My First Fanfic(Part Nine)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Previous parts for those who haven't read it.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/318640/my-first-fanfic

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/318884/my-first-fanfic-part-two

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/319518/my-first-fanfic-part-three

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/332225/my-first-fanfic-part-four

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/334344/my-first-fanfic-part-five

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/335966/my-first-fanfic-part-six

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/337292/my-first-fanfic-part-seven

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasauti-zindagi-ki/340575/my-first-fanfic-part-eight

Scene 24

Rehearsal hall

Prem and Mukti walk into the rehearsal and they meet Namritha there.

Namritha: Mukti, Where did you go?

Mukti: We went to the hospital.

Namritha: You told him?

Mukti: Yeah. I wanted to take a DNA test.

Namritha: Oh okay…… so did you get the results?

Mukti: No. We will get it in the evening.

Prem: You told her?

Mukti: She took me to the hospital when I fainted.

Prem: Okay.

Mukti and Namritha start to go.

Prem: Mukti, (Mukti turns) If you want, you can go home and take rest.

Mukti: No, its okay.

Prem: But you need rest.

Mukti: If I don't have anything to do, then I will keep thinking about the result and get tensed. And time goes faster when I am busy also.

Prem: Okay.

Later Mukti and Prem are watching Namritha's dance. Mukti gets up.

Prem: What happened?

Mukti: No I need to get some CDs from the other room.

Prem: You sit, I will get it.

Mukti: It's okay Prem I will get it.

Prem: No you sit, I will get it. You need rest and you are already tensed about many things and don't exert yourself. You sit, I will go get it.

Prem goes off and Mukti keeps looking at Prem. Later Prem comes back with CDs and give it Mukti and she keeps looking at him.

Prem: Why are you looking at me like that?

Mukti: Why are you being so nice to me?

Prem: I don't know.

Mukti: You used to hate me……. Even two days back you were screaming at me……. Huh, Prem is it because of the baby?

Prem: Maybe… I don't know

They start watching Namritha's dance in silence.

Prem: I never hated you.

Mukti looks at him and he was looking straight, then he turns and looks at her.

Prem: Really Mukti, I never hated…….. maybe a little in the beginning, but when I got to know you better, I started liking you….. you are a very nice girl, and I know I have hurt you…………I know whatever happened to you was bad……… but when I proposed to you and you rejected me, I was hurt and I wanted to take revenge on you……. But then also I never hated you. I was angry at you…. That's true…..but never hated you.

Mukti has tears in her eyes and she nods.

Scene 25

In the car

Both Prem and Mukti are silent.

Mutki (praying silently): Please God; let this be Prem's baby. You know how much I love him; he will never be mine, so please God give me his baby at least. Please God please.

Prem (thinking): Poor Mukti, she is so tensed. What will she do if this is Sharad's baby? Will she be able to love this baby then?............ Of course she will………… But why is it that I don't want her to have Sharad's baby? I don't want her to have anybody else's baby? Why is it like that? Why do I hate it when I think about her with someone else? Like that Munna…………………… Why am I thinking about all that? Let's see what happens.

They reach the hospital.

A nurse gives them a sealed envelope and Mukti opens it and read. She looks at Prem with tears in her eyes.

Prem: What does it say?

She starts crying.

Prem: Why are you crying?

And he takes the paper from her and reads it:

DNA matched.

Prem: Oh my God…. It's my baby.

Prem is too shocked and doesn't know whether to cry or laugh. Mukti comes forward and hugs him.

Prem: Why are you crying?

Mukti: I don't know………… I have heard that during pregnancy women tends to cry because they get more emotional.

Prem: Okay.

Scene 26

In the car

Prem: Are you going to tell everyone now?

Mukti: I don't know………. I haven't decided.

Prem (gets suspicious): What haven't you decided?

Mukti: About telling them.

Prem stops the car and turns and looks at Mukti angrily.

Prem: Mukti, you are going to have this baby right? I won't let you kill my baby.

Mukti looks at Prem with a shocked expression.

Mukti: I am going to have this baby. What made you think that I am going to abort?

Prem relaxes: When you told me that you haven't decided about telling everyone, I just thought might be because you might not have decided about having the baby.

Mukti: It's not that….. I don't know what to tell everyone……… I don't know what I will tell Papa, Choti Ma and Sir.

Prem: Why don't you just tell them that you are pregnant with my baby, anyway they all know what happened between us.

Mukti: It's not that easy Prem.

Prem: Anyway everyone will have to know everything….. Sooner the better.

Mukti: Alrite Prem I will tell everyone.

Scene 27

Mukti's house

Mukti is about to go to sleep when her phone starts ringing.

Mukti picks up the phone and it is Prem.

Prem: Mukti did you sleep?

Mukti: No Prem. What happened?

Prem: Can you come outside now. I am standing outside your house.

Mukti: Er………….yeah okay.

Mukti comes out and Prem was waiting for her.

Mukti: Prem what happened? Is everything alright?

Prem: Yeah everything is fine.

Mukti: Then what happened?

Prem takes her hand and looks into her eyes.

Prem: Mukti, Will you marry me?

Part 10:https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=343 324

Edited by shivgauri - 18 years ago

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Posted: 19 years ago
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OMG,i LOVE ur fan-ficpls continue soooooooon!!
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2 GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!! Continue Soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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It should be the same in kzk.
Too good.
Continue soon.
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great fanfic...i really luv it 👏 👏 !!!plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soooon!!!!

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