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Posted: 13 years ago
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A Cactus

Khushi stands at the poolside, where the darkness rules the place, the stars don't twinkle, and the moon is somewhere behind some cloud. She can't help, so she cries her heart out. His memories captures her, occupies her thoughts. She is in deep thinking of him she remembers when he told her that he married her because he knows about her affair with shyaam and he wanted to protect his Di's marriage. That wrong judejment kills her. It leads her tears to flow down; her eyes are full of tears.

Then she remembers some romantic moments; some moments which make her heartbeats increase and beat madly. Those moments which refreshes her shriveled soul. He danced with me, kissed my cheek, gifted me bangles, almost kissed me, he..., and he... These moments are torturing her now. 'You mustn't think of this Khushi. He went away, left you and went without listening to you. There's no hope in this love. He won't ever understand you,' Khushi thinks warning herself, Khushi whose love is like a cactus which grows in desert and bears all the drought and hotness (The pain, the distances).

Her love is like a cactus which yearns to some water (His love). She can't stop herself from loving him even if she wants, but she doesn't. She loves him without having anything in return.

She wants this love to live on, to grow and continue. She suddenly has some hope. Maybe the stars will twinkle again, the moon will appear. Maybe some roshini will infiltrate to this road. She always tries to convince herself of this. Maybe he will understand me some day. I'm waiting for it even if it needs ages to come true.

She never knew that he have some feelings towards her. He loves her, but afraid of losing her, afraid of accepting this truth, so he went away.

This idea came to my mind and I wanted to share it. It's short, but hope you liked it. Hope I didn't make anyone cry.

Thanks for giving it some of your time😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing! I love the analogy to a cactus...it really does deepen the understanding of their feelings and love. Love it! ;D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It's lovely! It's never too late..Khushi's confession was really beautiful...and I liked your short and sweet OS! 😊
Cactus , desert and mirage...I'd used these to compare ArHi in one of my poems!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: coldy07

It's lovely! It's never too late..Khushi's confession was really beautiful...and I liked your short and sweet OS! 😊

Cactus , desert and mirage...I'd used these to compare ArHi in one of my poems!

Thank you so much...
Want to read this poem!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice concept and very nicely done!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ss374

Nice concept and very nicely done!!!

You left me with no words to say.
😃 for passing on this!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing os such a sad one but well described feelings nad emotions
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Originally posted by: The007Shivani

amazing os such a sad one but well described feelings nad emotions

Thanks for your commments!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rukuswasthika

loved the comparison dear

Thanks😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@bridgeofdreams: Awesum n fantastic OS!!!!😊

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