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Deetha.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey guys im here back with another new ss...okay i read that many wanted me to continue naina tere ss as an ff ...par kya haina...kriyaansh ki shaadi ke baad ki life toh mai already baatcutter mei batarahi hun...aur lives describe nahi karsakti...coz still mai kuwari😛 hun itne saare after marriage likhun kaise??😕

isiliye mai ye naya ss likh rahi hun...mai hamesha likh deti hun par aaj kuch pakana chahti hun...so guys iski actual title maine socha "baatein kuch ankahi si" coz kal raat... i mean 4rm 1 - 4 mai bas yeh ek gaana sun rahi thi ...neendh nahi aaraha tha so sun rahi thi bas...tabhi ye story meri dimaag mei aaya...cs and prolouge jald hi miljayenge...

guys i suggest ki jab bhi ye ss padhoge toh wahi song baatein kuch ankahi si from life in a metro se suno...it really gives the feel...

agar already kisiki ss /ff ki naam yahi hai ( innocent love ) toh plzz sry and let me know i will surely change...

and haa if u all want it then i will turn it into a ff ...but wo mai first 3 chapters ki response dekh ke hi decide karoongi...kk ab mera bakwasing band...

and the most important baat...guys sorry to be rude par kya kisiko samaj nahi aata...maine kitni baar kaha ki pms keliye meri doosri id add karo...par sab isi id pe kyun bhejte ho...aaj tak sab ko pm karke bata ti thi ki for pms add my pm id par ab bas bohut hogaya ...not anymore...mai aaj se kisiko pm karke batane wali nahi hun...if u send buddy request to this id i will accept it but pms nahi milenge ...naahi update ki aur naahi ye kehte hue ki doosri id add karo...im irritated yaar...arey meri signature bhi wahi hai ...update padh rahe ho toh wo bhi ek sec dekhe pad toh lo...thats it mai aur nahi kehne wali...

jis jis ko pms chahiye add my pm id ...

id: abssd

index:

cs-page1

prolouge-page 1

part 1 -page9

part 2 - page 14

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

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Posted: 13 years ago

so guys here i come with the character sketch...

the first pic doent relate to the story but i find this pic really cute...kunwar is just adorable in it..

..so here i go with the actual character sketch...

st.louis...the great college in which every student dream to study...it is known for its phenominal teaching and educaional facilities...but more for its the tag...named "DANCE"...it consists of two dancing teams...each of three members...

1) thrilling three

a) swayam shekawat

b) vikramjeet singh

c) kria ghai

2) freaky frnds

a)sharon raiprakash

b)neharika malhotra

c) reyaansh singhania

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thrilling three:

these three love each other lyk hell(not that love ...hamesha usi track pe kyun chalte ho...they love each other as friends...all are childhood friends...they never hesitate to talk and share their secrects to the rest...they care abt no one...kriya was very precious to the boys...they treat her lyk feather...they are from delhi...these three always wished to join st.louis finally they did ...they came all the way from delhi...three of them live in a flat with three bedrooms...

a)swayam shekawat

he is a very sweet guy...supports his frnds lyk hell...and fully drown in love with sharon...

b)vikramjeet singh

fun loving guy...cute and bubly...eats a lot...the frequent word he uses is "bhook"

c)kria ghai

very naughty girl...always in a excited mode ...shares her every small secret with swayam and vicky...she cant hide anything 4rm them...always doing chapar chapar...😛

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freaky frnds...

this is one of the craziest gang...they arey from mumbai itself and same childhood frnds...rey was very attached to these...they behave crazily...they dnt care what the rest think abt them...and all think that neha and sharon are rey bf's and he got an image of cassinova...they live by themselves... they live by themselves in the flat built exclusively 4r them by their parents...(same 3 bedroom flat)

a)sharon raiprakash.

.very bubly girl...loves to live her life to full...very friendly but naughty...loves swayam...

b) neharika malhotra..

.bubly girl...speaks perfect english...simple yet stylish...(infact all the six) ...soon falls in love with vicky...

c)reyaansh singhania...

