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Posted: 13 years ago
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The nest of dreams Part 7

Sorry guys 4 disappointing u all.Not much Manveer scenes in this part.Bcz i need to unite Deepu & Kamala.Please 4give me.The next part will be full of Manveer.

Yash:Kamala!
Kamala was surprised to see Yash:Yash!What a pleasant surprise!You also started jogging like Deepu?I just saw Deepu now.I did'nt see you with Deepu.
Yash was restless:Kamala...these flowers...these flowers are sold by you only.You can't identify the flowers you sold?
She smiled:I know that these flowers are the flowers i sold.
Y:That means you know the person who is sending these flowers to you?
K:No.I sell flowers to many guys.I don't know who is sending me these flowers.Whoever he is i love him.
She blushed.
Yash smiled:Kamala..you fool...that is Deepu.
She was shocked:What?Deepu?
Y:Ya.
K:No.He has a girl friend.For her only she buys flowers from me.
Y:Nonsense.He has no other girl friend.He does'nt have the courage to confess his love to you.So he created a girl friend.He buys flowers from you only to get closer to you.He simply gives the flowers to a little girl.He never knew that she was giving the flowers to you.What a co incidence!
Kamala could not believe it:Are you telling the truth?Or you are making fun of me?
Y:No.I am telling you the truth.Deepu himself told us that he loves you a lot.
She blushed.
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Deepak and Yash in the room.
Y:I went to see Manyata to tell her the truth about Uday.But i could'nt see her there.But i met Kamala.She told me that her uncle who stays in Chennai visited her.He fixed her marriage.She is very upset.
Deepak was shocked:But today morning also i met her.She did'nt tell me anything about it.
Y:He is hiding her pain.She does'nt want to get married.But her uncle is forcing her.Deepu...don't delay anymore.You go and save her.Tell her that you love her.
Deepak rushed to Kamala's house.
She was surprised:Deepu!
D:Is it true that your marriage got fixed?Yash told me that you are forced to get engaged to marry the person you don't like.
She became very emotional.Her eyes became wet.
K:What is the use of discussing it?It is my fate.

D:Kamala...Can i save you?
She looked at him.
D:I love you.
She looked at him emotionally.
D:The next week our exams get over.Then i will try for a job.After getting a job will you marry me?
She was very happy.But she hid it.
K:Then what about the girl you love?Today also you gave her flowers.Right?
D:Actually Kamala...i was lying to you.That girl is none other than you.
K:Then the flowers..?
D:I was giving the flowers to a little girl who comes that way.
K:Do you know what that girl used to do with the flowers you give her?
D:No.
K:But i know.
He looked at her eagerly.He was wondered.
K:She used to give the flowers to a girl at the garden.Unknowingly she fell in love with the flower man.
He could not digest it:My God!Who is that girl?Because of my carelessness and the little girl's mischievous activity unnecessarily a poor girl dreamt a lot.Her heart will break when she comes to know that i don't love her.
K:Who said you don't love her.I know that you love her.
D:No Kamala.Believe me.I love only you.
She smiled:That girl is me only.
He was surprised:Kamala!
She nodded smiling.
He looked at her sparkling eyes and sweet smile.
K:I love you Deepu.
He became very happy.
He was really surprised:So you knew that i love you?
K:Yes.Yash told me.
He was surprised.
K:Actually my wedding is not fixed.Our relatives don't care about us.Then why should my uncle fox my wedding?It was Yash's trick to make you confess your love to me.
He could not believe it.
They both were lost in each other.
Manyata came.She was shocked to see them looking at each other.
M:Di!
They looked at her.
Kamala was embarrassed:Manyata...actually we...we love each other.
Manyata was surprised:Really?I am so happy for you both.But why did you hide it from me?
K:Actually today only this stupid Deepu confessed his love to me.Because of that there were some confusions between us.It was Deepu only sent the flowers to me through that kid.
Manyata was surprised:Really?

After a week...
Deepak visits Kamala.
K:How was your practical exams?
D:Everything went well.
She smiled.
He saw violin on the table.
He was surprised:Do you use violin?
K:No.It is our dad's.He used to love it.We used to listen to him play violin.
He took it and played violin.She was surprised.She was engrossed in it.She stood close to him romantically.
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K:Thank you so much Deepu.You reminded me of my lovely dad.
He smiled:Where is Manyata?
K:Today is her last exam.
D:Kamala...she had met Uday.
K:What?But she told me that she did'nt see him.Why did she lie to me?
D:May be she thought that the truth will hurt you.
K:I did'nt understand.
Deepu told her what happened between Uday and Manyata.She was shocked.
K:Oh!Without believing his love i only told him that Manyata deserves someone better.
Deepak was shocked.
D:She won't get a better guy.Because Uday is the best for her.He loves her a lot.

