Love at Topaz-RTMC ss part-2 page-3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its going to be a fast food like story with a fast pace...based on love happen in college campus and growing later...I will try to squeeze it in 4-5 updates as I have already written 2-3 parts so will be regular in updates this time.😉 Here is the first serve...hope you like it.And yes some of things (specially starting chapter )are inspired from a famous novel... 'Two states' but its going to be different afterwards...completely in my way😊

Part-1

Friendship!

Nandini roy,a beautiful girl in her late teenage had recently joined among most prestigious engineering colleges,the NIIT,ahmedabad.It was her first day in college as well as in hostel.She already had become the hot topic amongst boys of every department or year...silently she had been accepted as the 'most beautiful girl' in the campus at present.

In the hottest afternoon of summer she was standing in the long queue in hostel mess for lunch...unlike most of the other engineering colleges there was a common mess for both girls and boys.Needless to say that she was an eye-candy for every girl-starved boy in that campus as girls are rare species in engineering colleges like NIIT,they
always or otherwise prefer some other Math-less course.!Moreover if some of them get NIIT after entrance they are barely look-conscious as they spent most of the time in solving difficult math numerical or running behind professors to solve them or for increasing their quiz marks or blah blah...

"What's this?"she asked seeing a yellow color liquid like stuff.

The mess worker said in his perfect gujarati accent,"Rasam..."

"Ewww...is this rasam..yuckkk..I am not going to eat it in anyway..."she made a face.

Robindo chatterjee,a normal looking yet smart guy who already had spent 3 years in the campus was use to of the pathetic food...he was after nandini in the queue..the mess worker dumped a deep yellow lump on his plate.

She looked at his plate pathetically,"and what's this?"she asked making a face

"Sambhar"mess worker growled.

"ewww...is it sambhar???how did u make it?"

The mess worker was not at all interested in discussing recepie with her...he starred at her,"you want it or not?"

"Its not edible...give me two rasogullas"she said in perfect bengali accent.

"you can get them only after u finish meal.."he said irritated.

"But your meal is not edible..."said she and then turned towards the boy after her,

"Is this edible?"she asked.

Robindo's heart suddenly fluttered,the most beautiful girl was asking for his opinion,it was true that he was use to of that pathetic food and can not make mess worker angry by supporting her yet the beautiful girl is always right!so he said,"No..not at all.."he said and received a glare from mess worker.To compensate him he added,"But I had
developed taste for it..."

"see no one likes your food"she said with a glim as she got a support..."anyways give me two rasogullas.."

"Only one is allowed.."said the mess worker in annoyance.

"wow..what a rule,there is a limit on the only thing which is edible.."she said in irritation.

"Give her mine.."said robindo and instantly realized his mistake,ohh no...you just lost your rasogulla u idiot!!!"

The mess worker dropped two rasogullas on her plate and the queue finally proceeded.
She stopped to see if robindo is coming with her,robindo saw her confused..was he supposed to come with her?
No...but then whom is she waiting for...?? Stop thinking much u rasogulla-less looser..." he gulped hard thinking
about his huge sacrifice-his desert...but that paid off..pretty girl asked him to join.

"Hi..I am nandini roy..first year,CS branch"she extended hand before starting to eat.

"Robindo chatterjee..last year ECE branch"said robi.

"wow...last year..you are my senior then..should I call you sir?"asked she

"there is no need,save this word for second year students,ur seniors..I am ur super-senior..last year students are out of it..as they have many other important stuffs to do instead of this senior-junior ragging game..."said he.

She gulped hard in nervousness yet she dint want to loose the chance of become familier just because he was her super-senior..infact she herself do not like this senior-junior culture at all...

"Bengali?"she asked with a different kind of excitement.

Robindo raised his head,"yes,but never lived in bengal...not even know to speak bengali...I am grown and brought up in Delhi"

"Hey..hows it possible...ur parents must speak bengali..."she said in dis-belief.

"I always lived in hostels...first boarding school then hostel and hostel...I am use to of the worse food..."he said.

"Hard to imagine the worse..."she said.

