MG FF DEMON'S ANGEL Last Pt&Epilogue28/1/2013 P-98

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*DEMON'S ANGEL*

PART - 1

ITS a tale abot d dual runing btwn d Good and Evil. A long time ago dere was an evil king named Takshak earn sam black magical powers in greedyness of earning pwer 2 overruled d Whole World. He do worship of Evil spirit. Evil Spirit occured in front of him nd blessed him wid hs evil powers and magic. Spirit gv hm a Black Sword whch is d mst powerful sword in the whole world. Takshak grinned mishcheviously. Hs greedy thots now going 2 b fullfilled. Bt Evil Spirit also wnt smthng in return. So Takshak surrender hs soul 2 hm.Only once in a year hs soul cm in hs body. Now he ws only a dead body,d most pwerful dead body who can do anything,bt no1 can kills him as he is alredy dead. Only once in a year he bcm human being when his soul again cm in his body. By dis he bcm "Amar"(who die never). Evil spirit disapper. Takshak laughd in crulty. He bcm more powrful and stronger. No one is able to compete wid hm. He over ruled many kingdoms...with evry passing day his torture mannr increased. He distruct d humanity under hs feet. There was a moarn all around on earth. Weakr choped miserably. Many surredr to save themselves. One day he was on is victory tour. One saint was leaned in his worship mudra(form). Takshak bcm angry to c hm. He kicked him badly. Saint was so powerful and he cursed him coz of his oinsane action,dat very soon he got punishment for his all sins. But Takshak was mad in his pwer and dont take him seriously and laughed on him. Saint's anger towered so he cursed him again dat from now he can not able 2 enter in d east zone... Aftr giving hm curse. He read som mantras and d body of saint destoyes immediately and converted into a 5 beam light balls and all leaned in differnt zones of nature. He take his words lightly and tryng to enter in east zone to win over the Kingdoms of that zone. But as his horse trying to enter a strong stroam came and obstruct his and his men's way. His all force included him not able to cross d way. The whole boundry lightentd wid fire except to take step bak he had no other option. He return to Sunargarh,his kingdom. He is fuming badly. Kapali 1 of hs spl man suggest hm to delighted d Evil spirit again. He follwed hs idea and again indulge in worshipping Evil spirit.
D saint died 2ay was d main head saint of the bunch of white saints. They are 7 in no.all othr got 2 know abot his mukti(self distruct). His seat cant b left empty so with evryone's decision day choose Guru Satya as their new head. Guru Satya hold his position in hs absence. Now he had a responsibility of stopping Takshak and his evil thots to save d humanity. Guru Satya knows dat Takshak must find d way to enter in East zone very soon. So he has 2 find d permanent sol of his end. First they find 1more saint to complete d bunch of 7. And wen he found him,Guru Satya organise a huge Havan,in which all 7 saint sits and do d mantr uchharan conti,for next 10 days widout stoping fr once. Finally they blessd wid a pure white soul,which appered to save d world frm Takshak.

Saint Dhritanj:Guru ji ye atma to utpann(aroused) hogai hai kintu(but)ise ek shreer ki b avshyakta(need) padegi.

Guru Satya:apne sahi kaha hume isi Havan se is pavitr(heavnly pure) atma k liye 1 shreer ka nirman(constuctio) karna hoga.

All again strted a Havan to construct body for dis heavenly soul who came on earth to kill Takhak and his crueality. But news of dis Havan was reached in ears of Kapali. He tuk his master's black sword and reached to d ashram to distroy all dis to save his master as he was in his dhyan(meditation). Kapali tuk his evil force and attack on d Havan. All d men,women nd kids useto lived in ashram attacked by Kapali nd his force. All r running fr deir lives. He distruct d havan. Guru satya and his saints leave d Havan 2 save d othrs nd foughht wid him. In dis fight Kapali attack d pure Soul wid Takshak's black sword,due 2 whch d soul divided in2 2 parts. A strong blast occured and soul cnvrted in2 a 2 light balls nd ran in diffrent directions. Due dis blast Kapali get feared and escaped wid his men.

Saint Sanatan:ye kya ho gaya Guruji. Wo pavitr atma to nasht ho gai.

Guru Satya:nai Santan wo nasht(destroy) nai hui hai.bas do hisso me bat gai hai or alg ho gai hai.

Sanatan:to ab hm kya kare?

Satya:is samy wo pavitr atma bhatak gai hai,shreer na milne k karan. Ab wo sawaym(by itself) apne shreer ka chunav karegi.

Saint Dikhshant:lekin guruji wo ab do me bat gai hai iska matlab ab use do shreero ki avshyakta padegi.

Satya:ha or hume us do shareeo k mian tak rukna padega.jab wo do shrrer milenge tab is atama ko apne asli kartvye ka gyan hoga. Kintu abi hume ye sthan chhodna hoga(we have 2 leave dis place)ab ye jagah surakshit(safe) nai hai. Kapali kabi b aa skta hai.

Guru Satya read some mantras and d whole asram disappered wid all d people lived dere.

The Pure Soul travelng here nd dere in search of a body. His biggest part ws vry fast nd restles,while d smallr part is vry calm nd cmposed..

PART - 2

Edited by richa_kapoor - 13 years ago