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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
Awesome update...👏

sharon was blushing..😍

Dnt worry about likes and comment...

IT will soon come...

thnks for pm..

please update soon... eagerly waiting 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
hayee...

sharon blushin...

awesum...

luvd d update a lot...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
cute update.
Thanks forb the pm.


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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
part 1 and part 2 was amazing

i loved it

the way u proclaim was wonderful


loved the concept

very much
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: aishasully

nyc 1 sharon blushing aww btw soorry i cnt lyk tab nt wrking

ITS OKAY DEAR . NO PROBS😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Anindita91

hey dear thank you so much for this swaron convo...🤗 i just loved it...😃 it is really really cute n adorable...😉

finally swaron confession...🥳awww sharon confessed her feelings...☺️ n i loved that part where sharon pinches swayam as he was unable to believe that sharon has said those 3 magical words to him...😆 but that shivam..trying to make swayam jealous...😡 good that sharon replied in that way...he deserves it...🤢 this update is just awesome...👏 really loved it...😃 thanx once again 4 this swaron convo...
thanx 4 d pm...update soon...😊

UR WELCOME. THANK GOD U LIKED IT. I WAS WONDERING IF U GUYS GONNA LIKE IT OR NOT .
I AM NOT THAT GOOD AT SWARON'S PART. GLAD U LIKED IT.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Luv_Kriyaansh

Awwsome update...👏
Luved it...😊
Sharon blushing...aww...😳
update soon Tension mat lo yaar...lyks aur cmmnt ayenge aur jaldi aayenge...😊
mast update...Thnxx a lot for d PM...PM me wen u write next..😊

THANX 4 LIKING IT. MAIN TENSION NHI LE RHI BUT STILL 1st TIME LIKH RHI HU NA ISLIYE HOPES HAI KI ACHCHI AUR LAMBI WALI COMMENTS MILEGI. PHIR BHI THANX 4 THE ADVISE.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Nice :)

PM me whn u update nexT! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39

PART-3

Thank you for whoever liked and commented 4 the last update. I know it's a little bore till now but soon it will be interesting.

So let's start…

Swayam quickly pulled rey outside the class.

R- are…are swayam kheench kyu rha hai…mujhe chalna aata hai…chod na mujhe

S- ha…ha sorry wo main itna excited hu na ki…

R- kya hua …bta mujhe

S- yha nhi … rehearsal hall me is time koi nhi hoga … wha chalet he

R- deekh hai chal … pta nhi kya hua hai ki itna excited hai

In the rehearsal hall,

R- ab bol kya hua hai?

S- a…woh…actually na…who

R- bol bhi kya hua hai

S- acha deekh hai main bolta hun par tu overreact mat kariyo

R- SWAYAM BOL

S- ok…ah kal Sharon mere ghar aayi thi and … ah

R- and

S- humne baat ki aur I proposed her and she said … she said yes

R- WHAT... iska matlab tu aur Sharon ab hum hai… u both are together now

S- ya

Rey in excitement hugged swayam

R- congrats dude … yeh to breaking news hai… jab yeh news baki gang ko pta chlegi to sabke dimaag ke fuse break ho jayenge

S- yaar aesa to mat khe

R- to yeh baat secret hai ya sabko bta sakte hai

S- pta nhi

R- pta nhi matlab

S- are yar kal raat ko baki sari baate to hogyi par yeh to poochna hi bhool gya

R- kal sari raat tu aur Sharon saath the?

S- hmmm…ha

R- sahi ja rha…lga rha…very good

Both laughs

Swayam's phone rings … seeing the caller-id a smile plasters on swayam's face

R- Sharon ka phone he na

S- ha

R- u both continue with ur love talks … main chalta hoon … mujhe kabab me haddi banne ka koi shauk nhi he. But seriously dude I m really happy for both of u. congrats

S- thanx dude

Rey leaves the rehearsal hall. Swayam picks up the call.

Sw- hi

Sh- hey… kya kar rhe ho?

Sw- tumhare hi bare me soch rha tha

Sh- kha ho tum?

Sw- rehearsal hall me

Sharon was coincidently passing from rehearsal hall. She turns around and saw swayam standing inside the rehearsl hall. She cuts the call and goes inside.

Sw- hello…hello…Sharon (he didn't knew that Sharon was standing just behind him) phone kaat kyu diya Sharon ne.

