ISHQ JHAGRA MANZIL (chapter 1-12)

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chetna yogini

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Posted: 14 years ago

#381

Originally posted by: _Monu_
amazing updt guysss fabulos workkk
loved it a lott

it was also sooo funny with martin entry with his

"dearest kitchen" dialogue..lol

swaron n kriyaansh scenens were amazing

specially swayam helpin sharon with teddies

n their hawa hawa look look..lol

rey helping kriya with the box of stones..i mean books..lol

n rey pulled her so hard that she fell on him..

n then hawa hawa look look started..lol

loved this part a lottt

really great work

love yaaa

thnx 4 such a lovely comment

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chetna yogini

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Posted: 14 years ago

#382

Originally posted by: Asha_ArSha
such an awesome ff n awesome update😃

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chetna yogini

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Posted: 14 years ago

#383

Originally posted by: D3_kriyaansh
awesome update...kriyaansh and swaron were amazing...i just loved it...😃

thnx

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Posted: 14 years ago

#384

Pls update d next part soon...i love ur ff..i am waiting eagerly..

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Posted: 14 years ago

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pls update soon! n plz pm me.. 😊 i luv ur ff..

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CHAPTER-9

recap: entry of martin , kriya-sharon shifted in new appartment

all four of them were standing in the room with their hands on their waist looking at the suite of furniture randomly placed in the room...

sharon looking at the two beds in the room..
" i dont want to sleep on different bed..." sharon said loudly

"why?? r u scared to sleep alone?? don't worry..!! ghost bhi tumhe dekhkar bhaag jayenge..." swayam mocked and giggled...😆

sharon shot a dagger look at swayam...

but rey interrupted
"and agar wo phir bhi nahi bhaage toh swayam toh hai na u can sleep with him...😉😉 "

at this both swayam n sharon in unison " shut up rey..."

"see u both thinks like same y dont u both try..." rey commented

"shut up rey or i will kill u..."
sharon chased rey in the room

just then kria stopped them...
" sharon room mein bhaagna band karo warna chot lag jaayegi" kriya warned

sharon n rey stopped n stood at their places like a small kids ...n started looking at kria...😆

"pehle ek kaam karte hai.. dono beds ko join karte hai... " kriya rubbed her hands together

all four joined hands to lift the beds n joined them...

"now what's next...??" swayam asked

"sharon tum ek kaam karo place that seating there ..." kriya said

"ok i'll help her .. " swayam volunteered

"ok!! while reyansh n i will set these suite of furniture.."

"its "rey"..." rey said
but kria cut him in between

"whatever..."

swaron giggled at rey..

"mujhe bahot pyaas lagi hai..." sharon said

"ok u just wait i'll bring water for u..." swayam said while going into kitchen

" jab tak wo kadoos ata hai tab tak let me place this suitcase above that cupboard..."

sharon took a stool n stood on it n tried to balance herself on it but the stool just slipped n her hands flew in the air n a loud screamed released from her throat...she was about about to fall but a strong hand caught her in the middle of her fall...👏👏

sharon's eyes were shut...kriyaansh came running to her.. she opened her eyes ..she was in our majnu's hand..she was continuosly looking in swayam's eyes ..they both were looking at each other...their look look hawa hawa session was on...but both were brought back on earth by kria's voice..

"sharon tum thik toh ho na??" kriya asked

"mai bilkul thik hu..." sharon said still in swayam's arms

"tum.. tum sambhal kar kaam nahi kar sakti...kitni baar bola hai apna dhyan rakhna seekho but tum toh tum ho na... sunti kaha ho kisi ki..." kriya scolded her

while kria was full on lecturing her ...all this while rey was smirking at swaron at looking their faces as they never realised that swayam was holding sharon in her arms like a baby n sharon was least bother to notice that her hands were across his neck...she was patiently listening to kria's lecture..

just then swayam noticed rey's smirk ...he realized that sharon is still in his arm..she was looking cute in his arms...but thought to irritate her...😉😉

"kria tumhari little sis sach mein 'little' hai...kuch bhi thik se nahi kar sakti..." swayam taunted

"what do u mean by that... mai apna kaam khud kar sakti hu..." sharon argued

" that i can see..." swayam said while scrunching his nose

"tum...tum na maha khadoos ho..."

"ek aur word bola na toh mai tumhe gira dunga..."

"whatever... maha khadoos..."

lo...!!! he droped sharon down (he he🤣 🤣)...although she wasn't seriously hurt but she was angry on him...

she ran after him like tom after jerry...😆😆

"inka kuch nahi ho sakta..." kriya sighed in hopeless manner

"but they look cute ..." rey commented

kria glared at rey to shut up..😆😆

"ok...ok... " rey said while making "V" from his fingers indicating sign of peace

they both returned to their work...

kria was setting cupboard ...
she didn't knew what to place where... as the matter of fact she never had any attachment to the dresses unlike sharon, she never wasted her time on stupid girly stuffs like fashion , dresses accessories...etc.. this was totally sharon's department...sharon would help kria to do shopping n choose her dresses , although kria was more mature n sensible than sharon , this is the area where she lacks senses... she feels its the worst deparment she could handle... thats the reason she is so simple...

