Swaron SS: A Single Moment - Page 21

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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing ⭐️ And beautiful ❤️
Perfect ending too 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
yeah a nice ending thanks a lot it was amazing
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww. Sweet. Got to love happy endings :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Eeehhh!!!!! That was super cute! LOVED it! Awesomiee!! The SS was just just, I can't even explain! I'm speechless and I think it's first time EVER! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
such a lovely ending
luved it to the core
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Posted: 13 years ago
now thts is one perfect ending...
as they say if it's not happy make sure it's not ending😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb endin deary...it was a treat to read ths..loved the last part too...
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Posted: 13 years ago
its really emotional n touchy dea...
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was brilliant, the whole ss well written and beautiful. I love whatever you write, though I might not comment often but really everything you write seems real. I hate cheesy and mushy stuff too but that wasn't it, that was real, how actually people feel and any rational person would react. You can relate to the characters actually feel the emotions that is what makes your writing always worth reading again and again.
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Posted: 13 years ago

YES. And Rafi would reach into her screen and Cyber-maul you if you had killed off her Dear Girl in previous chapter. I dont get u FF writers. HOW do you have the heart to do so !? 😒 and YESSS .. SwaRon deserve NO less than a Fairytale ending .. wait scratch the ENDING bit . They deserve a FAIRYTALE and thats that. Cuz THATS how beautiful they are . ☺️ ☺️

I loved the heaven and hell analogy. As absurd as it sounds in prose, you know you needn't die to find your place in heaven. Heaven is after all a concept ... and to have someone love and care for you .. the way Swayam does for Sharon ... its pretty much synonymous no ? At least the Swayam in your SS .. And to have hurt the very same guy the way Sharon did ... it should hurt no less than hell .. nope. That just wouldnt be fair.

So he brought her back from the Dead ? Now the absurdity of it all .. ONLY makes sense because the people involved are Swayam and Sharon. Only Swayam .. invincible and unconditional in his love for her .. something that's almost akin to .. worship .. could pull something like that off. Because as we know ... devotion moves the Gods ... toh phir Sharon kya cheez hai ?!

And his heart started to beat again ? I am sure it did. :))

I am going to come back and read this ... again ..because thats how happy it makes me .. evertime .. I read the paragraph wherein u describe The sheer JOY ... and RELIEF that washes over him when he discovers he hadnt lost her ... I think I felt it. Yeah. 😳


Ahhh .. now I am FINALLY done commenting on all of ur stuff !! 😎 I think .. 🤔

Edited by SwaRon911 - 13 years ago

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