Originally posted by: SwaRon911
YES. And Rafi would reach into her screen and Cyber-maul you if you had killed off her Dear Girl in previous chapter. I dont get u FF writers. HOW do you have the heart to do so !? 😒 and YESSS .. SwaRon deserve NO less than a Fairytale ending .. wait scratch the ENDING bit . They deserve a FAIRYTALE and thats that. Cuz THATS how beautiful they are . ☺️ ☺️
I loved the heaven and hell analogy. As absurd as it sounds in prose, you know you needn't die to find your place in heaven. Heaven is after all a concept ... and to have someone love and care for you .. the way Swayam does for Sharon ... its pretty much synonymous no ? At least the Swayam in your SS .. And to have hurt the very same guy the way Sharon did ... it should hurt no less than hell .. nope. That just wouldnt be fair.
So he brought her back from the Dead ? Now the absurdity of it all .. ONLY makes sense because the people involved are Swayam and Sharon. Only Swayam .. invincible and unconditional in his love for her .. something that's almost akin to .. worship .. could pull something like that off. Because as we know ... devotion moves the Gods ... toh phir Sharon kya cheez hai ?!
And his heart started to beat again ? I am sure it did. :))
I am going to come back and read this ... again ..because thats how happy it makes me .. evertime .. I read the paragraph wherein u describe The sheer JOY ... and RELIEF that washes over him when he discovers he hadnt lost her ... I think I felt it. Yeah. 😳
Ahhh .. now I am FINALLY done commenting on all of ur stuff !! 😎 I think .. 🤔
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