" let me help u..." rey said while taking one of the dress of her in his hand

"no need i can do it myself..." kriya glared at him while snatching back dress

"but i can help u in arranging ur wardrobe..."

"look this is girl's wardrobe..n exactly how can u help me...?"

"look as the matter of fact i am very dashing n good looking...i have many girlfriends n i have also reached to their rooms n wardrobe u see... 👏👏"

" gross!!! ... mr. reyansh singhania... u know what?? u r a gross...!!!" kriya said in disgust

"n as the matter of fact i don't find u dashing n good looking...hence i will do it myself..."
with that kria started to do her work...

😲😲rey smirked at her ..he was totally loving her attitude... he laughed at himself as in reality he never went beyond his limits..he is not that kind of person what he just said now , he just exaggerated about himself to her...to know how she reacts to it n now he loves her unexpected reaction...

rey went back to placing the books in another cupboard...

swaron were still fighting...n running after eachother...

martin came in their room...to see if they need any help...but he was shocked...😲😲😲

he again shouted in his signature shout more than extra dramatically tone "HEY BHAGWAAN" 😲😲😲

all four stopped their respective works n looked in his direction...

"now what martin ?? u discovered what new??" rey asked

"oh i was shocked to see swayam baba running like jerry... n u working seriously... 😆😆😆" he answered laughing

both swayam n rey gave him "what the hell " look...

"what?? u both definitely need docs..."

just then sharon stepped beside martin n said...

"ya u r right , this maha khadoos definitely need a good doc..."
n hi fived with martin which he gladfully reciprocated..👍🏼👍🏼

" if u r going to get a doc then plz take this creature named "reyansh singhania" also with you...he needs more than swayam...👏👏"

rey's face was red as if someone bashed him badly...
now rey's ego was hurt...

"look miss whatever...!! if u think like that then its u who needs the doctor most...all the the girls of the world go gaga over me ...u should feel highly prevailage to be reside here with me in the same house...do u get that...??"

" oh really!! i really like flying in the heaven... to live here with reyansh singhania , the charming god...!!😆😆👏" kriya replied sarcastically

as soon as kria uttered these words...all three (swaron n martin) started to laugh like maniac...as no one even dared to retort back to rey like that... even he couldn't stop himself from laughing...😆😆

this was the charm of rey who would never feel anything bad on being spotted by his closed ones.. n to him kria is already close special friend or person about whom he himself not realized his feelings till now, but has a soft corner in his heart (unknowingly to him) when n where it arose ...

" lets get back to work guys we have lot to do..." sharon said clapping her hands

the atmosphere was light one...everyone was indulge in their work...when one loud scream snatched all the attraction...

it was sharon's scream..she had hurt her leg in the process of moving a suitcase...
all ran towards her ,although there was no bleeding yet it seems a cramp has occurred in her ankle...

she was screaming at the top of her voice...

kria calmed her down ... n said

"sharon its ok, i will cure it ok...don't cry... everything will be fine... i am here na... kiddo!!!" kriya said with motherly cared

sharon instantly stopped crying... it was the beauty of their relation ...kria knew what to do n when to do...n sharon would follow her with full faith...
when kria would call her " kiddo" it was very soothing to her ears..she felt like she is near her mom... n kria is indeed her mom n dad both...

swayam volunteered to place sharon on the bed...but kria stopped him saying that " please get sharon in the living room, she is allergic to dust" , swayam lifted her in his hand n put her on the sofa ... while all just followed them...kria brought her first aid..n sat at sharon's n placed her feet in her lap...

kria was about to apply ointment on her ankle but sharon cried in fear ..

"kria it will hurt.." sharon whined

" kiddo i haven't started applying ointment yet... don't worry !! i here only na...!!" kria commented while opening ointment tube

all reyam n martin stood there watching the whole scene they were totally overwhelmed to see their loving relationship...

" sharon baby !! don't worry i'll make a chocolate pastry for u..." martin said trying to cheer up sharon

"thank you martin..." sharon smiled

" hogaya!!!" kria said

" itni jaldi??" sharon asked

"yup !!! " kriya smiled

" mujhe pata bhi nahi chala...thank u sis.. u r the best..." sharon said throwing her hands over kriya to hug her

"that i know...now take rest we'll just finish all the work..ok u stay here..." kriya smiled

" but main yaha bore ho jaungi..."

" sharon i told u to take rest na... so keep quiet n sleep..." kriya said while placing sharons leg on sofa and standing up

"but..."

" no buts...accha swayam u wait here with sharon..."

" no way ye khadoos mujhe pakaa dega..."

"as if main yahan tumhare paas nahi pakunga.."

