The Unsaid (Short Story) - Page 2

Originally posted by: nooriewas

Its really good ss dear plzz continue ur nxt part...

thank you so much, and I would😊

Originally posted by: Allbut1

Very, very, very good! You've kept it very real, Yash's ignorance, Aarti's changing feelings, they were all very nicely described! Definitely post the second part, would love to read it :)

Thank you so much... I would try to post the next part in few days,though not sure how it would turn out😊

that was wonderfully done...go ahead and write the next parts too...please

u!!!!duffer!
tu ne mujhse kaha ki creative nahi ho and????
wat was dat????
mindblowing!!!!
ab jaldi se continue kar!

Originally posted by: SallyAmanda

u!!!!duffer!
tu ne mujhse kaha ki creative nahi ho and????
wat was dat????
mindblowing!!!!
ab jaldi se continue kar!

Maine sahi kaha...I am not at all creative, and if I have tried,credit goes to only you. Your request set me thinking,and I decided to give it a try. So thank you😊

Originally posted by: -enchanted-

Maine sahi kaha...I am not at all creative, and if I have tried,credit goes to only you. Your request set me thinking,and I decided to give it a try. So thank you😊

Aww thnk.u...wats ur name?

Wow! The plot was a bit similar to my imagination in my OS - badmaash dil! But I'm eager to see how you continue! Awesome work:)

nice start