my first FF--indira.

i want to post a ff on indira.--

i never tried it before.but i try to post a story completely based on india and how she copes with life after a disaster strikes her --

it is entirely fictional story--no where related any real or dead person.
i am trying weather we can write story with out any romantic angle.

story will start after 1 year of indira marriage--

tonight i will try to post 1st chapter and afterwards i will try to update more often.

my stories heroin -indiras thinking is --always move forward--jo beet gaya woh wapas aane wala nahin hai.

if you move forward--every failure is stepping stone of success.
if you look backward--every success is stepping stone for failure.

Waah...😊
Indu ke liye...
Koi majnu bana... koi pagal bana...
Koi awara bana...koi shayar bana...

Aap to writer ban gaye!!! 😆😆😆

FF aur aap...Intezaar rahega first part ka...Will love to see how you proceed in story without having any love track...

ya will wait for this ff without love track
post it soon😃

Originally posted by: harshal25

Waah...😊
Indu ke liye...
Koi majnu bana... koi pagal bana...
Koi awara bana...koi shayar bana...

Aap to writer ban gaye!!! 😆😆😆

FF aur aap...Intezaar rahega first part ka...Will love to see how you proceed in story without having any love track...

@bold--

tonight i will write 1st chapter.
i have some idea --but lets see --is it possible to write a story without love track at all.??

and my FF will be in hinglish--[hindi and English mixed as i dont find some emotional words and couplets in English and i am not very well in both hindi and english as my mother tongue is kannada. .]

chapter-1

indira sitting in barasathi--kal uska marriage anniversary hai.kya -kya nahin paaya indira ne ek baras main.aaj bhi usse vishwaas nahin horaha ki uski zindagi main itni kushiya aagai hai.

pehale though khushiya uska pata hi bhol gaya thi.per beete ek baras mainitni jyaada kushiya mili hai--ki aaj bhi usse yeh sab sapna jaisa lag raha hai.

baba-maa badal chuke hai--woh ab indira se utni hi pyaar karthe hai jitni woh unse karthi hai.
munna bhi thoda thoda sudharne laga hai--ek stationary dukaan dala hai chandni chowk main. .
aur vidith wapas us main job join kar chuka hai.
mandira ki bhi shadi hogai hai 6 month back .delhi ka hi ladka hai-bengalore settle huwa hai--mangal naam hai uska.software engineer hai.

indira ki zindgi main kushiya lane ka shrey jaata hai rishi ko.

indira mooh utha ke dekh liya--deewar per uski aur rishi ko photo.
time dekha indira ne.time huwa hai--9 pm.

itna der huwa though bhi janaab wapas nahi aaye .yeh rani bhatija bhi jaldi nahin chod thi apne assistant ko.[rani bhatija ka assistant ban gaya hai naa.]

indira ne man hi man main than liya--aaj thogh rishi se bilkul baath nahi karoongi. har din late aana yeh bhi koi baat huwi??

didi khana ready hai--neeche se mandira ne pukara.
kya aap ko maloom nahin??mandira aayi huwi hai maike.kyon ki 15 din baad doctors date diya hai indira ka delivery ka.

aayi--indira boli.

yeh bhi ek badi muskil hai indira ko aaj kal--upar se neeche jaana.
do bacche hai peth main .
slowly aur mushkil se indira neeche jaane keliye uthi.
ab in do beccho ke bare main soch ke man hi man kush horahi thi.

sapne main apni-rishi aur do baccho ki tasveer dekh rahi thi.

miyya-biwi-aur do bacche--perfect family ka tasveer aankh ke samne tha.

insaan bahut kuch apne future ke baare main soch leta hai.per kahin baar bhagwaan ki soch alag rehatha hai insaan se.

slowly indira coming near steps.woh sapno main inta mast thi ki-- ek moment main step ki taraf se dyaan hat gaya.
aur she slips from steps.--

she dar ke cheeeki --rishi-[girthe waqt bhi uske mooh se maa ke bajaaye rishi ka naam aaya.]

mandira bhag ke aayi dinning hall se.

samne ka nazare dhek kar sar ghoom ne laga--

indira khoon main lat pat hall main padi thi--khoon bahut beh raha tha.--
indira is unconscious.

kya huwa hai indira ko??


to be continued.

Really great start! Can't wait for next part! Xx

Yaar starting to achhi hai.

omg
great start
ye indira ko kya hua i'm scared
pls continue soon

awesome start par antra mantra ko aane do

Originally posted by: Nosh25

Really great start! Can't wait for next part! Xx

thanks for encouragement. .will update tonight.