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Posted: 13 years ago
Itz jst beautiful! !!. U r awesome. N poor maan. loves geet so much. !
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Posted: 13 years ago
MAAN HAD STARTED THE RUMOURS EARLIER, SO HE HAS NO ONE TO BLAME IF THEY SURFACE AGAIN
HE MAY HAVE LOVED HER, BUT GETTING HER IN THIS WAY WAS WRONG AND HE HAS TO PAY FOR IT
SHE MAY LOVE HIM NOW, BUT CANT FORGET THE PAST BETRAYAL
BUT WILL DESTROYING HIS COMPANY MAKE HER HAPPY AND FULFILL HER DESIRE FOR REVENGE
IT WILL JUST TEAR THEM APART

I FIND THEIR RELATION TOO COMPLICATED AND THEIR STORY TOO SAD
Edited by punam2712 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
fabulous update..
Maan is breaking down completely but no kind of punishment will justify his deeds..
Poor Geet.. even though she is set through to take her revenge.. she is hurting inside .. she feels his pain.. but history is repeating itself.. waiting to see what Geet does.. wonderful update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sanjana:

Brilliant update as always! Hats off to you for developing this story in such a way that the present mirrors the past so closely but in role reversal!!!!

History repeating itself in a twisted manner and they are both burning from its effects!

Every time I read your update, it fires me up to such a restless, anxious, anticipatory state that I have a hard time focusing on my normal routine till the next update arrives from your keyboard!!

When o, when will this dance of destruction that Geet has mounted will spend itself and the relationship start to move towards redemption, forgiveness, love... Till such time, I am consoling myself by reading and re-reading your other fabulous FF -- LIMITLESS.


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Posted: 13 years ago
your updates always leave me pining for more
the update was fantastic as usual
both are suffering
though geet maintains a calm demeanor yet nobody can deny the inner turmoil and whirlwind of emotions playing havoc within her everytime she is around MAAN
in her bid to punish Maan for his past deeds she herself is getting punished
Maan on the other side is suffering no less and experiencing a pain that cant be felt by no one but him for losing his beloved.
though his actions in the past were wrong yet everytime you read him or his POV in the update you feel his pain his agony, his despair and his helplessness.
i sympathize with him, rather pity him
will wait for more
continue soon
its getting interesting
especially the sneak peek you provide us with about their past it makes me hungry for more
and leave me wondering as to what had happened in the past that such a beautiful relation turned so bitter!

Edited by doublecross - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Read so many parts together...

Great going...

So she is planning to destroy him economically...

Revenge wil be over by this, his ego will be hurt but then what... will she be able to see him going week if she loves him...

As now she is in mood of revenge but once the revenge is done, once he falls down she will be free by the feel of him cheating on her as she has been done with her revenge...

And then there will only be love and a destryed Maan... How will she handle... I want to see that... I don't know if this is the story but my mind is going this way...

Also, she had asked him to free him... I think Maan should give her her freedom and if she loves him really she will be back... the problem here is Maan is holding tight on her... he should loosen, set her free and then if she comes back, she is all his. If he keeps doing this way, she will never be his...

Great story... loving it.

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Posted: 13 years ago
😲 so that's how things worked out!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey sanju!!
I hope i cn cal u dat..?? Waise i jst reach to dis part & once again lyk oder 2 ffs of urs... it also bolwed me completely... Its amazing bt i thnk at d end geet wud understnd dat sumwhere she even luv him to even make her fall 4 him & to d edge he hd gone jst to get her luv though it doesnt justify his act bt stil i cant hate him becoz of d amnt of luv he have 4 her & same goes 4 geet... & i jst hope dey understnd it soon... Plzz cont soon waiting...:-):-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
TEASER:

"You only give pain…..you are a burden" The words that had he been told as a kid hit back at him, reminding him that he was made on a legacy of pain. His chacha's words echoed in his heart, never letting him forget that he was unworthy of happiness. Yet he couldn't give up Geet, let her get away but more importantly he needed to help her. After all it was his own actions that led to this.

"No" Geet's voice was soft, yet held iron in them, "I won't let you marry me just because of the scandal. I won't let you ruin yourself to protect me. Where is honour in hiding behind others?"

Maan opened his mouth to say that she was to be his making, not his ruin and that he would give up his life just for a moment to call her his.

But before he could speak it was Mohinder who spoke, "No Geet, this is the best option."

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maan-ki-sanjana

<div align="center"><font size="3"><font color="#FF0000">TEASER:</font></font>


"You only give pain…..you
are a burden"
The words that had he been told as a kid hit back at him, reminding
him that he was made on a legacy of pain. His chacha's words echoed in his
heart, never letting him forget that he was unworthy of happiness. Yet he
couldn't give up Geet, let her get away but more importantly he needed to help
her. After all it was his own actions that led to this.



"No" Geet's voice was soft, yet held iron in them, "I won't
let you marry me just because of the scandal. I won't let you ruin yourself to
protect me. Where is honour in hiding behind others?"



Maan opened his mouth to say that she was to be his making,
not his ruin and that he would give up his life just for a moment to call her
his.



But before he could speak it was Mohinder who spoke, "No
Geet, this is the best option."

</div>


nice teasor.
Waiting to knw more abt past.

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