Love at Topaz-RTMC ss part-2 page-3

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Shreya

@sparksfly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

hey !!

thnx 4 strtng RTMC ss !! conzos !!

i lik d story ...n cb buks 2 !!

nicely writtten...luv d italiscd lines !!!

uve wrtn d story in ur own way...its refrshng !!

aww...hes bunkng class 4 her !!

eagrly w8ng 4 freshers party !!

do continue soon !!

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dhwanimehta23

@dhwanimehta23

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

nice update!!!!
Continue Soon!!!!!😛😛😛

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Mayuri Dev

@mddmayuri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

hey ruchi...sorry for not commenting earlier...

bt wonderful uds...i read both d parts...n i luved it...⭐️

poor boy...he scarifies his rosgulla for her...

bt luved d way u mentioned his emotional state after their ' just friends' deal... 😆

n mom n son convo was too good...👍🏼

nandini is in dance competition ...n he is bunking his classes only to be with her...awww😳

bt slipper part was hilarious😆

awesome parts

ud soon

luv u

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

Yeah you are right...CB is such a great writer and his stories always too realistic...thanks for liking it and about U&F i'll update it by this saturday😃 thanks so much🤗

thanx a lot for giving me the time line for U&F 🤗 🤗 , nd all the stories of CB r just fab, I have read all his books , nd I m waiting for saturday

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shruja

@shruja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

superb update as usual!!
hehehe he was walking like lion in corridor!! feeling others jealous!!
poor roby din't have money even to purchase stamp paper
good at least he saved from deal giving on stamp paper!!
ohh how can mom smell butter chicken!!
then mom will be mom! tabhi toh mom kehelati hai!!
hope nandu ko smell na kare nahi toh pocket money cut ho jayega!
so nandu's seniors tried to rag her! but thank god bhag gayi waha se!!
hehehe n loved roby's mono 'kiss me'
wow nandu participating in freshers night
poor roby could only imagine dancing with her!!
and me too have same thinking like robby as fruits r my fav. i don't like them on shoes! flowers ok!!
but poor guy had to say 'sorry' frndship k liye bhi kya kya karna padta hai!!