my first FF--indira. - Page 3

Will come and edit later. Just so that i wont miss this ff i am posting. 😊

Originally posted by: dhanyar79

Will come and edit later. Just so that i wont miss this ff i am posting. 😊

thanks--😛

Originally posted by: aisha.damor

plzzz contd soon...😊

sure.i will update tonight.

thanks.

you write really well..i like how you always end each chapter with suspense.
please continue soon! :-)

episode no.4

sharma nivas--

rishi enters hall.

hall main bahut saara khoon gir gaya hai.on sofa --inshan is sitting and silently crying.-on his lap isha[ his one year old sister] is sleeping.
rishi ko dekh ke ishaan apni choti behan ko sofe pe lita ke duad ke aaya aur lipata aur jor se rone laga.
ishaan ne rishi ko saari baaten bata diya--rishi bhi rona suru kar diya[usse rone ki adat hai naa.]aur mandira ko phone laga diya.
per mobile though ghar main hi thi.aur sunaina ka bhi phone ghar main hi tha.

rishi told ishan--main seedha hospital jaavonga.tum door acche se band kar ke andar baitha na.jaldi se hospital se kisi ko bhejoonga ghar per.

aur house se bhahar aaya.takes his bike and slowly starts it and ride to hospital.

usse road dhundala dhundala dikha raha tha aaso ke wajha se.

when he nears hospital--samne se ek truck aarahi thi teji se.
rishi takes his bike to side--but samne truck bhi side hogayi --seedhe rishi ke upar aagayi.
aur usse hit karke --fast se chali gayi.

rishi raasthe per gir ke tadap ne laga aur ek min baad uska tadapana band hogaya.

thodi door pe ek admi khade hoke yeh dekh raha tha.

ab ussne apni phone nikla aur dialed a number .
aur bola--madam kaam hogaya.

uss taraf se awaz aaya--good news.ap ke payment aap ki account main deposit hojayegi kal.
aur ab next target ko hit karna hai--.aur next target hai--indira.

admi bola--theek hai--ab indira ki baari hai--usse bhi hum jaldi khatam kar denge.

kaun hai yeh madam?? kya dushmani hai indira se??

in ghatanawon se anjaan-- indira juj rahi thi maut se.

indira jhool rahi thi zindagi aur maut ke beech-- ICU main.

to be continued.

hai bhagwaan!
their children died, then indira is almost dead and now rishi died..
yeh to bahut dukh baari kahani hai..agar sabh marjaayenge to aapke show ka leads kaun honge?? munna aur sunaina?🤣

anyway, really shocking turn..looking forward to the next part..very interesting story..

Originally posted by: kavkm

their children died, then indira is almost dead and now rishi died..
yeh to bahut dukh baari kahani hai..

Originally posted by: kavkm

hai bhagwaan!
their children died, then indira is almost dead and now rishi died..
yeh to bahut dukh baari kahani hai..agar sabh marjaayenge to aapke show ka leads kaun honge?? munna aur sunaina?🤣

anyway, really shocking turn..looking forward to the next part..very interesting story..

@ munna.

good idea as hero.but we can make him hero if write other FF.

these disasters will make indira more strong and make her like stone which help her to face cruel opponent with out any fear in coming parts.

thanks for reply.😛

Originally posted by: aisha.damor

m also asking d same question raj!!! 😲

ye to badi dhukh bhai story lagti hai... 😕

bechari indira 😭...

plzzz contd sooon 😊... waiting...😛

thanks ji.

this pain of indira is going to be foundation stone for her future success in her life.😛