Pehla Nasha- a short story on ArMan - Page 6

Originally posted by: sushita30

vowww wat a beautifully n authentically written story 👍🏼 hats off to u nikita 👏 i just didnt liked da story but loved so much n adored it a lott i felt keep on reading again n again n da best apart (obviously apart frm our beloved couple "arman" or "sushita") i really liked frnds of archu lol 😆😉 after so many days i felt m reliving da original "arman" scenes ...a big thank u n a hug for writting dis beautifull story n one req do write da next parts too plzz !!!!!!!😊

Dear Nikki 🤗


Thanks a Lot for this short story. after a Long while I am posting something here.
Its been a very long time I think. Its your story which as got me back. and its going to be yours only where I might post something.

Saying that Loving your story or Loving the way you narrate and telling the story is too less to put in, always admired and now also do so.

As always and Asusual I loved your ARMAN and their parts. Ekdum first class.
Your ARMAN always have the tenderness and softness of the original initial stage ARMAN and keep us remembering the PR ARMAN with whom we fell in love with and the Sushita who enacted them.

My most fav Part on original PR was the days after ARMAN's first marriage, right from the tea making, bangles, Kajra, ear ring, first hug, the first touch of crease hand, the Shyness, tenderness, sweetness and any scene and all scene that had got a smile and go 😃 and go red.

I feel the same thing and feel that much enjoying and relieved whenever I read a Part of your ARMAN's story. They always bring that feel.

Even in this story, you have not let go the initial charcteristics of archu and Manav with which we fell in love with. the scene where she talks about her friends and how she doesnt have no one to share her inner feeling, it reminded me of their first hug scene, where archu told,I dont have anyone with whom i am so comfortable with to share anything without hesitation, but with you I can do so, Its feels like, someone came into my world,specially for me and my sake.

Hi Nikita,🤗

Originally posted by: gremlin.

"I will send a pigeon with the postcard.. kabootar ja ja ja.."

"Translation please?" whispered Sharon. "Pigeon go go go!" hissed Divya quickly. "What is that supposed to mean?" frowned Sharon. "Shhh!!!"

🤣 🤣🤣

Okay...okay, so I was reading it, I still am, but this bit cracked me up so bad that I had to come here and laugh it off...Pigeon go go go...LMAO! 🤣 🤣

Okay be back after reading the whole thing and oh it's a complete delight up till where I read by the way, Niks! 😛

Originally posted by: nikitagmc

Swatiii!!!!!

I missed you!! 🤗Where were you? Why don't you come to the forum these days?

Am so glad you liked it! And no, I think it is impossible to get a guy like Manav cos there's no one so perfect in life!!

I reminded you of your crush?? Who was it?? Chalo yahaan nahi, par kam se kam PM se toh batana mujhe!😉

nikita i think after dat may b da remaing days arman had before manav going to dubai ,they met everyday n spend some quality time together knowing one another more n more n da dilema of infatuation finally blossemed to a beautiful feeling of love ❤️ ( dey wer sure of it but as usualy very shy to tell one another ) dey met everyday in da same train but instead of diff compartment dey traveled in da general onen sometimes at paav bhaaji stall , n finally da day came wen manav had to left for dubai n den 4 years later manav was a big man now n meanwhile archu too completed her 12 n some comp course along wid it . (in dis 4 yeras arman did had conversations on phone n had all da updates of one another ) 14 feb was da day wen manav was coming back to his own land. n da very first person he wanted to meet was archana n for da very first tym archu lied to her mother just to meet manav . archu went to airport n as both saw each other couldnt resist but ran n hugged each other . later dey realised of der situation n both wer (sort of) embarrased but wat was not xpected was on da airport itself manav proposed to archu wid a bunch of flowers n a diamond ring🥳 n archu too said a yes n den dey told der family too abt der realation ship der families agreed n now it was the tym for marriage "manav weds archana"

Originally posted by: umayal

Dear Nikki 🤗


Thanks a Lot for this short story. after a Long while I am posting something here.
Its been a very long time I think. Its your story which as got me back. and its going to be yours only where I might post something.

Saying that Loving your story or Loving the way you narrate and telling the story is too less to put in, always admired and now also do so.

As always and Asusual I loved your ARMAN and their parts. Ekdum first class.
Your ARMAN always have the tenderness and softness of the original initial stage ARMAN and keep us remembering the PR ARMAN with whom we fell in love with and the Sushita who enacted them.

My most fav Part on original PR was the days after ARMAN's first marriage, right from the tea making, bangles, Kajra, ear ring, first hug, the first touch of crease hand, the Shyness, tenderness, sweetness and any scene and all scene that had got a smile and go 😃 and go red.

I feel the same thing and feel that much enjoying and relieved whenever I read a Part of your ARMAN's story. They always bring that feel.

Even in this story, you have not let go the initial charcteristics of archu and Manav with which we fell in love with. the scene where she talks about her friends and how she doesnt have no one to share her inner feeling, it reminded me of their first hug scene, where archu told,I dont have anyone with whom i am so comfortable with to share anything without hesitation, but with you I can do so, Its feels like, someone came into my world,specially for me and my sake.

Originally posted by: suan

Hi Nikita,🤗

I just read your response to my critique of your OS and enjoyed it almost as much as the story itself.

You once more had me laughing in certain parts.😆

Re my take on the ending, I would love if Manav never went to Dubai, but at the last moment, he got a similar opportunity in Mumbai itself.

After all, this is fiction, hai na.😉

An opportunity of a great job with the ability to study as well, in order to complete his high school education, then move on to further studies, just as Manav was going to do in Dubai.

This is what I want for him, but in Mumbai.

Archana would be able to happily complete her education too.

This would give him and Archana a chance to really get to know each other before they officially become a couple.

If they truly know one another, they would be better able to support each other when discussions about marriage take place between the families.

If Manav stays in Munbai, he and Archana would have a stronger foundation on which to start their married life.

Both of them would be more at ease in their journey to better themselves educationally, whilst assisting their families financially.

Of course, things would not be a bed of roses for Arman.
No one's life is easy and straight forward, so I know you would include some bumps on the road to true love.

However, having them become a loving and endearing couple would be a fitting end to this OS, I think.😊

Originally posted by: sushita30

nikita i think after dat may b da remaing days arman had before manav going to dubai ,they met everyday n spend some quality time together knowing one another more n more n da dilema of infatuation finally blossemed to a beautiful feeling of love ❤️ ( dey wer sure of it but as usualy very shy to tell one another ) dey met everyday in da same train but instead of diff compartment dey traveled in da general onen sometimes at paav bhaaji stall , n finally da day came wen manav had to left for dubai n den 4 years later manav was a big man now n meanwhile archu too completed her 12 n some comp course along wid it . (in dis 4 yeras arman did had conversations on phone n had all da updates of one another ) 14 feb was da day wen manav was coming back to his own land. n da very first person he wanted to meet was archana n for da very first tym archu lied to her mother just to meet manav . archu went to airport n as both saw each other couldnt resist but ran n hugged each other . later dey realised of der situation n both wer (sort of) embarrased but wat was not xpected was on da airport itself manav proposed to archu wid a bunch of flowers n a diamond ring🥳 n archu too said a yes n den dey told der family too abt der realation ship der families agreed n now it was the tym for marriage "manav weds archana"

sorryyy guys i just wrote dis coz nikita told she wud write da nest part if v told wat wud hav happened later so i just wrote a happy happy

story just to get to read da next part lol !!!!!😆

hey nikita true to ur statement in the FF I'm really late here also niways thanks, really wonderful FF..