U 4get me but ur heart stil remembers{MG ss}done!! - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hummm... yummy - licious part. Really nice.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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update

loved it

i think in next part geet'll take maan's class for sure

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 9


After eating ice cream she laid down on maans chest..and both slep.
In the morning geet woke up before maan..saw him sleeping all cuddled up to her..she thought "maan u forgot all our moments but still some where in ur heart our love is still alive otherwise u wont accept me..i love u maan"she kissed him on his cheek and rushed towards washroom. When she came out with her wet hair..she saw maan still sleeping..she touched his cheek to wake him up. He was so hot.."haye babaji in ko tw bukhar ha"she rushed to washroom bringing cold water and a piece of cloth and put it on his forehead..he woke up feeling somthing cold on his head..he was abt to get up..when she stoped him "nae lete rehye ap ko fever ha"maan"pr office ke lye late.." geet"aj ap ofice nae jae ge ghr pr aram kere"..he kept quite and kept on staring her..how much she care for him..her wet hair were seducing him..and it was distrubing her again and again coming on her face..he was so lost in her that he didnt even notice when his hand automaticly went on her hair to remove them back as it his view was being disturbed by her hair...his hand went into her hair to pull her closer..they were just few inches far lips were abt to met when geet came back to her senses "maaan ap ko bukhar ha" he snaped back..he got angry on himself "how can i...no i can she is my wife..she loves me..mayb im also faling for her that when i see her i get lost..i should b angry on her she stoped me..i was just kissing her..wats was the big deal" he got angry on her that she distroy there moment he got up..geet tried to stop her but he went to washroom..changed himself in ofice suit..and without giving geet look and havin breakfast he went to office.
He was working in ofice..due to work load and fever he got headac..he had medicine and called his secretary and asked her not to distrub him today..he rested himself on the chair and slept..his mobile was on mute...geet kept on calling but no one reseved..geet called him ofice but couldnt talk to him as his secertary was informed not to distrub him...at around 9 he got up..and was shocked to see the time how much he slept..saw his mobile it had 65 mis cals and 15 msgs...he was shocked and all were geet. He then felt guilty trobling her..how worried she would b..he went to home..geet was siting on sofa all worried mobile in her hand..maan"ahem" geet saw maan and ran to maan huged him tight and started crying" kaha the ap mein sbha se cal kr rhi hon ap utha kau nae rhe the pata ha mein kitna pereshan ho gai thi. Yeh koi time ha ghr ane ka?ap kuch bol kau nae rhe. Ap ka bukhar uthar gaya?(she touched his forehead)wah thx babaji (saw up)uthar gaya..ap kuch bol kau nae rhe. Mein..."maan got anoyed by her speaking continusly and not leting him answer at the same time happy to see that so much she cared for him and worried for him. And put her palm on his lips and pined her to wall "tm mujhe bolne ka muka do gi tab hi mein bol skhta hon na..kb se chatter box ki tarha boli ja rhi ho" maan took off his hand..geet "haww ap ne mujhe chater box kaha..ek tw khud sbha bina bataye chale gae ab mein pereshan hi hon gi na magar ap ko tw fikar.."she imidialy stop when she felt his lips on hers..he bit her lip and mumered in her mouth"ab bolo chup kau ho gai" he kised her pasionatly and geet responded him back..both rested there forhead togethr when they felt out of breath.
Maan wispred"wo mein tm pr gusa tha is lye sbha bina bataye office chala gaya or sar mein dard tha tw pata hi nae chala kb so gaya.." geet"bass samaj gai sbha se ap ne kuch bhe nae khaya na chale mein khana lagati hon" maan"tm ne kuch khaya?" geet noded no..maan"kya geet meri waja se baby ko bhoka rakho gi chalo jaldi chalo mere baby ko bhook lagi ho gi."
After dinner geet slept...maan was still awake he wasnt slepy cause he slept all day in the office..he was watching geet..maan thinking" i love u..haan geet i love u..do din mein tm ne mujhe apna bana lya..lagta hi nae mein kuch bhola hon lagta ha humesha se mein tmhe janta hon..mein"he kissed her forhead and wispered "good night".


Precap: (NEXT PART THATS GONNA BE LAST ONE...SO NO PRECAP...LAST BUT NOT THE LEAST)


NEXT : PART 10
Edited by princes939 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely.. wow lovely kiss.. me too want from my maan...last part why so soon ur finishing tis ff
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Desigirls12



<font color="#CC0000" size="6"> lovely.. wow lovely kiss.. me too want from my maan...last part why so soon ur finishing tis ff </font>




THATS SS SO DECIDED TO END THIS IN 10 parts more over...only 18 to 20 likes not more than that!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb updts pm me plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 10

