SwaRon OS - I'm With You - Page 5

Originally posted by: AmritaluvSwaRon

Aww i loved it... beautifully written pree. Loved how dey are so attached to each other kaash if 50% show main bhi dikhta. I could feel dere emotions while reading. Keep them coming...and thank you for PM. 😊

Originally posted by: doc42

I literally feel like hugging you after reading this. this was so cutely written, the whole idea of being close yet apart.

An emotionally rich OS - very straight, nothing complicated abt the story but still heavily laden with the bond that they share...I culd relate to Swayam & Sharon here - their hesitation to let go of the other - the need to reassure the other that they are always gonna b with them - the proposal was beautifully done😊 ...these lines defined the OS for me --- "I'm taking everything of yours with me." She said as she came closer and entwined her fingers in his. "Even you."

Originally posted by: Sawyer_Tom

Ahh Pree. Was wondering when I would see another of your brilliant works again. Was actually eagerly waiting for it. So just imagine my pleasant surprise.

You know, you are one of those writers who believe in giving the SwaRon story every kind of angle, be it happy or tragic, that life can bestow upon them. And each of your works is fantastically different from it's predecessor. Each of your stories is unique in it's own way as you make SwaRon go through anything and everything. And you already know how much I love the tragic element you embed in each one of them.

So Sharon is going away for three months and this OS deals with their reactions and emotions as they part ways, even if it's for a little while. Beautifully written, I must say. It's good to see that they support each other and I loved the fact that Swayam didn't ask her even once to stay. That is so Swayam. And I'm also happy that he didn't go into depression after she left. That would have seriously sucked. It was one of the sweetest OS that I've read till now and all credit goes to you and you blessed writing skills. Do keep writing more. Needless to say, I'm eagerly waiting for your next brilliant piece of work.

Originally posted by: meevee

An emotionally rich OS - very straight, nothing complicated abt the story but still heavily laden with the bond that they share...I culd relate to Swayam & Sharon here - their hesitation to let go of the other - the need to reassure the other that they are always gonna b with them - the proposal was beautifully done😊 ...these lines defined the OS for me --- "I'm taking everything of yours with me." She said as she came closer and entwined her fingers in his. "Even you."

Originally posted by: Sheherzade

En!!! Darling I was really heart broken when I didn't see your comment on this OS right away!

But now that you're here... I'm better!!

I love taking SwaRon around for a little ride in my brain. Each of my work is different from each other because they are written at different times and during different mindsets. Recently I'm in a kind of tragedy rehab. I'm trying to abstain from writing SwaRon tragedy because I have kinda accumulate all that talent for a non SwaRon story of mine! Sorry to disappoint you!

Yes it's true Swayam, the man who knows how much your dreams mean to you. He'll no go into depression, cos she ain't dead! You wanna read depressed Swayam, go read Last Dance again! 😆

Thanks!

Now that was a really cute OS! sad to hona hi tha! :P but vese bohot improvement he though likhne me u are like a master so, isse badi tareef aur Kya hogi! Bowing Down! This was amazing!! Loved it! :D

loved it dr...
nice os...
done a great job n pls continue like this way...