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dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

loved it that was so hilarious that's adden

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Nabigha

@Nabigha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

@Adden...woww tht was just superb!!!! plz do make more nd on a serious note UV shuld cum to i-f...he'll definitely find sumeone...'layak' for him...better then tht J nd specially Manyata...

Aa bhi ja...aaa bhi jaa...ek baar...aaa bhi jaa
Akaash ke saath Monya ko kar vida
Oh humare dilruba aaa bhi jaaa...

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Simran

@Simran114

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Loved your poem😆, especially the ending.

@Nabiga: Agreed, UV could get anyone he wants, he doesn't have to wait around for M

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Nabigha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

@simran...yeahh true but ye larka kab samjhe ga...actually main he has no fault in all this it is only nd only Monash's fault nd Monyia's screeching...i hope it ends soon!!!! Aur need not to say UV kitna popular hai uss ke liye waise bhi kitni larkiyan mar mitne ko tayaar haiin...(me inclusive)*winks*

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Simran

@Simran114

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

@ Nabigha: He has been blinded by M😆. But I'm sure he'll notice the long line of girls waiting "patiently" for him, he just needs to look beyond the horizon (ie M).