Deepak and Kamala met Uday.
K:Uday...sorry for whatever i said.
U:What you said is true.I don't suit Manyata.
K:No Uday.I was wrong.I did'nt understand your love.You love her a lot.Then who else can be better for her?
He looked at her unbelievingly.
K:Now a days she is depressed.Now i understand why.She is sad as she thinks that you ditched her.Please don't make my little sister upset.
Uday was confused:Kamala!

Yash:You stupid!Go and tell her how much you love her.
Uday smiled:Yes.
He ran to his room and changed his outfit.
Deepak,Kamala and Yash smiled at him.
M:Am i looking ok?
Everyone felt like laughing.
M:I am asking a serious question.But you all are making fun of me?Tell me buddies.
Y:When did you lose confidence in your own looks?Common yaar...now you look so dashing that Manyata cannot spare you even for a moment.
Uday blushed.
U:Kamala...i need flowers for Manyata.
Kamala nodded her head with a smile:I will give you a beautiful flower bouquet for my dearest sister.
He smiled.

Uday entered Manyata's house.She was shocked to see him.
Edited by jasminerahul - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
awesome update loved it now she knows what love is she wants uday to make up with maanyat what if she does not accept him loved the update thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
nice one.yaar yash ko bi koi mil jati.just kidie.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
Great updates loved it.. Thanx for pm Plz continue :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
Sorry for coming late Jas
Nice update ...happy Deepu and Kamal are together finally and Manveer are to meet in the next chapter can't for it😉
Thxs for the pm🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
Excellent update...
Thanks for PM...
Waiting for your next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57

The nest of dreams Part 8

Since its d last part plz write ur fav scene & fav charac

Uday Veer's lips shivered:Manyata...i don't know what to say.I don't know how to apologize to you.But please forget everything.
Manyata looked at him with anger.Slowly Manyata started crying.
She moved away.He started moving towards her with a smile.
M:No..don't come towards me.
She started throwing vessels at him.
U:Manyata...what are you doing?
She pushed him:Go...i don't like you.
He showed her the flower bouquet he brought for her.
U:I want to be beaten by your vessels every day.
He smiled.She looked at his eyes.Unknowingly she extended her hand and took the flower bouquet from him.
U:I love you Manyata.And i will not leave you at any cost..even if you disown me.
She was looking at him emotionally.

He cupped her face in his hands:Without you my life is impossible.
He looked at her deeply.She was very emotional.

They both got lost in each other.
Kamala,Deepak and Yash who reached there smiled seeing it.

K:Hey!
Uday and Manyata moved from each other.They were shy.
Yash:Uday...don't be over romantic.
K:Let Manyata finish her studies first.After that get married.Then only romance is allowed.
Uday and Manyata were shy.
Y:Two lovers have united.So it's the time for celebration.So i have bought Chinese food.It's my treat.Let us have it now.
Yash led them to the dining room.
Suddenly Yash saw the flowers in Manyata's hand.
Y:Like Deepu and Kamala you people also started flower romance?When will my turn come?Who will give me a chance to have flower romance?
They all burst into laughter.


The next morning...
Uday,Deepak,and Yash went jogging.The little girl ran towards them and gave a flower bouquet to Yash.They were surprised.Yash was really excited:Uday...for the first time while you were with me i got a flower bouquet from a girl.It's impossible.
Uday and Deepak giggled.
Y:Sweet little girl...who gave you these flowers?
She pointed out her finger towards a beautiful girl.They looked at her.Yash's eyes were fixed on her.She was blushing.Yash went towards her.
Y:For the first time a girl is approaching me.Usually no girl falls for me.
She:That's your speciality.That's what attracted me towards you.
He was embarrassed.Deepak and Uday laughed.
Slowly he became serious.
He looked at her eyes.:Will you be my girl?


She blushed.

He smiled.
Uday and Deepak became happy for Yash.

The end
Edited by jasminerahul - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
loved the update uday and maanyata made up her sister got a guy a who loves her and yash now found his soul mate loved it thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi Jasmine ...thxs for the lovely update and this beautiful FF enjoy it...sad it's the end but every good thing has an end. For me I loved Manveer and my fav scenes are Manveer ones when UV aws teasing M and M confessed her love to UV and latter rejected her for the sake of her sis...loved that as it shows how UV really loves and cares for M.
A big Thank U for this beautiful FF hope u will soon start another one😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww that was the end😭 welll i loved it❤️ and the end was sweet, fair and adorable thanks for the pm and if you write another ff please pm me😊 o yea the ending was amazing👏
Edited by please6 - 13 years ago

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