ISHQ JHAGRA MANZIL (chapter 1-12)

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CHAPTER-10

recap: setting up of room , sharon -rey injured

new entry : robert ( gardener)
jovial, funny, good at heart..consider reyam martin as his good friends

A DAY BEFORE VALENTINE DAY

It was early moning 6:00 am
rey was in his gym whereas swayam was at the dinning table reading newspaper n martin was in the kitchen n our sharon was in bed sleeping still, while hugging her one of the teddy...

rey was doing workout with his dumb bells while standing near a window of his gym...he saw one figure in the garden near flower bush... as he couldn't see the face of the figure...he stopped his exercise in between n went to get a clear view from balcony...now he can see two figures instead, who were talking to eachother...

he was still not able to see their faces but he can only figure out one of them was their gardener "Robert" while other was a girl who was perfectly dressed into a nice casual dress ..

she stood their talking n laughing with Robert but wait "why she is holding a towel in her one hand ??? oh !! her hair was wet n a towel was probably to dry her hair...but who is she ?? is Robert with his gf??but she looks younger than him!! anyways am happy for him " he thought...

he was in his thoughts n came back to reality when there was only that girl standing there but Robert was nowhere to be seen...

the girl bent down sideways a little n started to dry her hairs ...watching that girl drying her hair in the cool morning was a scene of purity in the atmosphere for rey... rey couldn't see her face . she was drying her hair...but suddenly she stopped and stepped ahead...

rey raised his head n stood a little on his toes to glance of what interesting caught her attention . she stepped forward and about to catch something but it flew away ,he saw it was a butterfly which she was trying to catch but the butterfly was more alert than her , the butterfly came near by flower to rey's side(he was still in the balcony which was on 1st floor) and the garden(ground floor) was down little ahead from him...

the butterfly flew to nearest flower , the girl came and tried to catch and this time she was successful ...now this time rey was able to see her face..it was none other than kria herself, she looked so pure and serene at that time rey couldn't help himself but to drool over her... a small smile crept on his lips..

kria was on other hand was unaware about the fact that she was being watched by someone ...she stood there with towel on her one shoulder and removed few strand of her hair which was on her face with her one hand and on the other she held wings of the butterfly with the tip of her one finger n thumb very delicately she kissed it lightly without harming the butterfly and let loose it from her hand ..the butterfly flew away and she smiled back at it...

rey was watching all this from the balcony and just smiled at her innocence "oh god she is so innocent let her be like this forever"

kria went inside the house and greeted "goodmorning" to swayam who was reading newspaper

"hey come lets have tea together..." swayam offered

" oh no swayam i have to go somewhere!!" kriya said

"ok have a nice day" swayam wished

" same to you" kriya smiled

swayam back to newspaper while she barged into her room and saw sharon still sleeping .. she went near her and kissed on her forehead and said sweetly

" wake up sharon!!" kriya said

"hmmmnnn...mmmnnn..."

kria stroked sharon's hair
"wake up kiddo!!"

sharon saw the time on her table clock
" sis its only 6:30 plz let me sleep plz..."

" ok am leaving 4 orphanage.." kriya informed

" y??"

"just to meet the children...as u know mom n dad opened it..."

" ok bye!!!"
and again slept..

kria left for orphanage

at 6:35

sharon woke up and was still in sleepy mood..she was wearing a normal night suit (just a Capri loose pants n short top)

she stepped outside the room with a teddy in one hand and was rubbing her one eye...

"kria??" she whimpered

swayam looked at the direction from where the voice came..

he saw at his little angel who was looking like a kid not more than 5 yr old ...she was looking so cute ... he stared at her and smiled "indeed that is why kria addresses her "little" no wonder " he thought to himself...he was admiring her but her whimpering " kria??" broke his thought process...

" kria is not at home..." swayam informed

hearing swayam's voice her eyes were wide opened...she saw swayam starring at her from bottom to top n when his eyes met hers ..swayam realized what he was doing..he suddenly started looking into the newspaper n sharon ran into the room..

she came back from her room to the dinning table where swayam was already sitting...

" goodmorning" sharon said while pouring out herself coffee

swayam lifted his head n looked at her..

she was wearing a yellow floral dress ...
swayam wondered " this girl look so so cute even while wearing so simple dress"

rey also joined them ...

"good morning swaron" rey said sitting in front of them

sharon n swayam looked here n there...

