The nest of dreams Manveer romance Last part - Page 7

so u luv longg cmnts ok so im gonna give u a really long cmnt

1st ov all ur a gr8 writer 2ndly the track nowadays is going lyk damn hell so am really very glad to read ur ss its gr8 oxm work oxm text plus its a gr8 idea to shift the story from a majnu laila princess love story to a pg story lyk how many guys and gals fall for their pgs(paying guest) afat story hai i lyk it alot plus the pics u hane inserted in between are also marvellous and my fvt scene was when they were climbin on the ladder while singing songs plus the songs are also gr8 perfect according to the situation lyk bin tere and beete lamhe my fvt character was,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,obv uv cuz i die for him so best of luck and keep writing