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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: shenz_kriyaansh

aw!!! while reading all this my expressions usually changed... smiling most of the time... n reading Kria's state of mind.. her heart somersaults... her cheeks getting crimson red... wow!!! her attitude..lovely


fab update

by now the status of likes for the update is 50+

so update asap




hey thnk u sooo much im so glad ur liking it..

yaa i cudnt belive it wud be around 59.. all coz u guyss.. thnkx for all ur support.. 😳😳

i will updt today. not now.. but by evening.. 😳


@kriyaansh_jaanu: thnk u sooo much.. 😳😳 thnkx for all the support dear 😃


Originally posted by: Shweta-kriyansh

awesome basket ball match...there was hell lot of closeness between them...i loved it...especially the conflict emerging at certain times in kria's mind...at 1 point she says-she is gonna beat the hell out of rey,another point lost into his hazel eyes,then again cursing herself for thinking of a devil...nyc update...thnx for the pm...i could visually imagine each and every basket...and the last one,i was like in my lala land...with the same bg music as kriyansh...



thnkxx dear for such big coment.. its soo oevrwhelming to c how u all like my ,updts.. thnkx for giving me this happines..! 😃

its called as fight wid feelings and love-hate relationship.. she will realise soon..! and it will b fun to read their takkar i will bring it in my ss.. 😳

hahahhahaa draw karna hi tha warna she wud get some task if she lost..! 😆 or if rey one..! anyways there are yet more scenes to cum..

aah hw i miss Kriyaansh Bg ( played for Kriyaansh nly ) gosh! those days...
😍 sigh...

@prrk: thnkx a lot dear..😊😊

@asha_arsha: thnk u sooo much dear 😊😊😊😊

@sipcyrays: sure i will add u and u will recieve pms soon.. im gald u liked it.. 😳

@neha & @eyefriendly : thnk u soo much guys.. luv u all.. 😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
Merko laga u r jus a GOOD WRITER Buh ye kyaa?!?!!?!?!? Itna accha editing? Superb nams..Love u!
U r a all rounder ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
her best friends boy friend,... OMG... thats an awesome start to thr SS... really looking forward to this SS... :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84


hey guys have u noticed i have made a image edit for this SS.. and i dont knw y bt i keep drooling over it.. did u like it ??? pls do gimme ur reviews..

okay now i sseriously dont know how this has come up becuase i wrote in a hurry..
well i have my lab xam today and on 1st.. followed by 2nd sem externals on 12june to 2july.. hence i may update or i may not.. but there will be one update of all my works on 3rd or 2nd june. after tat i dont knw i cant promise.. will c tat later. here there is no merely kriyaansh scene.. but this is required for the further progress.. of the ss 😳

CHAPTER 2

'have u seen reyaansh singhania ??' a gal wearing a red halter top and shorts asked me popping her eyes out.. as if I gave the right address she wud seriously die out of heart attack! Poor souls I don't understand whats soo mad about REYAANSH ?? afterall he is a DEVIL!!! Isn't he ??

'hellooo???' she snapped her fingers infront of my eyes.. I came out of my thoughts.. 'well a i.. ( well do I really knw wer he is ?? he never temme!!! *pout* ) I im sorry I don't know' I answered her.. for wich I just got cold shrug.. huh what did I do now ??

As I walked thru the corridor one more gal bumped on me .. 'im sorry' I tried to apologize.. ' have have u seen reyaansh singhania ??'

'huh???'

'HAVE U SEEN REYAANSH ??? pls pls pls temme!!!'

'NO!!!' I replied coldly as I made my way out of her sight..

'hey kria!!' someone called me..

I turned to look a bunch of gals standing right infront of me..

'have seen reyaansh ??' all asked in unison wid full of excitement..

WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WID EVERY1 ?? y reyaansh ?? kya wo SRK hai ? joy eh sab usse milne ke liye mare jaa rhe hai ?? Huh!! Kuch gadbad hai!!!!

Before I cud answer them neha waved hi approaching to me..

'hii kria!!' she greeted wid her sweet smile.. 'hi neha' no I wasn't in a gud mood..!!

She raised her eye brows and then she shifted her gaze to the gals standing infront of me

'pls tell us have seen reyaansh ?? itna bhaav kyu khaa rhi ho!!'

'HUH WHAT ???' 'CAN U JUS LEAVE ??' asked gritting my teeth.. I swear I wud seriously murder anyone who took his name now!! Was I his personal assistant ?? okay I agree im AGS but doesn't mean tat I keep an account on wer rey is and wer he is not!! Moreover wats soo special today ??

Above all, why all gals searched him ?? was worrying me.. no matter how many times I brushed it off I wud witness another gal infront of me asking for him..!

'arrggghhh' I blurted out as those gals went out of my sight..

'what happening kria ? y u upset!?'

I glared at her.. oh well she has a little of brains she did understand what was wrong.. she pulled me near the steps.. from wer the clear view of atrium cud b seen..

I saw rey circled by so many gals requesting pleading and some even beggin.. I wondered what cud b..!!

'kria u not knowing ???'

'what ??'

'PROM NIGHT!!!'

I was left jaws hanging down!! How is tat I don't have any idea regarding PROM NIGHT!! Wen all this matters wer handled by Reyaansh and I I ? don't have any clue ?? wow!! Great!!!

'sab gals rey ke peeche pade hai!! so tat he wud pick one of them his date!!'


'idiot gals!!' we murmured together..

'whatevr' I said as I left the place.. no not tat I cudnt see him flirting wid soo many gals.. isn't it bad manners to eavesdrop ??