"arey am greeting both of u "swa" of swayam n "ron" of sharon..."

sharon n swayam looked at him with shutup look...

just then martin also came n said " goodmorning kids" ...

"goodmorning " swaron greeted

"hey goodmorning what are ur plan on this vday??" rey asked

"just nothing.." martin replied bit sadly

"u know what i have some plan for my new sexy date..." rey said

"whats new ??" martin said uninterested

"arey i want to tell u my date name..." rey suppressed his smile and poured himself coffee

"why me?? why dont u tell ur stupid ideas to these both...!!"

"arey they are already having plan !!" rey said while taking sip of his coffee

"what plan??" swaron asked together

" you both are celebrating vday together na??" rey teased

"really??" martin asked loudly

"what the hell me n that too with her !!!" swayam scrunched his head in disgust

"no way... never with him never...i dont want to ruin my vday ...ok !!" sharon too commented

swaron shot dagger look with eachother...

" anyways leave it where i was ??? oh yes i am having date for this vday that is tommorrow..." rey interrupted

"stop it am not interested..." martin said placing his hands on his temple

martin turned to leave

" miss maria..." rey yelled...

martin stopped in his way

"really..." swayam asked

"u must be kidding..." martin said

"no am not!!" rey smirked

" if this is a joke then i'll kill u.."

" do anyone care to tell me who is miss maria??" sharon asked

just then kria came back from orphanage...

" hey everyone..." kriya greeted while entering

but she sensed there was an atmosphere of disscussion in the air...
sharon ran towards her and dragged her...

"come join us..." sharon said pulling her

"what happened??"

" dude r u serious??" swayam asked looking at rey

"but who is miss maria??" sharon asked

" umm sharon , actually martin loves miss maria who happened to be rey's nurse ...martin fell in love with her at first sight..
i dont understand how people find time for the shit called "love"..." swayam said in irritated

martin sat on the chair with his hand on his head...
n muttered " mujhse toh acchhe se baat bhi nahi karti or is stupid ke saath date?? kitna patane ki koshish ki n kitni dishes banayi but sab par paani phir gaya"

kria came towards him put his hand on his shoulder n said
"martin r u ok??"

" hey martin dont be sad...come on boy!!" swayam said cheering up

"hey marts we will find another hot chik 4 u...come on cheer up..." sharon commented

"waise martin main ek baat toh batana bhul hi gaya..." rey smirked

"now what??" martin said making fist from his hand

" i didnt asked her 4 date yet?? but am sure she will not refuse.. "

" what ?? how can u be so sure ??" martin said in bewilderment

"u know i have my way with girls dude ...my secretary knows me better ...she sees me handling lot of girls everyday..."

all looked at kria...
kria just rolled her eyes n said " whatever"

" can anyone tell me what's in him that's not in me.." martin asked sadly

"everything u see..." rey answered
all glared at him n said "shut up rey"

" oh come on martin !!! u have everything ...and i must say u r far better than him..." kriya answered

"what??" rey was shocked

martin's face lit up by kria's comment...

"tumhe pata bhi hai ki tum kiske baare mein bol rahi ho??"

" kyu aapko nahi pata mai apke baare mein hi bol rahi hu..." kriya answered arrogantly

"tum..."

" wow i haven't heard any of the girl talking to rey like that..." martin said getting surprised
swayam came n whispered to him " i told u she is different"

"thank god... there is atleast someone who is at my side who dont fancy this idiot...u know what this swayam is good 4 nothing..." martin sighed in relief

"that we already know that this khadoos is good for nothing... he would prefer to be stay away from taking anyone's side... am i right mr. khadoos??" sharon asked narrowing her eyebrows

" just shutup...ok ...what do u know about love??" swayam asked

" oh hello !! mujhe love ke baare mein pata nahi toh kya hua tumhe toh hasna bhi nahi aata..." sharon retorted
" tum..."

" will u both shut up..." kriya said getting irritated

" martin she will be here right now in few min..." rey informed

" here but y??"

" for me dear.. u forgot.." rey smiled
" oh come on rey just stop it u have already teased him very well today..."
swayam said while laughing at martins face

" what ?? whatever u said about date...was ..." martin stood and glared at rey with his hands on hips
" ok ok it was just a joke..." rey confessed

" rey singhania u'll pay for this ...no icecream today... u got it..." martin threatened with throwing her hands in air

"but martin ...am sorry it was just a joke..." rey said making baby face

"u'll have to suffer...4 such a bad joke.."

