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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update.sorry yaar m very bad at writin long comments
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wonderful one...
Thanks for PM...
Eagerly waiting for your next part...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😭 😭 saddy part

i loved it
do pm me the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34

The nest of dreams Part 5

plz giv detailed comments.Thanks to all who read my SS & post comments

Kamala went inside.
Manyata:Who came?
Kamala lied:A stranger.
M:Oh!I thought….
K:What did you think?
M:I expected one of them to come.
K:Why?
M:I feel guilty.Because of me they had to leave.Where will they be now?
K:Why should you be guilty?That Uday…he crossed his limits.How dare he misbehave with you?
M:Actually I over reacted.I should have taken it as a joke.Instead of that I made it a big issue.
K:How can you take it as a joke?If we had money we could have filed a rape case against Uday.
M:Rape case?Why di?He did'nt do anything bad with me?
K:Then?
M:The way he interected with me…I did'nt like it that much.
K:That means he did'nt…?
M:No di.He is not a dangerous guy.He just used to irritate me with his flirtatious behaviour.That's all.Actually it was just a joke.A fun.He did'nt mean to hurt me purposefully.But I ….I should'nt have….
Kamala was shocked.
K:Oh!What did I do to them?Poor guys.



Uday:Deepu...you should meet Kamala today.You should not simply buy flowers from him and come back.You should confess your love to her.
Deepak smiled.
Deepak went to the French colony for jogging.He saw Kamala coming by cycle with flowers.
He went towards her.She smiled.He was relieved.
D:I was tense to face you after that incident.
K:Why?Deepu has not done anything wrong.It is because of that Uday.
D:I apologize on his behalf.
She smiled:Let us forget the past.
K:I doubted whether you will be seen here today.
D:I doubted whether you will ignore me.
K:Why should i?You are my friend.Right?You will always be my friend.
He smiled.
K:Don't you need flowers?Your dream girl will be cut up with you for not getting flowers for some days.
She gave him a flower bouquet.
K:I can't wait anymore to see your dream girl.Who is she?Please introduce me to her today.Today is a nice day.We had a patch up today.So that will be a celebration.
D:But i am nervous about how you will react seeing her.
K:Why?
D:It's like that.
K:Why?
He kept quiet.
K:Tell me.
D:Every morning after dressing up do you look at the mirror?
K:Yes.
D:That time the face you is my dream girl's face.
Kamala blushed.
Meera Jasmine

Deepak became happy seeing it.
http://www.kerals.com/kerala/wp-content/uploads/2012/01/Kunchacko-Boban1.jpg
Suddenly he realized that it was Manyata who was standing before him with flowers.
She was smiling at him.

D:Manyata!Where is Kamala?
M:She is busy.Got a new order to make South Indian food for the tourists.Di is the best to make South Indian food.She went to deliver them food.So i was entrusted to sell flowers.Do you want flowers?
D:Yes.
She gave a bouquet.He paid for it.
M:Where are you staying?
D:At the water Street.
M:How are your friends?
D:Fine.
M:How is Uday?
He smiled:He is keeping fine.Why did you ask specially about Uday?
Manyata became shy.
M:Because of me he got insulted.So i wanted to know about his condition.Poor Uday.Actually he was not that bad to me.He was just a harmless flirt.But i over reacted.I feel sorry.
Deepak smiled.He was happy for Uday.
M:Now when we think we realize that we really had fun when you all were around us.We should not have fought with you all.Anyways i will tell Kamala di that i saw you here.We hope you all will come back to our house.Bye.
D:Bye.
Deepak looked around.The little girl came towards him running:Uncle.
He gave her the flowers giving her a kiss and went away.The kid walked to the garden and gave the flowers to Kamala who was sitting there.

Manyata reached home.She did'nt see Kamala there.
M:Where is di?
Manyata changed her clothes.
Kamala came.
M:Where were you di?Why were you late?
K:I went to the garden to take rest.
Kamala kept the flowers in the vase.
M:I saw Deepu on the way.
Kamala's eyes sparkled.
M:I gave him flowers also.I told him that we expect them to come back.
K:Why did you tell him like that?
K:It's better to patch up.Right?Otherwise we both won't get peace of mind.

