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Posted: 13 years ago
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HEY GUYS ... I WAS THINKING OF A NEW CONCEPT
THIS IS MY FIRST WORK , HOPE U WILL LIKE IT.
I WILL CONTINUE IT FROM WHEN SWARON UNITED RECENTLY WITH A LITTLE CHANGE . IN THIS STORY THEY ARE IN A CONFESSED RELATIONSHIP NOT A TRIAL ONE AND TANNI IS VERY HURT AND GUYS TELLING U IN ADVANCE IN THIS STORY TANNI IS NOT VILLAN BUT INSTEAD WILL HELP EVERYTHING TO SORT OUT . REY IS STILL HURT AND DEPRESSED BECAUSE OF KRIA AND SOMETHING FISHY IS GOING IN ON ON SHIVAM'S MIND .
I DONT KNOW IF U GUYS GONNA LIKE IT OR NOT BUT PLEASE TELL ME WEATHER TO CONTINUE OR NOT .
GUYS PLEASE DO COMMENT
INDEX-
PART 1- PAGE 2
PART 2-PAGE 4
PART 3-PAGE 7
PART 4-PAGE 12
PART 5-PAGE 20
NOTE -PAGE 24
PART 6-PAGE 28
PART 7-PAGE 56
PART 8-PAGE 57
part 9-page 63
abhi's cs- page 69
part 10-page 69
note- page 69
part 11-page 90
part 12-page 113
part 13-page 116
part 14-page 126
link to the nest thread - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3929065#p101785423
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aishasully thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yhhh do continue will ove to read it and pm me nyc concept btw
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Posted: 13 years ago
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do continue dear

will love to read it further
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Do continue and pm me.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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its lovely...😃 plz continue n update soon...n plz pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ofcourse u must continue...it seems like something different concept.do pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Continue soon dear...nd do PM me for sure.. :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Gr8 story do continue n pm me !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nyc concpt do continue...😊
& All d bst 4 ur 1st work on kriyaansh
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THAKS GUYS FOR LI KING THE CONCEPT 😃
PART 1

The warm and light wind swoops over a white beautiful bunglow ... A gal was sleeping with tears in her eyes . It seemed as if she was crying before and during sleeping .😭
tinggg... tinggg (the alarm rang)
she switched the alarm off and heard a knowk on her door. she quickly wiped her tears and shouted "COME IN"
A servent entered...
G- kya hai baba ... kuch chahiye aapko?
S- taani beti aap jaldi aajaiye , main khana laga deta hoon.
T- nhi baba ... mujhe bookh nhi lgi . aap jayiye .
the servent went out of the room
T- main kya krun ... rey ne us din mujse jo bhi kha ( u know main kis din ki baat kar rhi hu ) , wo main chah k bhi nhi bhool sakti. uper se maine khud hi apne pero pe kulhadi maar li ... sabko yeh bol to diya ki mujhe dance karna aata hai par sach to yeh hai ki kathak k alawa mujhe kuch nhi aata ... aur kathak bhi mujhe jyada achche se nhi aata .😔
Bubble Taani to Tanni- tanni tu rona bandh kar ... bahut dino se rone k alawa tune kuch nhi kiya
T to BT- to main kya karun ... galti meri hi to hai ... rey ki aankho main us dil mere liye jo gussa dekha aur mehsoos kiya 😭( she starts crying)
BT to T- tanni tune fir rona shuru kar diya ... ha us waqt unhe bahut gussa aa gya tha par tujhe nhi lagta ki unki aankho main tere liye jitna gussa tha , utna hi pain bhi tha
T to BT- matlab?
BT to T - matlab yeh ki rey aur kruya k beech kuch na kuch to aisa hua hai jo sirf wo jaante hai aur jo rey ko bahut hurt kar rha hai ... tune dekha tha na us din rehersal hall me jab shivam ne kriya aur rey k break up ki baat ki thi to woh kitne upset ho gye the aur jab tu unke saamne kriya jaisi banke gyi thi to wo kitne sad ho gye the
T to BT- tum deekh khe rhi ho , kuch na kuch to zaroor he aur wo rey ko bahut pareshan kar rha ha aur mujhe wo cheez pta lgani hogi ... pta nhi kyun par mujhe dil se lag rha he ki kuch to galat hai and i need to know , what is it.
BT to T- yeh hui na baat
T to BT- par kese?
BT to T- sabse pahle to rey se baat kar . pehle unka point of view jaan ... agar tujhe unka baat deekh lgi to deekh hai aur agar tujhe lga ki wo kuch galat khe rhe hai aur kuch aur baat ho sakti hai to tab ki tab dekh lenge
T to BT- ha yeh deekh rhega ... par agar wo mujhpe us din ki tarha gussa ho gye to ... tab main kya karungi
BT to T- yeh to confirmed hai ki tu agar kriya k bare me kuch bolegi to unhe gussa to aayega hi par is bar dariyo mat aur apne aap par bhorasa rakhiyo ki tu kuch galat nhi kar rhi ... its important ... kisi na kisi ko to sach pta lgana pdega , so why not u . tu sab pta lga.
T to BT- yeh deekh rhega ... main aaj hi rey se baat karti hu ... bina dare
BT to T- all the best !!!
T - thanks... i need it
precap - taani and rey's convo and sawyam want to tell rey something and shivam's fishy plans
guys achcha lga ya bura par comment zarur karna and if you dont like it , then please tell me.

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