" ok but she is coming..." rey informed

"really...??? umm ...sharon how do i look??"

"perfect marts..." sharon said flattering

"but y she is coming??" martin asked

"for my checkup...mr. lover..." rey teased

just then door bell rings.."TING TONG"

"it must be her.." rey said

" let me go n greet her very first..." martin said running to open the door

all chuckled at martin's behavior...
he wore a broad smile that almost touched his ears but as soon as he opened the door his smile vanished..

"REY...REY SINGHANIA... COME OUT U MORON U LITTLE DEVIL...COME OUT RIGHT NOW"

all three looked at rey n rey sighed " looks like am gonna have a adventurous day today a day before vday"

all came out from where the voice came...

the voice was of none other than their gardener "robert" -the most dramatic person after rey , sharon n martin, who just barged in...

" hey robert glad to see u n happy valentine day...how r u??" rey came into living room and greeted robert

" how dare u??" robert shouted

"what?? what have i done??" rey asked in confussion

" look people he is asking what he had done??" robert said

" robert calm down" swayam said placing his hand on robert's shoulder

" no way this is the 4th time...he did this..." robert shouted

"whats the matter??" martin said

"stop it now!! tell me whats ur problem??" rey asked getting angry

" ok y did u pluck flowers from my dearest garden...??"

rey crossed his arms n said " i didnt do it"

" robert..." kriya intervened slowly

till now robert was almost shouting but hearing kria's voice.. he softened a bit..but b4 kria could speak..

" so will u tell me y did u??" robert said calmly this time

" i said i didn't.."

"dont lie.."

"but.." kriya again intervened

" robert rey dont lies.." swayam said

"oh yeah if he's not then who..." robert said not getting convinced

"how could u be so sure that he plucked those flowers.??" martin asked

" yeah tell me...??" rey asked

" hey i am so sure because only white roses have been plucked from my garden..n we all know he likes white roses.." robert explained

" it must be someone else..." martin reasoned calmly

"r u kidding?? like martin is elergic to roses..."

martin in mind " now what will i give to miss maria??"

"n sharon baby loves orchids..." robert continued

swayam in mind "so she likes orchids"

" n who else likes white roses..." robert asked

" u didnt say swayam or kria.."

" now dont joke ...kria baby is not like u..." robert explained

"but..." kriya said

"n this stone ?? flowers n he?? its like sky touching earth..." robert said pointing towards swayam

"no its like sun rising in the west..." rey intervened

"no its like swayam having girlfriend..." sharon said recalling office- flower scene

"no its like rey leave eating icecream..." martin too put his input

they all laughed...

" its not funny guys..." swayam glared at him

" umm.. robert i plucked those flowers..." kria said at last

as soon as kria uttered those words all were silent n just stared kria...

"what??" robert asked in shock

" yeah am really sorry! actually i searched 4 u but u weren't there n i was getting late so i plucked roses without ur permission...i didnt knew u were that much possesive 4 ur flowers...i am really sorry ..i promise i wont repeat it...i am..." kriya stammered

but robert cut her in between..

" hey its ok kria baby...u could have taken red roses..." robert offered

"WHAT??" all asked in unison

all were shocked as robert suggested red roses...

"man one second before u were ready to kill me ...n now u r suggesting her red roses..." rey asked bewildered

" plz rey she is not like u...u waste my flowers on stupid n dumb gfs of yours...n kria tomorrow is valentine day ... so why white y not red??" robert taunted

"oh i love white roses!!" kriya said

"u too...??" robert smiled

rey in mind " so miss beautiful ko bhi white rose pasand hai no wonder .. thats why everytime she looks so pure n serene..."

"am so sorry rey..." robert apologized

(no response)

"rey ?? REY??" robert pinched him

" ahhh.." rey shouted in pain

" i said sorry..."

rey back to his senses...its ok ... u see i am a good boy...

" yeah until n unless u pluck my flowers...bye everyone n happy vday in advance..." robert took leave

"so martin can i have icecream now..." rey asked hoping to get

" no way..."

"but plz..."

"martin can i get 1 icecream.." swayam asked

"sure swayam" martin answered

at this swayam chuckled n all stared at rey...n went to dinning hall...

"hey but this is so unfair...u cant do this to me..." rey shouted

"offcousrse ...i can...n i will not give u icecream..."

"WHY NOT"...came a voice all looked at the voice direction...

pheww!!

precap: entry of miss maria n rey ka band bajega... swayam fed up of sharon...

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