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princes939

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Posted: 13 years ago

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sapna sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

amazing start

loved both parts

do continue soon

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princes939

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

DO LIKE AND COMMENT!!!plzz

PART 3

Maan woke up at 6 went to his gym..did his tai chi and came back to his room..saw geet sleeping and maan forgot all his anger..maan"wow she is looking so beautiful and inocent"then sudenly came back to his senses and saw her geting disturbed by the light coming from the window..maan "nae how can i think like that like all girls she is also after me for money..maan she is traping u..no i have to get her out of my life as soon as posible"he went to have shower and came back waped in towel..saw room was all clean bed sheet was cleanly on the bed and geet was no where. He got ready and went to dining table. Geet was in kitchen preparing breakfast.dadi was siting in the living room..maan "good morning dadi" dadi "good morning bete"dadima eyes went to his hand"maan yeh kya hoa"maan didnt even bothered to bandage his hand last night when he punched mirror..maan"wo dadi.." dadi"maan bete app bhe na abhi do din nae hoi hospital se aye hoe ap ko apna koi khyal ha ke nae"dadi saw geet coming out of kitchen "geet kamre se aid box lae"geet"kya hoa dadima sb theek ha na?" dadi "yeh dekhye maan ke hath se khoon bhe rha ha jaldi laye" geet saw this and ran towards room..maan saw her that worriedness was writen on her face for him. Dadi bandaged his hand nd all went to have breakfast..maan thought he should ask geet y she slept in his room..and clearout all questions runing in his mind..but then thought he dont want to stres dadi so he should talk to her alone.
All had breakfast..geet served all and sat next to maan. Maan was again surprised if she is maid then y is she siting in the dining table..dev and nandani joined the table..maan had no idea who is nandani..but still didnt asked but was confused why dev and nandani came togther and y is she siting next to dev. Nandani "geet didi jb se mumbai ayi hon mein ne abhi tak yaha se shoping nae ki tw aj ke lye kahi chale?"geet" aray han nandini mein ne bhe kuch shopin krni ha..dadi ap bhe chale na" dadi"nae ap log jao mere se shopin nae hoti mein thak jao gi" dev in a teasing tone"han han abhi abhi shadi hoi ha apne pati ke paise tw udao gi na" nandani"dev.."geet cut her and said "tw dev pati hote kis lye ha agr pati kamae gae tw wo paise beviyan hi kharch kre gi na"maan was all confused and many questions were roming around his mind but dont know wat to ask as it seems that nandani is devs wife..but how when where is naintara..and he also got to know that her name is geet..is geet nandanis sister..!!his head was roming around with questions..in furstation he got up and left every1 and went to office. Here all left was confused with maan act and was having breakfast when geet felt like vomting she ran to washroom. Dadi and nandani asked her if she is not fine she should not go to shoping..but geet insisted and said she is fine.
Nandani and geet went to shoping. Both were roming and buying and were enjoying when geet felt weak and was abt to faint when was caught by nandani "didi ap theek hona"geet "han wo chakr a gaya" nandani"nae ap theek nae ho chalo hospital" geet"arre kuch nae hoa wo bas garmi ki waja se" nandani insised and both went to hospital.

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U guys have already guesed i gues so..!!

