FF: Almost lovers (4): New thread link Pg 1 - Page 67

This is from past...it seems he had troubled past...

Sanju,I suggest u grab coke n snacks before you start reading this comment-rant!!
*grabs a pillow and makes herself comfortable*
So,I have been meaning to read this one since i read limitless but khotta office leaves me with no time! I am not well,so had taken a day off n hence i read this in a go :-D
To say i was hooked would be an understatement
I think i have said this earlier too but i reiterate the compliment; the best thing abt you writing for me is your rase of transitiin between the pazt n the presdnt. Very fewwriters have it n you are one of them.

Now,the story is diffefent n intrivui.b as well as absorbing due to the intensity of the emotions of the characters.
Maan n Geet'slove-limitless in the true sense:iys both the balm n the wound.
Thd story is at a very interdzting point. The e tremely strong willed Geet is on the brink of destroying him n in turn,herself. While there isnt a doubt abt hher capability to do it;is the flame of revenge;however all -consuming it seems,strong enough to ovdrpower the fire of love that burns hdr? I believe not!

Reading the last updated part i was 100% sure that Maan would give her up coz he thinks thats what she really wants but the bevinning of ur teaser has left me confused. But,i do continue to believe that his love for her is strongr than his obsession with her.




Their love forces me to write something,i guess it will be Geet's POV,though i cant be sure till i write n after that u could guess!
Also,all this is thru phone so i m sure there are millions of typos. i apologise for them.


I am burnt,
Both by your love and IN your love.

I am dead,
Its you who killed me,yet its you who keep me alive somewhere.

I am broken
Shattered like glass that you have trampled by your ego,
Yet its the sea of humility of your love hidden in the ocean of your arrogance that cushions my wounds.

Your presence closeby is physical pain,
For all that i have lost
yet its the most soothing balm,for without you what could i gain
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I want to destroy you
For all that you have done to me
Yet it will destroy me
For in doing all that,you made me your own somewhere


I will lose you
But how does it matter,
For i have already lost myself within you.


I tell you i want to walk away
In my heart i add,
Without you i will simply throw my self away.

great teaser

The teaser made me sad! It hurts to think that Maan's childhood was a harsh one! I'm not surprised that now that he's grown up, he wants to have everything work out in his own way.

Love Geet's strong-headedness! Thanks for the PM.

Update soon.

Just caught up. Superb story. Seems like we'll soon get to know how geet decides on her vengence.

...waiting...

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

WOOOHOOO

So thats the reason!

And now Geet thinks this was his plan too...well i did learn the story of the boy who cried WOLF a bit too often...

Sadly such is life..

Maan played his game...but destiny is a bigger player

So u mean to say thats how Maan redemmed Mohinders company? what about that dream project? Plz tell me it got started again..

ANDDD how come RANO makes an entry in this update?

u told me mommy is fishy🤓

Sauts, I can't give things away 😉
Maan's own actions resulted in this...but sometimes we lose control and our actions no longer govern the situation

Rano, well I might have lied😉