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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
THIS IS SIMPLY NICE WRK DEAR...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
nice update...👏
waiting for swaron's entry... 😍 n this shivam...what is he planning now...ufff...always creating problem for swaron...hate him...😡

thanx for d pm...update soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
gud start...
Chalo kahin toh Taani kuch achha kam kar rahi hai,.
dis what i think if Taani rili lovs rey den y she not finding d reson 4 KR's breakup . par d3 mein toh KR se relatd kuch achha xpect karna hi tym waste h..well u r doing dat gud job!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
thanks 4the pm...

hope taani sab kuch tick karenge??
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
Nice Update...Plzz Update Next Part Soon n PM Me...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
Amazing update.
Nice update.
Hope to see Kriyaansh soon.
Thanks for pm.
Update soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#17

PART-2

GUYS THIS IS NOT DONE … I SENT PM TO MANY BUT ITNE KUM LIKES AND COMMENTS…😔 AND THANX WHOEVER COMMENTED AND LIKED😊

SO LETS START WITH THE UPDATE…

A beautiful girl is entering the college and all the boys are drooling over her. She entered the class and a girl came towards her and said "Hey Sharon".

S- hey rinni

R- kya hua Sharon aaj bdi khush lag rhi ho…kuch hua kya?

S- nhi…nhi to main khush nhi rhe sakti kya

R- nhi aesi baat nhi he bas tum aaj kuch jyada hi khush dikh rhi ho

S- acha … btw simmi ka u.s se phone aaya .

R- nhi … bas usi ko call kar rhi thi . tum use baat krogi ?

Suddenly Sharon notices something on her desk …

S- nhi main baad me baat kar lungi . u talk 2 her.

R- ok (she starts talking 2 simmi on phone)

Sharon goes 2 her desk and sees some red roses placed there.

S- wow red roses (she starts blushing) yeh zarur swayam ne rkhe honge . kal raat k baad aur kaun mere liye red roses rakh sakta he.(she starts remembering what happened)

FLASHBACK

A boy was standing in front of Sharon. The boy was standing very close 2 her. Both were standing so close that they could hear each other's heartbeat and could feel each other's breath.

S- (crying) I m sorry… sorry swayam. mene tumhe aaj tak bahut hurt kiya thapad mare , insult kari aur pta nhi kya kya kiya…i

Sw- ( iterupts Sharon) shhh… Sharon tum mujhe sorry mat bolo and please don't cry. I can't see u cry and that to because of me. Tumne jo kuch bhi kiya … mujhe us se koi problem nhi hai … I know u never meant to hurt me.

S- kyu … kyu ho tum itne ache. itne caring. Ur intensity , ur hatered , ur love … why do everything effect me so much .

Sw- jaan k acha lga ki meri bhi bate tumhe utna hi effect karti he jitni tumhari bate mujhe

S- kyu … meri bate tumhe effect kyu karti he?

Sw- tumhe nhi pta?

S- pta he par tumse sunna chahti hu

Sw- because

S- because

Sw- I love u

S- (tears rolled out from her eyes and smile crept on her face) I…I love…I love u too

Sw-(shoked) kya kha tumne

S- sunai nhi deta kya … I love u swayam shekhawat.

Sw – I cant believe my ears … yeh sach he ya main sapna dekh rha hu…oh god I cant believe it … somebody please pinch me.

Sharon pinched swayam. He screamed.

Sw- what was this?

S- tumne hi to kha tha to pinch u … so I did what u said.

Sw- one more shoke of the day, u followed my order.

S- ha ha very funny.

They spent whole night together talking and romancing.

FLASHBACK ENDS

Sharon was dreaming and blushing hard when a boy calls out Sharon from the back.

B- hey Sharon , u liked the roses?

S- shivam tum … tumne mujhe yeh roses diye

In the mean time swayam with a boy entered the class.

Swayam got angry listning that shivam gave flowers to Sharon

B- swayam tu theek to he na … kya hua … achanak chup kese ho gya?

Sw- kuch nhi rey … main theek hu. (swayam ne rey ko ab tak Sharon aur uske relationship k bare main kuch nhi btaya hai)

Swayam went towards Sharon and shivam and gave a tashan look to shivam

Sh- Sharon thanx … tumhe roses ache lge he na. (trying to make swayam jelous)

S- ya I liked the roses(swayam shoked and shivam smiling)

But bechare roses inki sari beauty khatam ho gyi kyuki tumne in roses ko diya … poor roses (now swayam smiling and shivam angry)

Swayam took those roses from sharon's hands and placed them in shivam's hands. They both were about to fight when rey came stopped the fight. Shivam went to his seat.

Sw – rey mujhe tujhse kuch baat karni he.

R- theek he. Class k baad baat karte he.

Tanni enters and saw rey. She went towards him.

T- rey mujhe aapse bahut jaruri baat karni he.

R- theek he. (guys from rey's side, everything is normal b/w taani and rey . remember he talked 2 her during charity event)

T – to theek he , 4 pm in fire exit.

R- ok

The proffeser entered the class.

P- everyone, take ur seats.

After an hour the bell rang and the class ended. Swayam quickly went to rey and took him outside the class.

GUYS HERE THE UPDATE ENDS. I KNOW MENE KHA THA KI IS UPDATE ME TAAREY CONVO HOGI BUT NEXT TIME PAKKA. ACTUALLY MERA SWARON KE BARE MAIN LIKHNE KA KOI PLAN NHI THA BUT ANINDITA DEMANDED 4 SWARON SO THIS ONE WAS 4 HER.

GUYS PLEASE GIVE LOTS OF LIKES AND LONG COMMENTS . PLEASE GUYS.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww...
sharon blushing...
That was too cute...
awesome update
do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great update
Thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
nice update...
thanks for the pm

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