No my mood was perfectly fine I kept chanting.. no im not affected!!

'DAMNNN!!! What hell is wrong wid me! Let him go to hell!!' I tried to calm myself down.. but every time I did the picture came to my mind.. rey wid so many gals.. wait wait rey ?? no no its REYAAANSH!!'

'REYAANSH ??' I froze as someone repeated his name behind me.. it was her..! my best friend 'sharon!!'

'sharon ???' whispered slowly turning back to her..

No matter how many gals asked him out.. reyaansh toh Sharon ki saat jayega na.. *sigh..!

UGGHH wait y am I sad ?? DAMNNN!!!

'kria ?? ru okay ??' Sharon kept her hand on my shoulders trying to c if I really had any senses wid this world..

I turned.. and gave a weak smile at her..

And then I moved near my locker .. I cudnt face her.. these days I don't understand y am I soo uncomfortable wid her.. everytime I meet her I imagine her being wid reyaansh and their roman..

FREAKKK SHUT THE f**k UP KRIA!! ur thinking too much!!!!! Uggghhh god I need a BREAK!!

'so kria who is ur date for prom night ??' Sharon asked applying lip gloss.. I froze again.. *sigh 3years of college life not a single date! Neither I want one!! Huh..

'kria ??'

'huh .. no one!!' I shrugged.. and picked up my bags..

'really ?? u dint find anyone kria! c'mon koi toh hoga jiske saat..'

I kept listening to her..

'jiske saath tum prom mei jana chahthi ho..

I imagined myself wid rey..

jiske saath slow romantic number karna chahthi hoo..

a slow number wid him..

jiske proposal ka intezaar kar rhi ho..'

rey proposing me.. FREAK NOOO!!!! I blurted out loudly..

sharon looked at me confused..

'what happned kria ??'

'umm nothing.. wo wo im not interested.. Sharon il cu later I have a class now'

I left the locker room asap..! DAMN TAT WAS CLOSE!!!

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After my class.. I had to get into work..! we had to finalise prom night arrangements.. only 5 days more.. I dint have any clue regarding this.. !! it was sure im going to strangle reyaansh for such carelessness!! How cud he not temme!!

Huh' searching him everywer in the college I finally reached canteen..

I saw him wid someone.,. it was Sharon.. wait..! wat did I see ?? rey was k k kiss kissing her ?? public mei ?? a tear escaped frm my eyes..

I realised there was no one in canteen except the two.. college was over.. what did students had to do in college ??

I kept staring at them for few more seconds.. I felt my heart sink..

Actual story : dust entered sharon's eyes.. wich gave her a pain and made her whince.. since rey was sitting next to her.. he got up from his seat made her stand and started blwing air to her eyes.. but since rey's back was facing kria she cud see tat they both wer kissing well actually they weren't.!

I book fell down from my hand breaking my senses..

He turned .. I was teary eyed.. I realised the danger and ran out..

I heard him calling my name 'kria stop !!tum jaisa soch rhi ho waisa kuch nhi..' but before he cud explain I ran out..! why do I need an explanation after all ?? they are couples and they are free to do anythn.. but why the hell is it affecting me! Why on earth am I crying ??

I ran from canteen to corrido.. ran down the steps and then to atrium.. and then I stopped myself and started crying even more cursing him million times.. why I did it I don't know no I don't know!!!

I slowly walked on the corridors near the atrium.. the picture again and again kept intruding my mind.. I dint know were I was going..

What I was doing ? oh yes I was crying my heart out..

I whipped my tear finally getting control over my tears..

But then I felt a strong pull on my arms and I was pulled to fire exit wid the my mouth closed by his palms!

His ??

My eyes was closed.. yes I cud feel him.. it was reyaansh.!!!!


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so how was it ?? did u like it ?? pls do gimme ur reviews!!


next update after 55 likes.. 😃


sorry for typos errors im in a hurry i have to b in clg in 1 hr.. so hopw u understand


Edited by nams_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Nams this was a maazing Update.
Loved it a lot.
The part Kria feeling bad wen gals were asking abt Rey was cute.
Kria didnt know anything abt the prom-so bad.
Yup She M<u all and He came to make her understand dat it was wrong.so sweet of him.
Thanks for p[m.
All the best for ur Exams.
Update next part soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
that was really goood!
i love how the fighter kria is so adamant on the fact that she hates him, that she can't even acknowledge her actual feelings.. lol
its going great!
very eager to read more!
good luck for your exams!
and only update when you can
no needta rush (=
Hinal =D
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87

Very nice update to read. Finally we got to know who is Rey GF. Sharon!!!!! Sochete bhi huye odd lag raha hain.

My heart nearly miss a beat when u u said they were kissing in the canteen. Thx god u clarify this later on in the update.

Kria is feeling jealous. Hope Rey is able to clear the MU.

PROM NIGHT on the way.Interesting

Wish u all the best for the exams.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
nams dii what an update
just loved it
the way u described kria's jealousy was awesome
n about ur edit its awesome m too drooling over it
all the best for ur exams
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89

Edit was superb..even i was latoo over it.


Awesome updt..


Loved it wen kriya was feeling jealous seeing d other gals drooling over him...


Esp. one aftr one asked her out..


Then comes our Sharon...rey n sharon a couple.


No wonder kriya misunderstood their position...


Though he tried telling her she dint listen..


N den d so awaited FIRE EXIT SCENE!!!!


Y did u stop here nams..??


But it was a amazing updt.

Edited by snigdha_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90

Awesome updt..All the best 4 ur lab xams...


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