Love to Hate U |KriYansh| ch7 pg109+new thrd link - Page 16

Created

Last reply

Replies

1.1k

Views

74.4k

Users

95

Likes

2k

Frequent Posters

..nams.. thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
sorry babes kal se ATing mei busy thi.. aaj sonia ( kriyansh ) ki bday mei busy hoon.. so updats kal hi milenge.. im doing vm also soo no time 2day 😭
luv_arsha thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
it was awesome part...loved it very much
you alived my D3 memories...it was freaking awesome
waiting eagerly for next part
continue soon
SavageMissMe thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
wow, ur awesome!!!!
too say you writing is fabulous is the understatement of the year.
read the last 2 parts together and loved both of them to bits!
plz,plz ,plz upd8 soon, just cant wait
thnx fr the pm and do pm me next time 2


nityaa02 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
omg... thats was an amazing update... emotion expressed very so intense... i really liked it... but rey proposing kria... :( kya yaar... but neverthe less... really looking forward to the next update :D
Zehnaseeb. thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago

Nams, we want update..😈


..nams.. thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
thank u sooo much for all the love over this SS.. it really means 2 me a lot 😳😳



read all the comments.. really guyss all the comments are precious for me.. luv u all loadsss..

and haan sorry late update ke liye was busy wid studies and other ffs 😛 update in a jiffy 😉
..nams.. thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago

CHAPTER 4

A tirefull day at college.. so much of preparations and decorations to be maintained.. and Sharon kept bugging me all while..

Well matter was simple I had shrugged off saying I wud not attend the prom night..

It was evident tat every year in the prom night there wud be a Romantic Number ( a slow mass dance ) and every one wud be wid their dates.. and me left wid no date ! so it was obvious I wudnt go to prom night to c the enjoying couple faces !! Pleaseee!!

evening was still worst.. as evening came I was in a relief.. I wud go home and stick to bed FINALLY!! Unless and nd until that devil of my life wasn't existed!!! Huh!!

Somehow managed to escape from Sharon I reached the parking lot.. only to be found that my precious car had punctured tyres!! I was left mouth open seeing the two front tyres complete flat to ground! Now tat wasn't expected.. as morning the car was perfectly fine.. *frown* no spares!!!

Gosh I hurried myself in search of an auto.. as I stood near the road side a black car suddenly rushed towards me stopping exactly inches away from me almost taking my life into cliff hanger!!!!

I closed my eyes in panic.. and my sweet palms gathered to cover my ears.. I kept the chanting my savior the great Universe ji's name..

It was few minutes after the sudden attack.. I realized the place was silent.. nothing moved.. I was glued to the place I stood..

I slowly opened my eye lashes.. the fear was still trembled my nerves.. as my eyes opened fully I saw him smirking and leaning on the car.. with his hazel orbs sticked to mine..

at once I had a shock of my life to see him staring immensely at me.. as my eyes met him even though he was few foot away from me our eye locked.. not wanting to break the eye lock I stood froze like a statue.. p.s my jaws r still dropped down due to sudden out burst of the sight infront of me..

After wat seemed infinity he came forward and snapped his fingers infront of my eyes..

I shook my eyes and started wid my usual curses

'HOW DARE U!! I knw I knw u have always planned to get the heck out of my life!! Tat doesn't mean u kill in the mid road! For god sake I don't want to witness such a messy state in my life!!! How do u even think of running ur so called *peeping at the car* black BMW over me ??? listen Mr. Reyaansh Singhania!!! I seriously don't want to die in ur hands!! i mean under cars!! It wud b bttr If i wud sucide than die like dis..! Out of all how dare u..'

*I knw I knw like always his usual efforts to speak was going in vain*

Before I cud bring his brain out of his head he came closer to me gripping hard his hands on my shoulders and giving me a HELL BIG SHAKE!!!

'SHUTTT UPPP!! UR SUCH A BAAATTTCUTTER!! Yeaaahhh baat cutter!!!! U never have the courtesy to allow the other person to speak don't u ????? y do u always behave dis way wid me ?? am I exception ??? y do u do dis all time wid me ?'

'what??' I asked symbolizing my question for his last sentence..

'yahi ki u always keep cutting my baat!!!!'

I kept staring at him 'what an Hinglish' I thout to myself 'but he looked sooo cute while he said tat sentence!! Awww' somewer in the corner of my brain.. ermmm ok ok ok my heart complimented him! NOT ME REMEMBER!!!! I never compliment tat devil of my life!!! Huh..

'u know what ur suchaa losser!!! Huh' I said gritting my teeth

'well not as big as u..' he smirked and went towards his car..

'hop inside' he commanded..

'and why wud I do tat ??' I shrugged off..

'because u promised!!!' he said wid a smile

'promise ??' I thout

'what promise ??' I asked him confused..

'tat u will help me in selecting a ring for S-h-a-r-o-n remember ??'

SHIT SOMEONE STABBED MY HEART FEW SEC AGO!!!! GODDD universeee jiii!!