She ate her two rasogullas with in five minutes,"I am still hungry..."she said.

Robindo was eating quietly,he dint want to show his desperation for her...after watching so many hindi movies he knows that ignoring a pretty girl is the best way to win her attention!He was following the ancient knowledge delivered by most of those hindi movies.

"Hey..lets go out...in a cool restaurant.."she said.

"What...!but we have class in an hour"he said.

"Please..."she stamped her foot like a kid.

"okay.!"said Robi.

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After half an hour they were in a middle class restaurant near by their campus..'The Topaz'

"I am so happy that you are so friendly...can i call you by name?"she asked.

"Of course!'said robi how could I miss a chance to be friendly with the most beautiful girl of campus...he thought with a wide grin.

The waiter came and they placed order...

"So..do u like our campus?"asked robi

"Yes..quite cool..except the mess and of course seniors.."

Robi laughed,"they will be cool soon..."

"But you are not like them...you know five of my classmates had all ready proposed me..."she whispered.

"What!!!"robi screamed out of shock...so he was not alone in the line..there were many...chep are they...huh...well of course excluding me...!

"yeahh..and 2 seniors also...total 7"she said.

Well It was not at all shocking as it was the girl-starved campus and whenever a pretty girl enter in the campus she automatically becomes everyone's first priority...yet he pretended shocked,

"OMG!!! don pay attention on them..they will be fine soon"said he in a very serious tone.Pay attention only on me...was what he wanted to say but gulped.

"yeah..I know how to handle them..."said she.

"But I am surely not no.8"he clarified though he was desperate to become one.

"I know..."she laughed "you seem to be safe guy..u know who believe in just-friend relationship with girl.."said she.

offcourse no boy believes in just-friend relationship with girl...its like having world's best chocolate in hand and not eating it..huh...

apparentely he nodded,"yes off ocurse..."

"So you don't get beyond of just friendship?"she confirmed.

"offcourse not!"he said while his mind was laughing on his own commitment.
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So,Should I proceed it or not...??? please press 'Like' if u liked it and want PM of updates.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved It To The Core !!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for the new ss...

n i just loved it to the core...

simply amazing n rocking...

cont. Soon...

thnx for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wooo!!thank u so much for again writing on RTMC n sharing it!🤗
its so beautiful i was lost in it !!😃
y this is ss (actually waana ask y urs all SS of RTMC) not FF????😡
heheheh loved characters!! 😃
Robi mindblowing n nandu toh mindblogling!!😆
heheheh its not like that girls not like maths!!😒
areh pan gujarat maa rasam kya thi aavi gayu? daal kadhi hovi joeye!!😉
heheh but loved nandu dare to tell her dislike abt food!!👍🏼
so robby is behind her!! lucky 1! supported her!
loved he tried support her at same time not to get anger of mess worker!😆
poor guy had to sacrifice his sweet dish-only one rasgulla!!😔
and nandu ate it with in 5 min. or 5 sec.🤣
wow she is waiting for him for company!! lucky guy!!😍
loved his anwers to her n his monologues after tht to himself!!👏
"What!!!"robi screamed out of shock...so he was not alone in the line..there were many...chep are they...huh...well of course excluding me...!😉

"OMG!!! don pay attention on them..they will be fine soon"said he in a very serious tone.Pay attention only on me...was what he wanted to say but gulped.😉


"But I am surely not no.8"he clarified though he was desperate to become one.

so he wanted to no.8 but not saying tht😛

offcourse no boy believes in just-friend relationship with girl...its like having world's best chocolate in hand and not eating it..huh...

very true aur woh bhi nandu jaise girl!! sweet rosogulla!!🤣
poor boy!! wht he committed for himself!!😲
but i m having rays of hopes somewhere tht our own nandu will fall for him and she will have to propose him!!😍

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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb . i loved it
true mess food at engg college is bad thats why my friends who stay at hostel have hired tiffin service . glad that i got the college in mumbai or else aisa khana as u described phewee😕

typical engg college scenario

u alloted the courses streotypically😆

girls 'comps' n guys "elec n comm"😆

loved there first meet

robi,pyaar ka pehla naam hi kurbani hai .so don't cry over ur rashgulla

oho bundhu robi stil fallowing old filmy funde .

