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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi thanks 4 da pm n superb update! Geet wanted help n leaves bt Sumaira takes advantage n calls John! Haet her n John! 😡 Poor Geet! she hurt her ankle n John helped her bt Maan sees her in his arms! Will Maan beleive her! Maan seemed angry! Precap is interesting! Hope MAan listens to Geet. Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
MAAN TRUSTS GEET
HE SHOULD ASK JOHN WHY HE LEFT THE OFFICE
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome.
loved it.
Maan will trust geet.
continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 48
nice part...
that Chopras are getting on my nerves so much...
Maan just send them to jail...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan knew something was off...that is y he came rushing there...

i dont think he will suspect her...

continue soon..

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan trusts geets
n awesomeee updateee
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey guys,

This is my last update on this FF. Thank you for all the support you provided me. I know some of you will be upset but its better I end it so I could concentrate on my other Maaneet FF "Inteha Pyar Ki".

Part 49


Maan took Geet out of the car holding her in his mascular strong arms. He never said a word all through out and Geet was too frightened by his reaction to fathom anything to say. The rain was falling on top of the hottest couple around. She forgot her pain seeing Maan suffering from what had happened.

He took her inside and Kumkum came forward worried at the sight that fell before her.

"Maan beta kya hua? Geet teek toh hain na?"

"Haan maa thori moch ayi hain...she twisted her ankle and could not walk that is why I had to carry her".

"Son take her upstairs and I will call our lady doctor" said his father Singhania. He really took a shine to Geet now. His friendship with Karan was back to what it was in the beginning. The goodness of the father and daughter was finally for all to see.

Maan felt relieved that his father was calling a lady doctor. He was way too possessive of his darling Mishty Geet. He went up to their bedroom and placed her on a recliner chair. Like a very caring husband he began taking her clothes off.

"Maan...what are you doing?" she said shyly.

"Geet I am your husband now and its not as if I haven't seen you before".

"Haan muje pata hain par pir bi..muje sharam ati hain".

"Toh teek hain I will keep my eyes closed". He said with a slight smirk. He kept his promise and began changing with his eyes closed. She was all dry and clean now.

"Maan aap bi change kar lejiye...all your clothes are wet..you will catch a cold". She checked his forehead just incase he had fallen ill.

He picked her up in his arms and layed her on their super king size bed. He went and got changed in his t shirt and tracksuit bottoms.

Once he was dry he looked at her feet and could tell it had swollen. "Maan don't touch it really hurts". A slight touch of his was causing her pain. He looked on worried and took his mobile to ring his father as to how long the doctor will be round.

The doctor arrived in about an hour and looked at her feet and advised her to have plenty of rest and gave her some painkillers and ointment to massage into her feet. Maan felt relieved at the fact that it was nothing too serious.

The family left the couple to rest- it was enough drama for the day. Maan fed her and gave her the medicines. He sat there massaging her feet and she looked on lovingly at her adoring husband.

"Maan aap ne mujse poocha nahin John ke bare main...Maan I had to take his help in reaching back home..I did not want to but the circumstances were such that I had no other option".

Maan put his finger on her lips.

"ssshhh Geet don't embarrass me further...humara pyar itna kamzor nahin ke main John ki wajah se tum par shak karoo..I trust you with all my life...I was angry with John that why he took a day off to pursue you and create seeds of doubt in my head..but he didn't know that my Geet is so pure that no man no matter how goodlooking can come in between us...galti toh meri hain ke maine tume waha akele beja..it was not safe...but maybe I should be thankful to John that no matter what his intentions were he helped you back...so your safe thats whats upmost important to me".

He lovingly cupped her face and gave her feathery kisses all over her face and she hugged him.

"Maan main iss duniya ki sabse khush kismet larki hoon muje aap jaisa humsafar mila...I love you so much".

He smiled and deepened the hug and replied. "So you are but I love you more".

They knew they were together and now nothing could stop them from leading a happy joyful life. Maan and Geet were aware that they were a lethal force to be reckoned with. Together they could overcome any obstacles whatever life threw at them. This was just the beginning of their beautiful life together.

THE END.

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Posted: 13 years ago
maan didn't doubt on her but it will be the last part i never thaught of it



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Posted: 13 years ago
yay maan never doubted her...but i was shocked when you said last update...oh well..it was great while it lasted..thanks hun for such a superb FF😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome udpate dear
loved it
aww Maan is so cute, he never doubted her,
so sad u ended this FF
will miss it

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