MG FF DEMON'S ANGEL Last Pt&Epilogue28/1/2013 P-98

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Dona

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loved the concept

awesome update

cont soon...

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Oh ho two body chaiye. Koi nhi maan n geet ka janm hone wala h. Maaneet bnke wo wapas ek soul bn jayenge guru ji. Geet ke achaiya maan ki buraiyo ko achaiyo me bdal hi dengi. Kya khti hai guru @richa ji.

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Ofcourse jaanu...dekh unke milan ka indication to maine de diya hai;)

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wow😃

ist part is coming and it is super

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wow lovely ud dr so yeh thodi 1st century BC ki katha hai very gud dr...👏

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#26

awesome start
continue soon
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divya22

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Woo intresting...
Whole concept is different n alag...
Now wo souls kise dundhegi???
M eagerly waiting to no ki maaneet is mai kya role play karenge...

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GoldGlitterati

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Hey its nice I'm loving the mythological things in it ... plz continue and thanks 4 pm .❤️

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Wow mindblowing concept

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*DEMON'S ANGEL*

PART - 2

GURU SATYA vanished wid their ashram leaving Pure Soul behind. Dey leave d whole decision on Soul's own wish. The PURE SOUL travelled 4 many years in search of body... Finally the bigger nd restless part found a body and dis part entered in her womb. She was none other then d queen of Aryanagar named Sukanya,wife of Digvijay. She was sleeping wen SOUL'S part 1 enterd in her womb. As its entered in her she awked wid a jerk. Due 2 whch king Digvijay was awaked too.

DIGVIJAY:kya hua maharani aap aise achanak se...

SUKANYA:maharaj pata nai achank ye kuchh alag 2 sa aabhas(feel) ho rha hai.jaise kuch hua ho.

DIGVIJAY:apne avashye hi koi swapn(dream) dekha hoga.chinta(tension) mat keejiye or so jaiye.

Both slept calmly and Guru Satya awaked suddnly.

SAINT PRASHANT:gurudev kya hua aap aise achanak uth kyu gaye?

GURU SATYA:aaj aaksh me bahut hulchal hai Prashant.

PRASHANT:arthat?(means)

SATYA:sitaro ko dekho wo kis or ishara kr rahe hai. Prashant pratah kaal(early morng) is beej(seed) ko
bo dena.

Satya gave one seed in hs hand.He look at d sky and tryng to read dem.

SATYA(thot):aaj pavitr aatma k pehle bhag ko shareer mil gaya hai or jald hi unka janam hoga.

Guru Satya tied his hands and pray 2 god. He closed his eyes and sleep again. After few days later maharani Sukanya felt strange uneasyness in her body. Digvijay summoned raj vady(doc). He cm and examined her properly. After his examine complete he gave report to Digvijay.

DIGVIJAY:kya baat hai vaidji? Sab theek to hai na?

Vaid:ji maharaj sab theek hai.ya yu kahu ki apke or is rajya k liye 1 shub samachar(news) hai.

DIGVIJAY:shub samachar?

VAID:ji maharaj maharani ji maa banne wali hai.

A huge grinned came on hs face. He cant express in words.

DIGVIJAY:Aap sach keh rahe hai vaidji.

VAID:ji maharaj into varsho baa ab apka or is rajya ka swapn pura hone ka samy aa gaya hai.

DIGVIJAY:hum bta nai skte aaj hum kitne prasnn(happy)hai.

Digvijay gave him lot of money fr giving hm such a good news. He went 2 Sukanya. She was sat on their bed. Her al personal servants leave her sawing Maharaj. Digvijay came,sat near her and hugged his wife.

DIGVIJAY:aaj hm bahut prasann hai.akhir ishwar(god) ne itne varsho(years) k baad humari parthna sweekar(aceept) kar li.ab is rajay ko uska utradhikari(would b king) milega.

SUKANYA:apne sahi kaha maharaj ab hume koi chinta nai hai.akhir ab is Rajya ko uska bhavi maharj milega.

Days start passing. And d seed whch Guru Satya gave 2 saint Prashant was str growing lyk Sukanya's baby bump. Finaly a day of baby's birth came. Maharani Sukanya was crying in pain alot. Daima came for delivary. After dealing wid dis difficult process she gave birth to a baby boy. One of her dasi(servant) ran to Digvijay to gave dis good news to Maharaj.

Dasi:maharaj badai ho maharani ji ne putr ko janam dia hai.

He was overwhelmed wid dis news.nd gave many jwels to her. And ran to her room. Daima washed d baby nd wrapped him in a soft silk cloth piece nd gave him to Digvijay's arm. Baby looks so cute wid sharp features having angelic glow on his face,very active and cycling his legs conti.in Digvijay's arms. He kissed on his forhead and sat near her.

DIGVIJAY:badhai ho maharani or apka shukriya b jo apne itna pyar rajkumar humare rajy ko diya hai.

He kissed on her forhead. Meanwhile baby strt crying and Digvijay passd him to his mother. Sukanya hold him in hs arms nd Digvijay leaved dem alone. As he start cryng a lightining spark occured in sky evrywhere. And d meditation of Takshak broked. His eyes opnd suddnly wid d thunder sound. It feels lyk his whole palace is trembling. All lamps turned off instantly. Takshak shouts.

TAKSHAK:kapali ye sab garjan kaisa?

KAPALI SCARED:pta nai maharaj lekin aap chinta mat keejiye main pta laga lunga.

TAKSHAK:jante ho is bhuchal ki wajah se humhara dhyan bhang ho gaya hai.

KAPALI;shama(sorry) keejiye maharaj lekin aisa ddobara nai hoga.main abi pta krta hu kya bat hai.

He leave and Takshak leaned in hs meditation again. He searched but found nothing. Next day Digvijay organised a grand fun in honour of prince's arrival. He gav mny gifts to d people of Aryanagar. All blessed deir would b king. Raj purohitji came nd do havan 4 him and made his kundali and named him.

DIGVIJAY:purohitji to kaisa hai bhagye humare nanhe rajkumar ka.

PUROHIT:apke rajkumar ki kundali maine bana li hai or uske anusar inka naam hoga..."MAAN". Rajkumar Maan. Or jaisa inka naam hai waise hi ye khud b honge. Har vidya me nipun(expert). Koi dushman inko jeet nai payega. Kintu...

DIGVIJAY:kya hua purohitji aap ruk kyu gaye?

PUROHITJI:kintu maharaj 25 varsh ki aayu me inke parno pe sankt hai.yadi wo samay nikal gaya to firr ye ek lamba or vaibhavshali(graceful) jeevan jeeyenge.

Listen to dis His parents scared alot for his saftey.

DIGVIJAY:iska koi to upaye hoga?

PUROHITJI:25 varsh se pehle Yuvraj ko Aryanagar ki seema se durr na jane de.

Purohit do tilak on his4head and baby smiles...

PART - 1 PART - 3

Edited by richa_kapoor - 14 years ago