NEXT : SCROL DOWN

Edited by princes939 - 13 years ago

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princes939

@princes939

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Part 4

Nandani and geet both went to hospital. Geet was being checked. After some time geet came out with doctor "aray ap dono itna pereshan mat hon..good news ha..geet u r expecting" both widened ther smile geet "really" in exictment she huged nandani..both went to car..both were realy exicted. Geet "nandani baby ki shoping kere..mujhe maan ko surprise dena ha" nandani agred both buyed many baby stuff...and ordered a cradle...both went home..nakul inform dadi went to mandr and maan dev r in ofice..both decorated the baby room for givin maan surpise..room was already painted in pink color..nandani" didi ap ko phele se hi pata tha kya baby ke bare mein" geet"nae tw aj hi pata chala" nandani" tw yeh room pink kau ha aysa lag rha ha kisi baby ka room ha" geet "nandani jb mein phele maa bane wali thi tw maan ne is room.." nandani" samaj gai chale ab room decorate krte hai warna jijaji or dev a jae ge" geet" hmm".
Both decorated the room..!!it was all complete..!!
The bell rang..nandani"didi lagta ha dev or jej a gae..mein dev ko le kr jati hon..ap surprise do..all the best"
Nandani took dev to room..maan was on way to his room when he saw geet runing to him and gave him hug..!!
Maan was lost in that hug and was abt to hug her back when geet pulled back..held maan and draging her to that room..stoped in mid way..geet "maan close ur eyes.." maan jerked her hand away " dekho geet mujhe tm se kuch baat krni ha" geet" maan baad mein abhi ap apni eyes band kro mujhe ap ko surpise dena ha" saying that she tried her dubata on his eyes and draged him to baby room and didnt even let him speak.
They entered the room geet caressed his face..geet "maan jo surpise mein ap ko dene ja rhi hon us se ap ki sari narazgi khatam ho gae gi..kau ke pata nae jb se hospital se aye ha mujhe se theek se baat bhe nae kr rhe"she opened the tye of her dubata from his eyes..he was dumbstuk for wat he saw..when he felt geet holding his hand and caressing her stomach..he widen his eyes.Geet "maan humara baby.." He was shocked he jerked his hand away from her. He shouted "JUST SHUT UP"he was holding his head.
Lisening to his shout dadi dev and nandani came to them. Geet was still was comfused isnt he happy..maan saw all standing he went to dadi and was abt to say when dadi interupted seeing all the room decorated with all the baby stuff " maan geet sach mein hum per dadi bane wale ha!!hum bhot khush hai..ab maan is bar ap geet ka bhot khiyal rakhe ge..pechli bar ki tarah kuch nae hona chaye" maan didnt know wat to say after lisening to dadi he went to room leaving all..he locked himself in his room..many question were coming in his mind y dadi said pechli bar ki tarha..kya geet phele bhe..nae mein tw usse janta tak nae..he went to her cupboard throwin all things out searching abt her who is she. While throwing all things he came acros a album..he took out that album. Opening it shocked him wat he saw.. His weding album.
He saw the date it was 2011 again he was shocked..then he saw date in his mobile 2012..how as he remembr it should b 2010!!!!how!!!
He didnt wanted to face geet..he called dev from his mobile and called him in his room.

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Maan"btao dev mein ne tm se kuch pocha ha meri geet se kb or kese shadi hoi??tm ne dosri shadi krli?naintara kaha ha?he screamed "MUJHE KUCH YAAD KAU NAE btao dev"

NEXT :PART 5

Edited by princes939 - 13 years ago

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

part 2
sadu kahin ka...
still they havent realized Maan ki yaadash tata babye hogayi hai...

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

part 3
nice part...
is Geet expecting?

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

part 4
wow nice part...
OMG Maan has come to know the truth but yet Dev and family to know about Maan's memory...
poor Geet...
cont soon dear...

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dolly10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

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princes939

@princes939

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Do comment and like!!!