I swear I don't understand why my inner mind.. ermmm FINE why my heart was crying!! Seriously no clue *pout*

'yeah yeah.. wahtevr' I said climbing his car ( p.s back seat )

'hellooo miss baatcutter! Im not ur driver!! Kindly take passenger seat in the front' he rolled his eyes sarcastically

'uggghhh WTH is his problem!!!!' I wish I cud seriously prick out those..those those * change in range of voice from anger to dreamy* those hazel orbs of his.. gosh how intense tat gaze is.. why does he make me melt.. *dreamland*

Finally we drove off to the mall..

He took me to the jewellery shop.. must say it was one of the EXPENSIVE shop in town.. gosh those designs.. diamonds.. platinum.. OMG hold me anyone! Why dint I visit this before ? I wud seriously purchase the whole shop!! jab jaago tab savera.. it isnt late yet! hehehe.. I wud do the same now too!!! next shopping trip to this shop! Fixed!! *grin*

As I turned around.. I sensed the pair of eyes on me.. I turned to see him staring at me.. as I looked at him he moved his gaze suddenly to the those sample rings placed on the table..

He called me near..

I examined the whole set of rings.. one of wich took my attention..

I Caressed it.. he then picked it up.. 'u liked dis ??'

'and why wud my like matter anyway ??'

'u remember ur helping me in finding the ring ?'

'exactly!! This may b my like .. but ur concerned in her like isn't it ??'

He frowned 'WHYYY ????' *frown*

'okay then temme wich one she may like..'

I started looking at other samples.. soon I felt my hands wer on his.. at the instant I looked at him.. he was sliding the ring on my finger I exclaimed.. but my heart skipped a beat..

I stared at him.. and den at the ring. . the one wich I liked 'why is he bothering after all ??'

'perfect!!' he grinned!

'huh ??' I was shocked and confused

'size!!! Well sharon's size is also the same.. now I can get her the ring of this size..'

'SERIOUSLY HE WAS IMPOSSIBLE!!' no this time I felt like smacking my head on the shop door!! GOSH Im seriously an idiot !! why am I even here wid him ???

As I was fighting wid my own self swayam hopped inside.. I was surprised to c him..

p.s swayam kria's dost..+ rey ka b 😉

'hey kria ..'

Well I was seeing him after a week.. he was out on some clg project exhibition.. as soon as I saw him I was in his arms.. how I missed this comfortable place!! He was just like a bro to me.. even though I have never shared my 'this weird' feelings wid him, he understands , and surprisingly he alwsys showers his presence wen im such a critical state!! Dil ka rishta hai aakir..!! wat r bro's meant for ??

'hey kido ( p.s I love the name 'kidooo' )' he said stroking my hair..

'hey samm!! How ru ?? one week!! Was long!!' I pouted

'im so sorry I came yday nly..'

'WHAT ?? nd u dint temme!!!' I was seriously in rage wid Mr Swayam Shikawat! Huh

'sorry kido.. I was wid sh..'

'with ??'

'ermm actually I i..'

'hey dudeee!!' rey interrupted jerking swayam away from me wid a weird bone crashing hug.. poor sammm he was sandwiched!! UGGHH DEVIL KAHI KA!!!

'kaisaaa hai tu .. haaan teeek hoon.. aur' etc etc please I dint eavesdrop usual Men's talk is a boring thing to eavesdrop! But I was at a distance from dem and casually I heard those exclamations..

I went back in selecting the rings.. and found cute classy one.. Im sure Sharon wud luv it after all its her style!!

I took the ring out and handed it to the salesman 'please give this to him and tell him I have selected it for his gf and also tell both im leaving..' I had no choice both had sticked to each other like a glue!!

I went out .. I was in 8th floor and desperately waiting for the lift to open..

Finally goodness gracious!! Ty universe ji.. I entered surprisingly the lift was empty.. I pressed the ground floor button.. and touched the closing button jus wen the lift doors was suppose to be close a pair for a strong masculine arms threw it open..

Damn!!! Another mini heart attack!!

My poor heart im sure I shud get it treated soon .. its too young to handle such attacks often..!!

***


i think u all liked dis chapter ?? dint u ?


and im sure u all b lalala over next chapter tooo 😉😆


😊next update after 60 likes 😊


and i ask for likes tat doesnt mean u all dont give me reviews !!!😔 i want LAMBA reviews dis time if u all want the nxt update to b ______ 😆

Edited by nams_arsha - 13 years ago
-FrozenRain- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
res

See I'm first again.


Amazing Update nams.
Loved it a lot.

very cute one.


Hey just a sec is Rey selecting his gift for Kria???

there is something seriously going on.


Swaron are together dats hidden form Kria.


It was very cute.
Plz update next part soon.


Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago
spicyrays thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
m d first one to like yay...
luv d update... hey cn u show ny image of ring in uar nxt update... i really wanna see...
suchitrabehera thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
Loved d update..bechaari kriya kitna satata hain rey usko and kriyam ka rishta awww so cute...and swayum was about to take sharon's name and stopped nd rey just pushed kriya from swayum... Kuch gadbad lag raha hain boss...kya rey kriya ko propose karega.. God so confused... Ab jaldi updatekarde nams
Edited by suchitrabehera - 13 years ago

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".