my first FF--indira. - Page 2

Originally posted by: LoveKriyansh

great start.pls continue.

thanks for liking.😛

Originally posted by: ashish.sachi

Yaar starting to achhi hai.

Par please Indira ka miscarriage mat karana. I will not be able to think of Antara - Mantara's death before their birth😭

aap though already future ki speculation karne lage.
chinta mut kijiye--

thoda kismat ruti hui hai indira se.

Originally posted by: deepaklegend

awesome start par antra mantra ko aane do

thanks deepak.will keep that in mind--
but

thoda kismat ruti hui hai indira se.

Ab next part post bhi kar dijiye...😊

Originally posted by: prachidew

omg
great start
ye indira ko kya hua i'm scared
pls continue soon

thanks --
hint doon??
indira though hamari lead hai.😛

Originally posted by: harshal25

Ab next part post bhi kar dijiye...😊

abhi type bhi karna hai na.aaj raat ko type karoonga.😛

episode no.2

rani bhatija office.
delhi--
9.15 pm.

rishi comes to ranis cabin.and hands over next days case papers and arguments preparations.
rani asks rishi--tum kal though chutti pe ho.parson ka case files ka kya huwa??

rishi--madam, notes pura ready kiya hai.kal arti [ranis other assistant] case ka preparation final karegi based on my notes.

rani--tum though bahut jaldi main ho aaj.

rishi--9.15 hogaya hai--kal mera marriage anniversary hai.gifts bhi abhi lena baki hai indira keliye.though main chalu.??late hojayega.

rani-ok.[takes one gift packet from drawer and hands it over to rishi] mere taraf se yeh gift indira ko de dena.

rishi--madam aap kal anniversary party main nahin aarahi hai kya??

rani--aane ki koshish jaroor karoongi- promise nahin karthi.tum janathe ho na kal aur parso ka dono case kitna important hai.

rishi--koshish nahi--aap ko aana padega.

rishi leaves office.

rani takes look at rishi.uss ne shadi nahin ki hai aur usse shadi karne ka irada bhi nahin hai.
rishi ek baras pehale tak uska fev.student tha.
ab yeh ek baras main bete jaisa ban gaya hai.
rani ne bhagwan se prathana kar liya- in dono [rishi and indira] ko hamesha kush rakhana.

rishi ne socha- aaj raat 12 baje indira ko surprise gift dene keliye.
rishi takes his bike and goes directly to flower shop -purchases phool and gajara from there.then go to sweet shop and buys indiras fev.sweet.
then goes to jewelry store and buys a neck less.

then straightaway he rides to SN.
rani ka office thoda door tha chandani chowk se.15 min drive.
[one moter bike was fallowing him since he left ranis office.but rishi did not noticed that.]

jab he reaches SN[sharma nivas] it was 9.50 pm.

jab rishi come near door of SN kuch azeeb sannata tha wahan.
ishaan aur isha[sunainas 2nd daughter] ka awaz nahin aur kisi ki baat karne ke awaz bhi nahin ghar ke andar se.
kuch azeeb shanka hone laga rishi ke mann main.
dar lagne laga.man ko ghabarahat hone lagi.usse laga koi sahayatha ke liye pukarraho jaise.

door bell kiya per koi nahin aaya darwaja kholane keliye.

darwaaja pe haath rakha--darawaza though khuli huyi thi.

jab rishi ne haath rakha though door open hogaya.

rishi ka dar aur bad gaya.
uski ki dil ki dhadakan badgayi.
ghar ke andar bhi sannata tha.
ab uski dhadkan awaz usse hi sanane laga.

rishi slows moves in to house.

to be continued.

Great writing! Indira ke girte hi mujhe almost heart attack aa gaya! Avi vi dil tejise dahadak raha hai! do write soon!

Originally posted by: JSA18

Great writing! Indira ke girte hi mujhe almost heart attack aa gaya! Avi vi dil tejise dahadak raha hai! do write soon!

thank you ji for appreciation.😛

episode mo.3--

cc super specialty hospital.
10.15 pm.

inder-kutumb -mandira-sunaina sitting out side of ICU[Intensive Care Unit].
indira taken in to icu but doctor still not come out of it since last half an hour.so family members are too much tensed.

doctor comes out of icu.and all goes to and asks -how is indira.??

doctor tells--aap ko himmath lena hoga.indira ki haalath is very critical.uski left hand left leg main fractures hai.
sar pe bahut gehara chot laga hai.khoon jum gaya hai skull main.
jaldi se operation karna hoga .brain operation karna hoga.aur ab ek aur buri khabar hai.dono baccho ko bhi nahin bacha sakthe.andar hi mar chuke hai.though unko bhi niklana hoga.
aur kurcha though bahut aayega.aap ko kitna jaldi hoga utni jaldi 5 lakh deposit karna hoga.aap deposit kerthe hi hum operation suru kar denge.jaldi ki jiye.
indar kampathe huwe awaaz main poocha--indira bach though jaayegi naa??

doctor said--hum though koshish kar sakthe hai--kyon ki abhi kuch kaha jaa nahin saktha.uski halath bahut nazuk hai.bhagwan per bharosa rakh lijiye.

and docter continued--indira blood group is O-negative. .this is very rare blood group.aap main kisi ka yeh blood group hai kya??
yeh group blood bank nahin hai.

all the 4 said--nahin -humara o -nagative nahin hai.

doctor--aap ko kisi ko dhoondana padega o-negative blood wale ko .blood ki zaroorat kafi hai.aur jaldi kijiye.

doctor goes back to icu.
indar-kutumb-mundira-sunaina face becomes black--aur they feeling so helpless.

ab 5 lakh itni jaldi kahan se arrange karenge??

inder slowly said--ab though rishi ko phone karke bol dethe hai.woh aate hi usse baat karke koi na koi intzaam karenge.
mandira beta tum apni mobile say rishi ko phone karo.

mandira said--main gadbadi main mobile ghar pe bhool aayi hoon.
sunaina ka mobile bhi ghar main raha gaya tha.

mandira said--papa main reception counter jake whan se phone kardoongi.

mandira goes to reception counter.wahan se phone kiya.

par rishi ka phone lag nahi raha hai.

bbar baar phone kiya though bhi ek hi answer aaraha hai--

the mobile you are trying to reach is switched off.

mandira is shocked--why rishi phone is off??

to be continued.