desigirls12

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Wow lovely update..so my maan is rajkumar..oh i cant wait for next part dear..

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Priya21

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Purohit ji, hamare maan ko 25 ki ayu se phle aryanagar se bhar jana padenga. Wo nhi gya to geet se kaise milenga. Aur hum mahi mein mahi mahi ve kaise khenge.
Kyun @richa purohit ji

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divya22

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Wooo so finally the 1st part found his body... N he is none other than our maan.. Bt if it is pure soul den.hw did maan became cruel???
So 2nd will b our geet n after their milan dey will finish dat devil...

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nadira

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

oye jaan u r just wow
it's flawless
amazing
impressed jaan
mwahhh sweety

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Gurti_Maaneet

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Posted: 14 years ago

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*DEMON'S ANGEL*

PART - 3

ARYANAGAR celebrating d arrival of rajkumar. In ashram Gury Satya was busy in his meditation when Saint Prashant came to him. He came to informed him about the seed Guru Satya gave to him 9months ago.

PRASHANT:gusruji bahar chaliye apko kuch dikhana hai.

GURU SATYA:aap hume us podhe me pushp(flowrer) ko dikhna chahte hai na?hume gayat hai kal ratri k samy usme pehli baar pushp utpann(origin)hua hai.

PRASHANT(in tense voice):apka kathan(ur words)satya hai maha guru. Kintu...

SATYA:Kintu...jaise shabd ka tatprya ye hai ki apke mann me koi shanka(doubt)hai.

PRASHANT:maha guru aap swayam(at own) hi dekh le to achha hoga.

Prashant tuk him along with him. Both came outside of his hut. Guru Satya saw a pure white flower is origin on that plant...but wen he luked that closly a tense lines occured on his face. But he dont want 2 show it 2 his other saints so he coverup quickly.

SATYA:Prashant aap vayarth(yu hi) hi chinta kar rahe hai.aisi bhayebheet(being scared) hone wali koi baat nahi hai. Aap chinta na kare or jaiye havan ki vayvastha(arrangements) keejiye aaj bahut hi shubh samay hai.

Prashant follw his order but Guru Satya losse in deep thots.

SATYA(thot):is shwet(white) pushp k aane ka matlab hai ki atma k pehle bhag ka janam hua hai,kintu ye kale dhabbe(spots)kyu. Ye sahi nai hai.iska to ek hi arth hai us.jadui talwar ke katne se pavitr atma k na sirf do hisse ho gaye balki uski kali shaktiyo ka asar ab iske jeevan or vayktitv (personality) pe b padega. Iska shuddhikaran karna hoga. Wrna jis prayayojan(goal) hetu iska awhan(at request) kiya gaya hai wo vayarth(waste) chala jayega. Ab hume dusre hisse k janam ka intezar krna hoga.

He went for havan too and pray to god for being settle down all things. Slowly 2 time start passing. Second part is still in search of appropriate body. Finally that part too found correct body for its origin. On d other hands Maan strt growing too. He is very naughty and aggresive too. He is only 4 years old and dont listen to anyone. Only do the things which he likes to do. His parents are blind in his love so they enjoyed his wrong done tooo,and nevr scolds him for his any mistake.
After four years second part is born too. Sanatan called Guruji and show him a flower origin with d birth of Pure Soul's sec.part.

SANATAN:mahaguru ye dekhiye ispe kitna sunder or pyara pusp khila hai aaj subah hi.

Guru Satya hv sm tension again so he curiously saw it carefull from all sides. But his tense lines vanished instantly when he saw no black spot on dis one. A pure pink colourd flower seems so gentle and sweet.

SATYA(thot):iska arth ye hua ki pavitar atma k iss hisse pe us talwar ki kali chhaya(shadow) ka koi asar nahi hua hai. Ab is pavitr atma ka yahi bhag pehle bhag ko uska kartvya smaran(remember) karwayega. Aapka sanket main samjh gaya prabhu.

He take a deep thot then he summoned Kartik one of his student lived in aashram,and gave him a task.

KARTIK:par maha guru kya aisa karna uchit hoga?

SATYA:Kartik tume humpe sandeh(doubt) hai?

KARTIK:nai maha guru.

SATYA:to jaisa kaha hai waisa karo.

KARTIK:ji maha guru.

He went to follow his order.

In Aryanagar:
Maan was so happy and restless today. His mother trying all possible ways to convience him but he was not in mood of hearing her.

DIGVIJAY:kya baat hai maharani aap itni bechain kyu hai?

SUKANYA:maharaj bechain main nahi apka putr(son) hai. Pata nahi aaj subah se ki kuch alag se lag raha hai.

DIGVAJAY:ap yu hi chinta kar rahi hai. Kunwar abi sirf 4 varsh k hai. Or baalpan me to bachhe shrarte karte hi hai.

SUKANYA:whi to baat hai. Aaj isne koi shrart nahi ki bas kabi muskurane lagta hai or kabi yaha waha bhagne lagta hai,mano kuch dhoond raha ho.

DIGVIJAY:ap chinta mat keejiye hum baat karte hai apne putr se.

Digvijay went closer to him and scooped him in his arms.

DIGVIJAYA:Maan aaj aap khelne nai jayenge?(he noddded no) kyu bhala.

Maan saw his father wid his dark brown,restless eyes:mujhe wo chahiye.

DIGVIJAY:kya chaiye apko?

MAAN:wo jo meri hai.

DIGVIJAY:kintu kya apki hai?

Maan wriggled in his arms,so he freed him and Maan ran away...

SUKANYA tensly:dekha apne subah se aisi hi ajeeb ajeeb bate kar raha hai?or pata nahi kiske bare me bol raha hai.

DIGVIJAY:wo abi balak hai or bachhe to apni hi duniya me rehte hai.itna mat socho.aise hi koi swapn dekha hoga usne.tum itna pareshan mat ho.dekhna wo thodi der me pehle jaisa ho jayega.

Maan was soo restless today he ran in the garden...

MAAN:bahut jald main tume dhoond lunga...

Kartik return to the aashram.

SATYA:Kartik kaam saftapurvak hua ki nahi?

KARTIK:Jaisa apne kaha maine bilkul waisa hi kiya hai.

SATYA:theek hai ab tum jao.

He went out and Guru Satya again leaned in his meditation...

PART - 2

Edited by richa_kapoor - 14 years ago

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@jssood

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

hii richa very good update

continue soon next part

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Priya21

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Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Kya guruji. Apko ab pta chla. Maan ki atma pe us talwar ki chaya pdi thi. Jisse usme buraiyo ka utpan hoga. Bt dnt worry hamara gulabi phool hai na. Wo smbhal lenga.
Janu mja aa gya.