K:Ok.Let them come.
Manyata became very happy.
K:But Uday should not come here.Let the other two come back.
Manyata was shocked:Why di?
K:He is so stupid.So irritating.
M:He was just making fun of me.
Kamala looked at her in a naughty manner:What did you say?
Manyata kept quiet.
K:When you said you are guilty itself i understood that you have some feelings for Uday.
Manyata was embarrassed.
M:Di...i don't know what i feel for him.But i miss him.Is it love?
Kamala nodded her head with a smile.
Manyata blushed.
K:You call Uday back.
M:But will he come back?Because of him he got insulted.He may be hating me now.
K:No,he loves you.
M:How do you know that?
K:He told me.
Manyata could'nt believe it:He told you?
K:Yes.
M:When did you meet him?
K:After they left once he had come here to see you.That time he told me that he loves you.But i did'nt believe him as i thought he tried to molest you.I lied to you that it was a stranger who came here.But that time you were expecting for him to return to you.Later only i understood that.
Manyata felt sad:So sad.He must be really sad.Right di?
K:It's my fault.
M:No.It's my fault.Because of me only you misunderstood him.
K:We can correct our mistake.
M:How di?
K:You should stop the Tom and Jerry fight with Uday and meet him.Tell him that you also love him.
Manyata was shy.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35

Lovely update...so finally all misunderstandings are cleared ...hope in the next chapter M will meet UV and they confess their love.

Plzzz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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read the 4th and the 5th part.. sorry couldnt read it before.. both were great loved it.. thanx for pm.. plz continue :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it yaar it was amazing
Poor deepik nows he day dreaming about her😆 what if he really said all of that to Manyata😕🤣 probably would have gooten beat up from 3 people no 4 Manyata, then Uday Veer for backstabbing him😆 then from Kamala for not saying all of that to her and then the least not the least himself for his stupidity🤣 well loved it cause Manyata now realize that she Loves UdayVeer and Kamala also knows that they both do love eachother. Well cant wait for UV reply and again I loved it and cant wait for the next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
nice...good that the misunderstandings are cleared...good work...update soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update...
Thanks for PM...
Waiting for your next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40

The nest of dreams Part 6

Manyata sent a SMS to Uday.Uday was thrilled to read her sms:I want to meet you.

Manyata waited at the beach for Uday.Uday came with a smile.Her face blossomed.
M:That day it happened like that.Because of me you all became sad.Right?
U:It's because of me...because of some stupid character.I am the one who did the mistake.As usual i just did something for fun.Just a joke.Nothing more.But nobody understood it.When you called me i became happy.I can clear the misunderstandings now.
She smiled.
U:Why did you call me?
She became shy:I thought many times.I don't know whether i have to say it to you or not.If i don't tell you that i will not get peace of mind.
U:What do you want to share with me?
She became shy:Some times i have enjoyed when you disturbed me.To be frank i realized that unknowingly i was enjoying your pranks.Purposefully i pretended to be strong to win.That was my pleasure.
Uday just smiled.
M:But i accept my defeat now.I surrender.Now onwards can i always fail before you?
Uday could not believe his ears.He smiled.He was very happy.Manyata felt very happy.
Suddenly Uday was reminded of Kamala's words:You love her.But Manyata deserves a better guy than a big flirt like you.She deserves a decent guy.
His heart broke.
Suddenly he started clapping hands.
U:So finally Miss Sweety Manyata admitted that she loves me.Remember i challenged you that i will make you say 'I love you' to me?So i won the game and accepted the defeat.Great.i was waiting for this day ever since the first day we met.
Manyata was stunned.
U:I get bored when the girl i woo falls for me.You know that.Right?You know that i am a big flirt..a Casanova.
She was shocked.
U:Now it happened again.You are the last one in line i got bored of.So we will put an end to this.Let us forget everything.Anyways i had a nice time.
He smiled at her.
Manyata was shattered.