.(i thought of giving this pic...par kya karun pic aa hi na raha hai jab update kiya toh...)

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-prn1/545790_413919111973803_177748368924213_1281296_1915550584_n.jpg

..golden hearted guy...everyone thinks he is a cassinova...girls drool over him...he too speaks to them but for him its friendly for the rest its flirting...very innocent guy,...sharon and neha sometyms wonder at his childishness...

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so here ends the character skectch...

pata hai bakwas tha...but jyaada kya describe karun??? update mai padlo...

and haa ofcourse all die 4r dance...and as they were best frnds they formed their own trio...so now wait and watch the rest of the story...

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liked it?? then like...

loved it ???? then cmnt...

criticism is welcomed...

sorry for typo errors im not re checking...

hope u all like ...soon the prolouge will be updated ...on seeing the response the first part will be updated...agar acha hua toh aaj hi miljayega update...😳

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Deetha.

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Posted: 13 years ago

prolouge:

18 yrs...

teen age...

different thoughts, different mindsets...

masti, gussa,pyaar , irritation,sensitivity etc etc...all at its peak...

the most beautiful , dangerous, happy and painful part of live...

choti choti baaton ka bohut bada asar...

kuch log pehli nazar mei pyaar mei padjate hai...

kisiki relation fights se start hoti hai...

aur kisiki miss understandings ke saath...

dil aur dimaag dono alag alag directions mei jaate hai...

har choti si baat bohut gehri chot chod deti hai...

so this is a story of such 6 teenagers...

kisika pehla pyaar bohut maasoom hoti hai ...

kisiki passionate..

aur kisiki simple...

pehla pyaar kitne types ki hai?????

nah its not among the qsns which can be answered...

so ab dekhte hai ki in 6 log ...

kaise milte hai???

jhada ??/

ya pyaar????

ya dosti???

kuch bhi ho ek cheez common rahegi woh hai dance...

shayad ye dance hi kisiki pyaar ki shuruvad kare...

dekhen????

first day in clg...

national level dance competition...

do naye groups...

deathly takkar...

dance karna shuru hua toh baaki teams ...just ends in ashes...

passion...dosti...pyaar...sincerity...inocence...

..maturity...care...doubts ...anger...romance ...sab hote hai is story mai ...

but phir bhi sweet hai...

this is my grt effort to explain the beauty of teen age...which was very precious to everyone...

so did u lyk it...

be frank...

reviews...

if u all lyk i will give the 1st part today...😳

i know utna acha nahi aaya prolouge jitna aana chahiye tha...phir bhi

plzz lyk and cmnt...😳

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Hera Flames

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Posted: 13 years ago

Res
Di plz change the name coz amy as in kriyaanshlove also writes an ff with this name
unres.
Finally i am unresing
Di loads of hugs for you for starting this ss...🤗
Amazing cs... finally will get hell lot of friendly moments...
Prologue pe toh mai fida...
Teenage...
my favourite phase of life...
Di trust me agar koi prob ho na toh ask me ... mai chalti phirti thesis hun teenage par...😆😆😆😆

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Deetha.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aditi061
Res
Di plz change the name coz amy as in kriyaanshlove also writes an ff with this name

kk thanks dear...😳

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Hera Flames

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Posted: 13 years ago

No prob di..
Vaise do u know baaki sab kahan h...
Aur aap kab free hoge?

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Deetha.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aditi061
No prob di..
Vaise do u know baaki sab kahan h...
Aur aap kab free hoge?

baaki sab ka pata nahi ...aur mai thodi der keliye busy hun ...cs and prolouge likhna hai

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Hera Flames

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Posted: 13 years ago

Di jaldiii...
Logon ko wait karvana is nt good 4 health

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Deetha.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aditi061
Di jaldiii...
Logon ko wait karvana is nt good 4 health

bhook lagi hai khana nahi khaya wahi kha rahi hun

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Hera Flames

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Posted: 13 years ago

#10

Di baaki bhi post karo...
Nd finally we'll get hell of kriyam nd kricky moment

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