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Surbhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: sauravkathuria
MUMMA seriously...sharon a mother .
married and all but not to Swayam...lol...

yeah, i noe it wasn't expected..but the story was just about an encounter..

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Surbhi

@surbhi_d3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: kriyansh.d3
oh so sweet
hw he cares 4 her when she shivers
n SHARON MUMMA??????????????
bt cute concept

yeah, i noe dat was unexpected..!

thanks for ur comments dear! 😊

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Surbhi

@surbhi_d3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: manasie
Ok i quite dint understand ur concept... But nice to read... Nice work...

well, the concept was basically an encounter of SwaRon..

they way they met, a brief interaction and obviously from the write up one can understand that Swayam felt something for her and maybe Sharon too, since she looked back at him..maybe she was shy to say something, maybe she wanted him not to go too far since she had a whole different life of her own, as in the end we get to see that she is a 'mother'.

thanks for ur comments! 😊

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Surbhi

@surbhi_d3

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: tinatartari
res

waiting for ur comments...

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Surbhi

@surbhi_d3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: asmaju
lovely one.
Sharon is married and wat was that wit swayam???
plz continue and update next part soon.
thanks for the pm.

thanks for ur comments Asma!

well dear its an OS, so no continuation!

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Surbhi

@surbhi_d3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: luvSwaron4ever
good one...sharon doesnt know swayam right??? no, she doesn't know abt him, just met him that day swayam in hre i guess didnt expressed his love for her..yes, you can say dat, maybe he wanted to..but when he got a glimpse of her daughter, he stopped himself...it was juss a one-sided love..maybe.and he still loves her though shez married...the ending part is emotinal..yeah! it is!.where swayam spells her Name...but in D3 swayam and sharon shud become swaron one day swaron are meant to be together, whatever the situations maybe

thanks you dear! 😊

i really appreciate ur response..!

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Surbhi

@surbhi_d3

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: kritzzz_ArSha
GR8!!!

thank you! 😊

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Surbhi

@surbhi_d3

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: yogini64
Starting was indeed beautiful . . . . 😊 thanks!

Swayam- a caring guy helping a young lady in BARSAAT 😳 yeah..! 😊

& In the end -- mumma?? yeah, i noe it was unexpected!

Omg . . . . Ye kya tha... 😲 😆

cv's to swaron ko mila nhi rahe,,, u also ruined the hopes 🤣 lol, don't say dis dear! it was just an encounter! maine yeh toh nai kaha ki sawron couldn't get together!

can stop ROFLing . . . . . Sharon is a mom... 😛 i know! 😆

anyways gud attempt 😉 thank you!