Sh- swayam

Swayam turns around and saw Sharon

Sh- main yhi se pass ho rhi thi

Sw- oh…hi

Sh- hi

Sw- main tumse kuch puchna chahta tha

Sh- pucho

Sw- tum meri ab girlfriend ho(hearing this Sharon blushes a little bit) yeh baat secret hai ya baaki sabko bta sakte he

Sh- maine is bare me socha nhi…tum kya chahte ho?

Sw- as u wish

Sh- secret rakhte he…actually na main na bachpan se secret relationship rakhna chahti thi

Sw- really

Sh- ha wo actually na doston se bhane bnana , chup-chup kar bate karna , jo wo ek risk factor he na main use humesha se feel karna chahti thi

Sw- as u wish madam…apka hukam sar aankhon par

Both laughs a little bit then the LLHH session started

(guys I m not writing ki baaki sare din kya hota rha … I m directly jumping to 4 pm)

4 p.m

Taani was waiting for rey in the fire exit.

Rey comes…

R- hey

T- hi

R- to tumhe kya zaroori baat karni thi

T- wo mujhe rey … pehle aap promise kro ki aap gussa nhi hoge … aur jo main punchugi uska sach-sach jawab doge

Rey senses something serious

R- kya baat he taani … tell me

T- woh…ah...actually

R- (shouts)tanni tell me

T- rey apka aur kriya ka break up kyu hua?

R-(shocked and angry) kha tha tumse stay away from this… I thought ki ab yeh sab saught ho gya hai par tumne phirse yeh sab shuru kar diya… u can never take her place in my life

T- main unki jagha ab lena bhi nhi chahti… I just want to know ki aap dono ka break up kese hua

Rey pushes her towards the wall

R- (shouting) tumhe kyu janna hai…just get lost…LEAVE

Taani had tears in her eyes. She was about to leave when she remembered her convo with bubble taani.

T- (thinking) main dar nhi sakti. Main kuch galat nhi kar rhi. Mujhe sab kuch janna hoga.

R- sunai nhi deta … leave

T- jo main sunna nhi chahti wo main kyu sunu… rey please tell me… main aapko kese samjhau…main khud nhi jaanti ki main yeh kyu janna chahti hu par i want to know it…I need to know it. Please rey

R- (shouting) she used me. Did u get it now. Usne mujhe famous hone k liye use kiya. Now please leave.

Taani was shocked and was dumbstruck. She left from there.

Rey was there remembering the time spent with kriya. He had tears in his eyes and was remembering what kriya said him on pre-valentines night. He cried badly.

Tanni was walking in the corridor

T- (thinking) yeh kese ho sakta hai. Kriya ne rey ko use kiya par jesa mene unke bare me suna tha us tareeke se to wo bahut achi lag rhi thi. Sab to khete hai ki wo apne aap se pehle doosro ke bare me sochti hai. Kya ho rha hai kuch nhi samajh aa rha.

While thinking she fell down (earth lover jo hai) and all the things in her bag came out. She was keeping all her things in her bag when she noticed that her diary is missing.

T- are… meri diary kha gyi…zaroor khi gir gyi hogi. Mujhe peeche jakar dekhna chahiye.

She was finding her diary when a girl called her.

G- tanni

T- neha tum

N- what finding u are?

T- wo main apni diary dhundh rhi thi

N- diary…khi tum brown colour ki diary ki baat to nhi kar rhi

T- ha wo meri hi diary… tumne use kha dekha

N- wo diary mujhe giri hui mili thi…mene use lost and found department me de diya

T- oh...ok…thanx main diary leke aati hu

N- ok

Taani goes to the lost and found department. A man was standing there.

T- hello. Meri brown colour ki diary abhi yha koi girl deke gyi thi.

M- ok… main diaries wala box nikalta hun. Tum usme se apni diary dekh lo.

He takes out a carton(box) and keeps it on the table and then starts doing his work.

Taani took her diary and saw something. Her eyes widened. She was hell shocked.

THAT'S IT GUYS. NEXT UPDATE WOULD BE ON PAGE 15 AND AT LEAST 25 LIKES. THIS PART WAS QUITE BIG SO I EXPECT BIG COMMENTS. ACHA LGA YA BURA PAR PLEASE COMMENT ZAROOR KARNA.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
Awesome I'm sure she found kriya's diary I'm here without a pm anyway update soon

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