~~Chasing Midnight~~Kriyaansh FF#2

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Snigdha

@Snigs.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#571

Originally posted by: pkriyaansh
update time plz update snighdha

I wil be updtng soulmate 0s n wen i get tym i wil updt dis..

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Palakh Aggarwal

@RudrakshPreesha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#572

k tab tak we will wait by d way dat soulmate os kab khatam hoga

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Snigdha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#573

Originally posted by: pkriyaansh
k tab tak we will wait by d way dat soulmate os kab khatam hoga

Mostly in 3-4chapters.

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esha

@ArShaAngels

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Posted: 13 years ago

#574

Ur FF is just awesome...when will u update the nxt part...

Eagerly waiting for the update...

N ya Best of luck for the exams..😉

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Snigdha

@Snigs.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#575

Originally posted by: eshachawla26
Ur FF is just awesome...when will u update the nxt part...
Eagerly waiting for the update...

N ya Best of luck for the exams..😉

Thanks alot...

I wil updt d next part asap.

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esha

@ArShaAngels

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Posted: 13 years ago

#576

pls updte it soon...i cant wait for the nxt part...

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esha

@ArShaAngels

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Posted: 13 years ago

#577

Originally posted by: snigdha_arsha
Thanks alot...
I wil updt d next part asap.

n ya plz PM me wen ull updte..

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Snigdha

@Snigs.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#578

Im in a lil mood to updt..

Instant update so no bashing pls n complaining abt d length.

This is already updtd part..Added part wil be in dis colour.

Hope you wil lyk it.

*************************Part 24**************************

The formed figure vanished in a second n a pair of hands touched her shoulders.Her breath actually was very slowly if she wud die at dat instant as if her heart halts.Though she was completely scared n bitter, she has a minimun hope deep in her heart dat it wud b rey, the person whom she was loving from d past few days, the person whom she trusted alot.She kept her hopes raising n turned back for him.There was no one yet again, tears streamed down her face as d growling laughter spread around her teasing her tears.She walked back for one or two feet n started running to d door as fast as she can.The door closed at d very time she reached it, she pushed it hard but never the less of her efforts, the door closed automatically.She started yelling rey's name at her highest tone before she cud spell out totally, someone closed her mouth from behind.She struggled wid dose hands, struggled wid dat invisible enemy of hers.Her hands ached,her legs were giving up, her breathing was becoming worse.She fainted on d spot.

She got up at some unknown tym, her head was giving her a hell lot of pain, she remembered d last thing dat happened was she fainted n fell down on d floor hurting her head.Now, her head was aching lyk hell she dint even had to strength to open her eyes, she closed her eyes n felt some relief.She opened up after few mins when she felt somewat good, her eyes were forming a blurred images, she rubbed her eyes wid her hands, finally she cud see something.Rey was right infront of her standing wid a broken smile.He came forward to her n held her hand in his,wid d other hand he caressed her hair.She tried to sit upon d bed, he supported her n made her comfortable.Though, she tried to move away d nightmare infront of her eyes, her mind was recalling it.She held his hand more firmly, she wanted to tell out about all d grief she faced dat night but was lacking d words to express it.He was more concerned about her, something was surely wrong but he really dint know wat was happening.

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She was wid him, cuddling in his arms at d nyt n in d morning, she vanished.He got off d bed n searched for her, she was fallen in d corridor bleeding slightly.He picked her up in his arms n took her to d bedroom n made her lie down.He tried making her conscious but his efforts were upto no avail.He immediately called d doctor, d doctor came n dressed d wound n prescribed some tablets n went off giving him some tips.He noticed her getting rid of d dizziness, she was bearing wid her pain.He stood deir waiting for her to get up.His eyes finally were glad dat she was ok, a small smile crept on his face to see her back in life.

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She finally gave up her thoughts.What ever she wanted to tell..she thought to do it now.

Kriya:Rey...

He looked up at her, d turmoil clearly visible on her face as if she was lost in a chain of thoughts.She held his hand stronger n rested her aching head on his shoulder.He saw her hand as it gripped his, he noticed something really different a weird mark on her hand something bitten.He touched it wid an anxiety shuddering him to know wat was it.

"Dis isnt happening", he shouted aloud.

"Kriya, wat is dis??", he asked her for which he got no response.

She parted her from him, she was unconscious again.He immediately called d doctor for her.

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Rey:Doctor wat happened to her??Y did she faint again??

Doctor:Nothing its just d effect of d pills.They r so effective, she wil feel drowsy.

Rey:Wat happened to her doctor??

Doctor:I shud bother to ask u abt dat Reyaansh Singhania..Y is she hurted lyk dat??Wat hapnd wid her??She had severe blood loss so she is fainting just by d pills.It wud b really better if some lady takes care of her.

Rey:Blood Loss..how??

Doctor*Shouting*:Wats wrong wid u..cant u see she is hurted on d head.

Rey:Sorry Doctor..

Doctor:Its ok..take care of her n call me if u hav an urgency.

Rey:Thanks Doctor..

Doctor:Welcome..

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So dis part ends here n next part I wil try my level best to post it today...

Pls dnt forget to post d reviews..no matter if it is gud or bad.

N dnt expect updates from me..busy wid my schedule.

Edited by snigdha_arsha - 13 years ago

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#579

Snigdha this was awesome.

plz continu it soon.

y is kria suffering so much.

plz solve the mistery soon.

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Shravni

@Shrvz_PoPpY

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Posted: 13 years ago

#580

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unres

unres meow plz ab tu sacchi mai dara rahi hai meow i m getting goosebumps plz jaldi bata kon hai vo new enemy jo bechari kriya ko itna dara raha hai vo door ka band hona nd kriya ka faint hone each nd everything is scaring me

Edited by ShravniC - 13 years ago