Part 5

Dev entered maans room and huged maan dev"bro mein aj bhot khush hon ap papa bane wale hai or mein chachu"then his eyes went to see the room he was shocked to see all mess.
Dev"bro yeh kya hal bana rakha ha"
Maan"dev jo mein pochta hon us ka jawab do..geet kon ha?"dev got confused "kya matlb bro..geet ap ki patni or kon hogi"maan"nae meri shadi kb hoi..mujhe kuch yaad kau nae"dev"bro..."maan"btao dev mera jawab do mujhe kuch yaad nae"
Dev didnt answer he was confused and shocked to see the state of his brother..maan"or wo larki jo tmhare saat thi wo kon thi?han nandini kon ha wo?dev"bro ap ko kya hogaya mujhe kuch samaj nae a rhi nandani meri bivi ha" maan"kya..!!tm ne dosri shadi krli?"dev didnt answer.
Maan"btao dev mein ne tm se kuch pocha ha meri geet se kb or kese shadi hoi??tm ne dosri shadi krli?naintara kaha ha?he screamed "MUJHE KUCH YAAD KAU NAE btao dev"...maan holding his head having flashbacks but stil could not remembr..maan was abt to fall when dev"bro!!"dev laid maan on the bed..maan fainted.dev called the doctor..and told him the conv "doctor bro ko kuch yaad kau nae"doctor checked maan and came out of the room..all were standing there..dev"wo geet bro behosh ho gaye the."he didnt told maan and his conv to geet.doctor"do din hogaye ap logo ko kese nae pata chala ke maan ki yadash ja chuki ha..wo sirf un logo ko janta ha jo us ke saat bachpan se hai..un ki geet ji or shadi ke tym ki yadash ja chuki ha"geet"nahi doctor wo mujhe jante hai" dev"nae geet..wo na tmhe jante hai na shadi ke tym ko."dev told the conv betwen maan nd him.geet was shocked..dadi nandani both shocked huged geet..dev"doctor kuch ho skhta ha?"doctor"ap patient pr ziyada biti baton ko yad dilwane ka dabav na dale..ab jb un ko pata chal hi jaya ha tw ap un ko sachaye bta de"geet ran to the maans room and hold his hand and cried maan came consious due to her tears on palm."
Maan took his hand out of her grip.
Maan said politly"please mujhe akela chor do"geet"maan.." maan"mujhe dev se baat krni ha" geet ran out crying..maan closed his eyes he was being the reason for her cry"dev entered"bro.." maan"mera jawab do dev" dev"bro ap ki acident ki waja se ap ki yadash chali gai ha"maan"yadash chali gai..nae aysa nae ho skta..yaha tak ke mujhe apni shadi tak yad nae..nae!!" dev "aysa hi ha bro..bro ap or geet ek dosre se bhot pyar krte ha..ap ki love mariage thi.."maan interupted"dev tm jante ho msk kbhi pyar nae kr skta..kbhi nae"
Dev"bro mein sach khe rha hon..or rahi baat meri shadi ki tw naintara se coma mein ha. Agr wo sahi bhe ho gai tw mein us se divoce le chuka hon..or us ne kuch aysa kiya ha ke wo jail jae gi or nandani ko mein amirsar mein mila..hmhari ek dosre se pyar krte hai is lye do mahine phele meri shadi hoi."maan was shocked..dev" bro mein geet ko bolao? Wo ro kr bahir gai ha" maan noded his head..dev went out and saw geet lying her head on dadimas lap and crying and dadi and nandani consoling her..dev"geet bro bola rhe ha"lisening this she ran to the room..she stood by door watching maan closed eyes she whispered "maan" maan opened his eyes and noded his head to cal her in..she came in and maan made her sit beside him..maan "am sory"geet noded no..maan"geet mujhe kuch yaad nae lekin kya hum apne baby ke lye nayi zindagi shoro kr skte hai na"geet huged him crying.."hmm"maan huged her back!!
She came out out from the hug with her head down crying..maan wanted to light the situation so he said"ap geet apne tarha mere baby ko bhe rolaogi"geet smiled and wiped her tears.geet"mein ap ke kye kuch khane ke lye lati hon"maan"nae mein neche ata hon"and was abt to get up when geet hold him"theek ha".

Precap
Maan"WHAT no ways..MSK kbhi driver nae ban skta"
Geet"lekin mr.MSK mere maan mujhe manane ke lye kuch bhe kr skte hai"

NEXT : PART 6

Edited by princes939 - 13 years ago