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Papon Tabassum

@paponecon

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

what a mind blowing starting...just wow...every scenes...every lines...everything...

n when ... And their eyes met...

Ke tum shuru hue jaha mai khatam hua... i was just thud...

really impressed...eagerly waiting for next one...geet is new there n maan her first customer...if maan nw will leave her there in that condition someone other will definitely enter...what will happen nw...geet is so naive n i think weak also that she fainted for two times...then what will happen when she will physically abuse...

bt i loved th banner most...geets innocent eyes...maans angry eyes...maaneet sorrow n painful eyes...just awesome...

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

omg!hw cruel this life s..

thankgod msk ne sahi waqt par aaya..

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AliaSharma

@AliaSharma

Beginner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Different concept and story... i really liked it... 👏
cont. soon... 😊

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lively-piia

@lively-piia

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

wow...dat was a starting i hv expected...

lvd it to the core...

cont

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Silent.feelings

@Silent.feelings

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Awesome dear..
Loved it so much..
Please continue soon..

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago

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kalpna

@goyalkalpna123

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

awsume

i was literally crying

yaar aap log aisa kyun likjhte ho ki rula hi do

but this is awsome men

keep update soon

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seemamary

@seemamary

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Wonderful start dear, waiting to see maan taking the girl to his place.

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

this is very ugly truth of our society...

where men make all the rules for the women in their home... don't go there, don't talk, don't see, don't be like this, don't do like that...and for them brothels are running...everyday hundreds of girls are forced to come into this profession...

very painful update...

thank God Maan went there and meet her...

waiting for next update...

thanx for pm...