robi shocked there were candidates to get her attention before him😆
but i m not no 8😆

really nice
i loved the way u described the college scenario

do continue soon😊

Edited by pranita1202 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I really liked dis story as i liked the book, thanx for it. Taking base as chetan bhagat's book is always helpful, he writes pretty good

anyways i m eagerer to my know d progress of Rajat nd Mugdha's story, so plz help me in this...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Well,as u said d story has strtd just the way it was shown in "two states" 😃 (i loved two states btw.oh how i love chetan bhagat's writing!😍 )

ok so i love the story(obvi!) yes der r some differences btwn dis story n two states,first difference-they both are bengali!(in two states dey were from twi different states 😆 )

lukin fwd to read more..n im really lukin fwd to read ur take on the story! pls continue! 😎


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Posted: 13 years ago
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okies, i m here wid ma comment..😃.lecture as u feel...
luckily fortunately i ws called for a wrk shop in a DU college- miranda house...
i damn tell u dat the foot der ws.. i shud not insult it calling food, its too local.. its ws a feast, A BUFFET...
for five days we were served india's, continental, italian, thai...cuisines...
man i badly wanna go der, i ws living in heaven i tell...
...literally its truth..
phirr maine vahan k students se interact hone k badd pocha, aisa khana yahan rooz milta h...

dey were very straight... ''kaisa khana ...voh khana nhi dete h...sirf thoosne(gulping n swallowing) ko dete h,
naak bandh karke khane khate h, coz nose too contributes in taste...

phirr mujhe laga, yaar ek saal aur ghar pr hi rah lo, kaun jayega khana khane, i mean thoosne..

okies, enoough ma stry..
aapki stry ekdum lovely wali, sachhi main so sweetthi,
kinna bada dil h robi ka, rosogulle kurbaan kr diya,
main samajh sakti hoon uska dard...

ek baar, mmain ek shaddi main gyi thi, i some how grabbed a gulaab jamun...and voh ek gundu moti aunty ne girra diya...
jab vps gyi tho, gulab jamun sirf syrup bacha tha😭...

robi, sachhi , tumhari kurbaani waste nhi jayegi,
dekho nandu impress hop gyi...

uff ho! yeh bollywood ka influence,
hr stry filmy si kr deta h...
robi bechara, kismat ka mara...bina rosogullla ke...

so, resturant ka naam topaz h...
why i feel dis resturant is gonna be a imp. landmark in stry...
yahan koi kissi ko propose karne wala h...

thnx di for writing..

maine sona h, log jo bolte h uska ulta hote h.. sahi suna h.
vaise dil main laddo phoot rhe h robi ke, tho rosogulla ki kya jarurat...
beta saari choclate bhi bhul jayoge jab nandu haath aa jayegi ache se...

luking forward for the stry vry much..
thnx for dis di...

thnx for a gud news dat u r gonna ud regularly :P
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I love fast food...so I'll definitely love this story...😆
the first part even revolved around food and then Topaz. restaurant..deliberately??
the first part was absolutely fantastic...I totally LOVED it...❤️
Love the fact they are Bengali...I am too😳
I was smiling or laughing throughout the part...😃
The italics were hilarious...please continue writing the italics in the next parts also😆
I am really eager to read this story😍
And I don't even know why you're asking whether you should continue or not...
update soon
Lov u...❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing start dear...superb...👏
n yup thanx for starting on more...loved the way you started the story...
so both are bengoli...nice...but after seeing robi's effort i only remember one thing...
kahi pe niggahein kahi pe nishana...
i mean uski dil main kuch aur hai aur zuban pe kuch aur...aur is chakkar main poor robi ko apne roshogulle bhi gawane pade...poor fellow...
but if you want nandini then you have to sacrifies...
don't ask...to continue...just continue...we all will love to read...
luv u...😊
Edited by ridzzi - 13 years ago

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