Poem-Uday's love ... a little fun :)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Uday's love at first sight... 😉

I saw her in a crowded bar
I worshipped her from afar
Her rose lips shining like that of a star
Her hair as black as new laid tar.

Her eyes they sparkled like a fire
To fill a man with deep desire
Of the kind that will never tire
I tell the truth. I ain't no liar.

I crossed the room with heavy tread
I had one thought inside my head
"Are you talking to me?" she said passing by
"Yes, you ... you ... next to the bald-headed guy,
"I think you're real gorgeous said I
... that dark black hair
Is exceedingly beautiful and really quite rare.

"I love the way that it curls round your face,
And the way that it seems your ears to embrace,
And the way that it darkens the brown of your eyes,
And the way on your cheek that a loose tendril lies."

She took a deep breath as she paused in her stride,
Her lips slowly parted, her eyes opened wide,
She smiled as she whipped the wig from her head,
"If you like it so much, here, you wear it instead."

"W*F? did I fall in love for a girl like that? ", a voice there said.
I thought she was into me but she stole my bloody wallet instead
She was beautiful on the outside
She'll look gorgeous dressed as a bride
Did she just leave Yuvraj Udaveer with an attitude blow?
That thief of girl left with her Mall ka hero
Sure she aint my cup of tea
If not her, I'll go search on India Forums
Heard lots of girls there are Gaga over UV
Let me go find a girl, suitable for me...
Okay, So I was really bored and thought of rhyming a few words ... and I ended up writing this 😆 Do comment and let me know what you think of it ... 😳 Hope it isn't bad 😕 This was written in only 10 mins, so I'm not expecting you guys to like it a lot, but let's see 😊
And if you liked it please do hit the 'LIKE' button, cheerz xx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was AMAZING!! I loved the last part!!: Do make more!;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: AKlover101

That was AMAZING!! I loved the last part!!: Do make more!;)

Thankyou! 😃 I'll try my best to 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Haha Adden!
Awesome poem,loved your rhyming alot! 😊
and so true gaga on IF 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow really commendable job for 10 min of writing nice 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really liked it.. great.. n love the rhymes.. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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UV - Hamari Adden is available for you. You'll love her she's a total darling!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: carisma2

UV - Hamari Adden is available for you. You'll love her she's a total darling!


Awwwh! Sooo sweet of you sweety 😃 Thankyou soo much 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Adden123


Awwwh! Sooo sweet of you sweety 😃 Thankyou soo much 😳

Welcome Sweeto - Sorry not replied to last PM - But I certainly will
I got distracted - unfortunately.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww,it was really cute n funny!!!😆 u know what,u shud write more poems!!!👏

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