My first ever ss on our beloved MAANEET!!!!Please guys coment and like!!And bare with me..not a good writter..sorry for the mistakes..If u guys will respond then i will continue!!!And as am new writer dont expect me to update soon..!!I will try to update asap!!
The story begins from maan in the hospital after what pammi did..he had a memory loss but till now no one knows..!!
PART 1The next day geet comes to the hospital when she comes to know abt maan is fine now.when she reached hospital she comes to know that maan has already discharged..she gets angry on him that he didnt even inform her but den calms down that now he is fine...
(From here my ss starts)
When geet reaches home dadi ma was siting in the living room..she went to her "dadima maan kaha hai,mein un ko lene gai hospital lene gai or doctor ne bataya ke wo discharge ho gae hai,yeh bhe koi baat hoi mein itni pershan thi or ek bar bhe nae bataya" dadi smiled at her her complaining face and said "arey geet shant ho jae ap ke maan apne room mein hai jaye or mil lijae"
She made her way to her room and mumered "abhi pochti hon"
She entered her room..maan was hand was fractured and he was trying to take off his shirt..her anger few away she smiled and made her away to him. She tried to help him taking stirt from his hand "maan ap bhe na,chale choriye mein ap ki shirt nikal deti hon"with that she was jerked away from maan..his face was all red due to anger "kya maan maan laga rakha ha,tmhari himat kese hoi.."but geet cut him off thought maan is teasing her..but geet is geet wo phele se maan pr gusa thi or ab she came in her sherni mood "mr.khurana ziyada bolne ki zorot nae ha(she pointed her finger on him) ek tw bina bataye ghr aa gae..aa rhi thi na mein lene...jb se hospital se aye hai bhot chirchire hogaye ha..ab agr ap ne mujhe manane ki koshish bhe ki tw bhe mein itni asani se nae mane wali" with that she fumed off from the room in anger. Maan mumered in anger "samjti kya ha apne ap ko..how dare she!!lagta ha dadi ma ne nayi maid rakhi ha lekin itni batamize..aj hi ise nikalwata hon"..fuming in anger he calls adi "helo adi"adi sense anger in his voice he stumered "go..oodd mo..rnni..g s..sir" "adi mr.sharma ki file le kr ghr ao" "pr sir us project ko khatam hoe ek saal hogaya ha..latest project mr.dobirial ka ha..us ki file le kr ao..us project ka kam bhot pendening ha" maan got confused but then asked adi to bring that file he is going to start his work on that project. Maan was confused so he forgot abt geet.
Here geet come to living room dadi, dev and nandini was siting here (In my ss there is NO lucky preto or mamaji..and dev and nandani r married..all know abt it exept maan because of his memory loss)
All r talking casualy..geet comes and sits with dadi..geet murming "dusht danav kahi ke pata nae kau itna tang kr rhe hai..itne tym baad aye hai tw socha koi pyari batein kre ge pr nae wo tw msk hai na..lekin mein bhe geet msk hon..."her murmings was interpted by dadima"atey bete kya hoa..jb se aye hai gum som si hai..kya soch rhi hai?kahi ap ke dusht danav ap ko phr tw nae sata rhi?". Geet"or nae tw kya dadima abhi itni din baad ghr aye hai or abhi se mujhe tang krne lag gaye" dadima smiles then strighned her face seeing her angry "aray ap dono ki tu tu mein mein tw har waqt chalti rehti ha ab ap dono ke bech nae hi pare tw acha hoga"geet made a baby face..geet and dadi sawdev and nandani who was lost in there on world and started gigling with that they came from there world..both were red due to embrasment..nandani "didi mein abhi khana lagwati hon"she ran in the kitchen..geet called nakul "nakul kamre se maan ko khane ke lye bola laye"dadi"nakul adi bhe aya ha maan ke saat adi ko bhe lunch ke lye bolaye"
Nakul went to maans room and called them..while geet got a call from her massi..she couldnt ignor the call..all were having dinnr while geet was talking to her massi in the balcony..when she came all already had there dinnr..dadi came and said
"geet bete aye mein ap hi ka wait kr rhi thi aj hum ap ko khana serve kre ge"geet smiled and had her dinner.Precap
Maan"phele mere ghr mein aye phr kamre mein or ab himat tw dekho mere bed pr so rhi ha"MY FIRST TRY...!!!plzz comment and like!!!
NEXT :PART 2Edited by princes939 - 13 years ago
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