Ibadat -MG ff -part 7/pg 50...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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A Fiction about a lonely simple girl who was abused ,terrified and mistreated by her family after her father's death ...who was thrown in a brothel(a house of prostitution).And her saviour...A frustrated lonely man , world's one of the richest bookie who runs a so called legal cricket betting online .How he ends up in brothel, saves her...or rather save himself from all his addictions , illegality and worships her innocence ,her godliness ...How she make him realize he was no more a soul less being ,the way she thrusted life into him making him believe the world is no more a lonely place when she is with him...a place actually worth living.

Its IBADAT...all about devotion ,submission, obedience and worship.


Jaan Ve... Jaan Le... Haal-E-Dil
Aaja Tere Seene Mein Saans Saans Piglu Mein
Aaja Tere Hoton Se Baath Baath Niklu Mein
Tu Meri Aag Se Roshini Chaant Le
Yeh Zameen Asmaan Jo Bhi Hai Baant Le


Aaja Mahiya Aaja
Bebasiyan Aaja
Din Jo Bhi Raatan, Sab Dasiyan Aaja
Teri Jholiyan Paaoon, Ghar Galiyan Aaja



Aaja Tere Maathe Pe Chaand Ban Ke Uthroon Mein
Aaja Teri Aankhon Se Khwab Khwab Guzroon Mein
Rag Rag Pe Hai Tere Saaye Ve Rag Rag Pe Hai Tere Saaye
Rang Tere Chadd Chadd Aaye Ve Rang Tera Chadd Chadd Aaye
Jaane Ve'..Jaane Ve ..
Haal-E-Dil

Aaja Tujhe Haaton Pe Kismathon Sa Likhloon Mein
Aaja Tere Khande Pe Umr Bhar Ko Tikloon mai
Teri Ankhiyon Ke Do Gehne Ve Teri Ankhiyon Ke Do Gehne
Phirthe Hai Pehne Pehne Ve Phirthe Hai Pehne Pehne


Aaja Tere Seene Mein Saans Saans Piglu Mein
Aaja Tere Hoton Se Baath Baath Niklu Mein
Tu Meri Aag Se Roshini Chaant Le
Yeh Zameen Asmaan Jo Bhi Hai Baant Le

Jaan Ve

Jaane Le

Haal-E-Dil



With Love

Varsh Rai

my other ff still running...

Depth Of Love(https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2741747)

Please add me if you want pm's.😊


Index:


part1

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2904420&TPN=6

part2

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2904420&TPN=14

part3

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2904420&TPN=19

part 4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2904420/ibadat-mg-ff-part-7-pg-50?pn=25

part5

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2904420/ibadat-mg-ff-part-7-pg-50

part 6

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2904420/ibadat-mg-ff-part-7-pg-50



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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow i loved d intro..
its awesoome..
cont.soon...
n add me in ur pm list too...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow...sounds interesting...would love to read more.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved the intro dear
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its really amazing want to read more
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sounds intresting dear:)
plz continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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looking forward...🤗


continue the story...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i lov d intro yar...
awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congarts on ur new ff dear...
good intro ...
loved it...continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sound interesting
its really awesome want to read more
continue soon
plz add me in your pm list

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