~Barsaat~ ||SwaRon OS||

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hii guys, some of you might be knowing me. I am Surbhi and this is my first OS and it's on SwaRon. I hope you like it.
I know i have my Kriyaansh SS pending to be updated, but the idea for this OS just came in my mind and i thought of sharing it with you all.

If anyone wishes to go through my Kriyaansh SS, then here's the link-

Will you be mine? ||Kriyaansh SS||


~Barsaat~

"Yeh traffic jam kab khatam hoga?"

"Pata nai sir. Baarish hogaye hai, ab hills mein aisa jam lag jaye toh ghantoon lag sakte hain."

"Ok." was all he could say.

He waited in his car for the roads to clear and gazed at his surroundings.

Dalhousie was truly a beautiful hill station; Lush green hills, cool breeze and the rain; Amazing weather.

He belonged to Delhi but was here for a meeting and now because of this traffic jam he might be late.

Fiddling with his cell phone, he heard a women calling for a cab. He looked at her closely from his car window. She was standing on the other side of the road, clad in a sari which was now completely drenched. Her long brown curls were half wet, blowing in the wind.

"Taxi!" she called for the third time but no one stopped.

He got up from his car with an umbrella and went towards the lady.

"Hi!" he said while she turned around to see a man dressed in black suit and wearing frameless glasses.

She looked at his dark black eyes which met with her light brown pair.

"Yes?" she replied.

"I can drop you if you don't mind." he answered while indicating his car.

"No. Its ok." she answered softly.

Her sweet gently voice was like music to his ears.

"I saw you standing here for quite some time. The weather isn't good. You are already soaked. Please, I insist." he said in a convincing manner.

"Ok." she replied while he took her to his car and opened the back door for her, in a perfect gentleman like manner.

"Thank You." she said while sitting down while he opened the opposite door for himself.

"I am Swayam." he said giving a smile.

"I am Sharon." she said silently.

Both of them shook hands and stared at each other's eyes for a while till Sharon broke the spell and looked away.

"I'll tell you the way." she told the driver after a brief moment of silence.

The roads were slowly getting cleared and the rain almost subsided.

Swayam saw her shivering. It was definitely chilly and on top of that she was completely drenched. He took a shawl from the back seat and placed it around her shoulders. She gazed at him when his fingers touched her soft cool skin.

"Thank You." she said and looked away from his eyes which seemed to be quite captivating.

Within half an hour, the car was outside Sharon's place; a huge house with a beautiful lawn in front.

"Lovely house." Swayam said while she just smiled.

"Why don't you come over for coffee?" she offered while getting down from the car.

"Umm..No. Thanks. I have a meeting."

"Ok. Thank You." she replied and moved towards the entrance.

But she stopped after taking a few steps ahead and looked back at Swayam who just smiled. She smiled and turned back moving towards her place.

Swayam came out of his car and looked at her retreating figure.

He saw a small girl rushing to Sharon.

"Mumma! I missed you a lot." the little girl said cutely, while Sharon picked her up in her arms and gave a light peck on her cheeks.

"Mumma missed you too honey!" she smiled and then went inside her house.

Swayam still stood outside his car, his eyes still gazing at the entrance.

"Sharon." he whispered and smiled.

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ok, so how was it? Please do leave your comments and hit the like tab you liked it.

I know it was quite short and random, but just thought of sharing it with you all.


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Tyler_Durden thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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MUMMA seriously...sharon a mother .
married and all but not to Swayam...lol...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh so sweet
hw he cares 4 her when she shivers
n SHARON MUMMA??????????????
bt cute concept
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ok i quite dint understand ur concept... But nice to read... Nice work...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely one.
Sharon is married and wat was that wit swayam???
plz continue and update next part soon.
thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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good one...sharon doesnt know swayam right??? swayam in hre i guess didnt expressed his love for her...it was juss a one-sided love...and he still loves her though shez married...the ending part is emotinal...where swayam spells her Name...but in D3 swayam and sharon shud become swaron one day
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Starting was indeed beautiful . . . . 😊

Swayam- a caring guy helping a young lady in BARSAAT 😳

& In the end -- mumma??

Omg . . . . Ye kya tha... 😲

cv's to swaron ko mila nhi rahe,,, u also ruined the hopes 🤣

can stop ROFLing . . . . . Sharon is a mom... 😛

anyways gud attempt 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful os...jalsi update kar na...
nj_SRKholic thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Firstly a beautiful os no doubt bt i feel u shoulf cont it as a ff givin it sum twist... plz consider ma suggestion if u dnt mind coz u hav written it beautifully... thnkz a lot fr d pm..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#10
its nyc... kinda liked d ending...

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