Morning geet woke up didnt find maan in the room..she made a baby face..."maan kya sbha sbha gayab ho gae..khud uth rhe tw mujhe tw utha dete"complaining with angry face went to bath..came out and went to dressing table..found a note and a gift..!!she picked up the box and found a beautiful saree..she smile as she guesed it was send by maan...exictedly opened the note..it says
"goodmorning geet..i know tm mere sbha jaldi chale jane se bhot gusa hogi but bhot imp meeting thi tw jana pera..acha jo saree di ha..i hope u liked it..wo saree phen kr be ready at 8..ek clint ki party ha us mein jana ha. Maan"
Geet "clint..party...(she got angry)maan bhe na..mein ne socha mujhe date pr le jane ke lye saree di hogi...date tw dor ki baat itna time ho gaya saat kahi bahir diner kiye hoe..chalo chado..mujhe kya..ab maan ko khud is baat ka khiyal hona chaye na"she got ready in her simple suit and went to kichen to prepare her breakfast..she took out some flour for making parata for herself when nakul came and almost shouted.."geet mam app yaha kitchen mein kya kr rhi hai?"he looked worried..geet"kya hoa nakul itne pereshan kau ho rhe ho sb theek ha na..han bivi bache sb theek ha na?lagta ha tmhari tabiyat kharab ha ajeeb bate kr rhe ho tm tw jante ho na kitchen mein kya krte hai khana banate hai or tm tw jante ho na mein roz kitchen mein apna or sb ka nashta khud banati hon..."nakul interupted"mam mam bas itni choti si baat pochi thi ap baat ko kaha se kaha le gai mein tw is lye khe rha tha kauke dadi..."geet"dadi..kya hoa dadi ko" nakul"mam meri pori baat tw sunie dadi ko kuch nae hoa..acully dadi ne mujhe special orders diye hai ke ap ko kaam bilkul nae krne dena or kitchen mein tw bilkul nae gusne dena jo bhe kuch banana ha ap mujhe bata de warna meri nokari khatre mein pr skhti ha or han meri abhi tak shadi nae hoe tw bache kese hon ge...(said all in one go..he took a long breath)phew..ab samjhi"geet"kya tm chate ho ke mein tmhari shadi kr wa don?"nakul"nae mam mein akela hi khush hon..bas ap mujhe bataye ap ke lye kya banao kau ke dadi ne ap ko kichen mein gusne se sakht mana kiya ha" geet became sad"pr kau dadi mujh se naraz hai kya?"dadi entered "arey beta bhele hum kau naraz ho ge..mujhe tw ap ka or mere hone wale pota ya poti ka khiyal ha..app kau kaam ki tension legi..ap ko bas aram ki zororat ha"geet"pr dadi mein ayse bore ho jao gi"dadi"arey hum apne hote hoe ap ko bore hone de gae..(to nakul)ap geet ka nashta dining table pr lagwa de(nakul noded his head and when)(to geet)aj nandani ap or mein sham ko ghr pr bilkul cinima wala mohol kr ke ek movie dekhe ge"geet got exicted"sachi dadi ma" dadi"ji han..chale abhi ap nashta kre"geet had her breakfast..nandani joined then..evening they enjoyed movie.
At 8 geet was all ready for maans clint party..looking beautiful in saree.drivr came"mam maan sir ne bheja ha ap ko lene ke lye."geet mumered"maan khud kau nae aye..sbha se nae dekha.na cal na msg..ab lene bhe drivr ko bhej diya itna time nae ha mere lye"she sat in the car and it took one hour to reach the place..geet went inside it was all dark she got scared.."maan maan" maan was seen no where as it was dark but his voice came"geet ghobrao mat mein yahi hon"he came and huged her from behind the lights opened..petals of roses started falling..maan hold his hand and did a taitanic pose..after some time geet opened her eyes and saw the sroundings it was decorated beautifuly and a table for couple...geet huged him and teasingly "oh tw mr.khurana ko apni bivi ke sat date pr jana tha phele nae bata skte the itne drame kau kiye" maan "mrs khurana ap ko kis ne khe diya mein apni bivi ke saat date pr jana chata hon?" geet got confused"but maan yeh sab"maan"mein ne yeh sb family date ke lye kya..mere baby ko kese bhol gai..or rahi baat dramebazi ki tw ab apni bivi ko surprize ke lye thora jhoot bol lya tw kuch nae hota"she smiled and kissed him on his cheek and ran away...sudenly all light went it way all dark..geet stoped where she was...then there was a spot light on maan and geet..maan slowin walked towards her bend on his knees and took her hands in his "mrs.khurana vill u marry me again"geet was so happy that she bend on her knees and kissed maan on his lips..it soon became passionate..maan whispered" i love u" geet also whispered"i love u too maan..thanks 4comin in my life making me feel so special" maan had aranged everything in the next moment he married her...he took her in his arms and entered the room it was so beautiful decorated...then there second suhagraat...blush* blush* ahem ahem 😉...after 8 months geet had twins a boy and a girl...THEY LIVED HAPPYILY EVER AFTER!!!!


THE END


DIDNT GOT MUCH LIKES &COMMENTS SOO I DECIDED TO END THIS...BUT GUYS THANKYOU 2 THOSE WHO HAVE LIKED & COMMENTED ON MY SS!!!

DONT FORGET TO LIKE &COMMENT ON THIS UPDATE TOO!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AMAZINGGG AND SUPERBBB YAAR AND THANKS FOR PMM AND PLZZZ WRITE MORE FF IN MANEETTT
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was indeed beautiful. Thanks for such a nice part.

Bhool ne ki bimari to sab ko hoti hai, but even after forgetting everything you cherish and consider your love is a big thing.

Do Continue with your writing. 👍🏼

Thanks Again for the lovely part. 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 10
last part
lovely...
loved this sweet SS dear...

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