She burst into tears.Uday longed to wipe her tears and tell her that he loves her to the core.But without doing that he just got inside the car and drove it off.
While driving Uday's mind was full of his moments with Manyata.His heart was paining.
Manyata sat there and cried thinking of the moments she spent with Uday.Their hearts cried:
Dard mein bhi yeh lab muskura jaate hai
Beete lamhein humein jab bhi yaad aate hai]2
Beete lamheinnn

[Chand lamhaat ke vaaste hi sahi
Mushkura kar mili thi mujhe zindagi]2

Teri aagosh din the mere kate
Teri baaahon mein thi mere raatien kati
OoO OO

Aaj bhi jab woh pal mujhko yaad aate hain
Dil se saare gumo ko bhoola jate hai
[Dard mein bhi yeh lab muskura jaate hai
Beete lamhein humein jab bhi yaad aate hai]2

Beete lamheinnn..{The train}.

Uday went back.
Deepak:Did you confess?
Yash:What was her reaction?
U:I did'nt confess.But she confessed her love to me.
Y:Really?Wow!As usual like any other girl she also fell in love with you.
U:But i told her that i don't like her.
They were shocked.
Y:Why did you tell her like that?
D:Whenever girls fall for you you have a tendency to reject her.You did that this time also?
Y:How could you look at her innocent face and tell her that you don't love her?You broke that little girl's heart.You will be cursed.
Their words pricked Uday's heart.
U:Now she may be hating me.Let her feel that i am the most dirtiest man she has ever seen in her life.Let her think like that.A dirty flirt like me should not get a sweet innocent pure girl like Manyata.i don't deserve her.
Uday shed tears.Deepak and Yash could not believe that their friend Uday had this kind of a soft side too.
D:Sorry.We misunderstood you for a second.You have changed a lot.So now you are also pure.Your love is true.
Y:Yes.So don't think you don't deserve Manyata.
U:Kamala's only hope is Manyata.She will be broken if she comes to know that her sister is blindly in love with a dirty guy like me.It should not happen.
Uday went away.
Y:Deepu..i can't simply digest this.We have to let Manyata know the truth.

Manyata returned home.
Kamala:Did you meet Uday?
Manyata lied:No di.I did'nt get time to meet him.
K:You should find time for this.Otherwise...
M:Otherwise also it does'nt make any difference di.
K:Still you can't surrender?
M:No.
Manyata went inside.
K:This girl is so stubborn.

The next morning..
Deepak saw Kamala with flowers.They both walked towards each other.
K:Manyata told me that she saw you.
He smiled.
She gave him flowers.
K:I have to go back fast to deliver food to the restaurant also.Bye.
D:Bye.
She left.He gave the flowers to the little girl.Kamala walked to the garden.
K:I will get late.I should not waste time.But i don't want to miss the flowers at any cost.
Suddenly the little girl called her:Aunty!
She turned back and received the flowers happily.
K:Can you tell your uncle that i want to see him?I want to see him very badly.Can't wait.
Suddenly she found the area empty.The girl had run away before hearing anything.
K:Oh!When i will be able to meet him?

Yash went to Kamala's house.
Kamala was surprised to see Yash.
K:Yash!I am so happy that you visited us.Hope you are not angry with us now.Sorry for everything.
Y:No.We are not angry with you all.Where is Manyata?
K:She has gone for tuition.
Yash thought:Oh!I can't meet Manyata.Then how will i tell her the truth?
Suddenly his eyes struck the flowers in Kamala's hand.
Y:Going to deliver flowers now?
K:No.I got these flowers from a kid.
Y:From a kid?
K:Every morning i get flowers from a little girl at the garden in the French Colony.
Y:So funny.Why is that kid giving you flowers every day?
Kamala blushed:Somebody may be entrusting her to give me the flowers.
Suddenly Yash remembered the conversation between Deepak and him..
Y:Then the flowers you bought from Kamala...?You bought flowers from her for your girl.Right?To whom do you give the flowers to?
D:I give the flowers to the little girl i see there.
Yash thought:What if the little girl to whom Deepu gives flowers is the same girl who gives the flowers to Kamala?I should try to find out what's happening.

The next morning Yash followed Deepak secretly to the French Colony.He watched Deepak buying flowers from Kamala and parting their ways.He saw Deepak giving the flowers to a little girl.Yash followed the little girl.He was surprised to see the girl to whom the little girl gave flowers.The little girl ran away.
Edited by jasminerahul - 13 years ago

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