" sharon!!" kria glared at sharon asking to behave properly

" ok ok correction maha khadoos..."
"don't worry kria baby sharon ke saath i'll stay..." martin volunteered

"thanks martin" kriya said in appreciation

reyam n kria went to settle things ...

kria was still fighting with wardrobe fiasco...while swayam organized other things...rey was opening a box which contained all childhood pictures of krisha sisters ...

rey looked at one of the photoframe...

" hey kria whose pics are these...??" he asked

kria saw the frame n said
"oh they ...they r mom n dad..." she replied smiling

"oh..let me put this pic on this wall... "

he took a hammer n started to nail the wall... carefully he hanged the frame...he accidentally look at kria's eyes which was somewhat moist...he placed one hand on her shoulder..n said..

"are you fine??"

kria just nodded in agreement...

rey thought to change the topic...
he took another frame which contained krisha sister's childhood pic...he guessed it easily its theirs..

"hey itni fat ladki kaun hai??"

kria looked at where he is pointing...she raised her eyebrows...

" itni moti bhi nahi hai.." kriya answered

"arey iski nose toh dekho kitni pluffy hai..."

" nahi hai.."

"hai...ears elephant jaise hai..." rey taunted more

" nahi hai...na iski ears elephant jaise hai n na iski nose pluffy hai..." kriya argued childishly

" oh really let me see ..."
with that he came forward n pressed kria's nose...

"see i told u its pluffy...😊😊"
😊
with that kriyansh both burst out laughing...

rey was again lost in her way of laughing ...her laugh seems like a sweet song to him...

swayam noticed rey staring at kria..
he coughed a bit which was enough to bring back real rey...

rey was back at his work...

he started nailing at the wall ...kria was still laughing n rey stared her from the corner of his eyes ...in this process he lost his concentration n hammered his hand...

rey shouted in pain...

swayam came to him n rey saw his hand bleeding ...swayam took him to the living room while kria followed...
swayam shouted "call the doc martin"...

martin hurriedly called the doc... kria was amazed the way swayam n martin were behaving...

rey sat with his eyes closed ,scary flashes came before his eyes as he tried to look at his wound, he heard a distant shriek and the pain seem to run all over his body not only in his palm... his eyes flashed open as he heard someones foot steps..he opened his eyes fully n saw the doc..

he cried in pain almost on the top of his voice...he slapped the doc who was trying to dress his wound, he wouldn't let him do a single thing...even sharon was shocked to see his condition...the doc was somehow able to give him the injection of tetanus but rey wouldn't let him clean his wound...rey shut his eyes closed...

doc has almost gave up but kria stood up to volunteer...
kria was a bit surprised to see him sweating, she held his hands ...while rey opened his eyes...n looked at kria who wiped the tear that ran through rey's cheek... while looking at his face...kria took cotton n started to clean the wound ..

with the first touch on wound rey started to shriek... and about to look at his wound but kria interrupted him by addressing him as "reyaansh"... he looked at her face...
till now kria understood that rey has fear of blood...
she tried to divert his mind...she continued...

"reyaansh... u didn't told me what were you doing in club on new years eve night..." kriya asked in her normal tone

she knew it was a lame question but she couldn't come out with any other question at that time..

rey started to respond her...

" that day was newyears eve so me n swayam went to celebrate in that club..." rey answered forgetting his pain a little bit

he answered her blankly n lamely..while kria continued to dress his wound ...unconscious to him...he was just looking at kria blankly...

" what's the name of your 28th girlfriend??" kriya asked again trying to indulge him in conversation

" ummm..."

he tried to think but was unable to remember his girlfriend's name...

all doc , sharon, swayam n martin stood quiet where they were ...and looked at rey who was busy thinking and also looked at kria whose face was towards rey but her hands were still dressing the wounds...

"i donot remember her name..." he answered in a lame voice again

" try to remember.. i know u can do it..."

"her name... her name...was..." before rey could say anything

kria interrupted...

"doc its done...!!"

while doc and all other looked at this little girl who almost made impossible thing possible that is handling rey at such situation...

"thank god at least its done..." swayam sighed loudly

"who is she ?? never met her before..." doc asked

"doc she is kria n she is sharon ..they shifted here today only.." swayam answered

"you r such a great child...god bless you...!!" doc smiled at her

while sharon chirped in between
" see i told you ...kria is the best...😊😊"

" ya indeed...😲" martin said still in shock

now rey was also in his senses... he was normal now...as the fear went away...

he looked at kria gratefully n said "thanks"

which she reciprocated by her sweet n caring smile...😊😊

"its pastry time... kids...i'll go n make some yummy pastry for u all..." martin said clapping his hands

" i want ice-cream n burger too..."

martin turned back..n said
"mr. reyaansh u r not getting any ice- cream at this hour of evening...u get that straight..." martin taunted
"we are not ready to handle your sneezing nose... " martin and swaym said in unison

" me too!! not ready to accept your one more slap...😆😆" doc said playfully

rey made a baby face n said "sorry doc uncle i didn't do it intentionally"

"i know beta ..."

"now can i get ice- cream...😉"

all in unison "NO !!!"

this shuts rey's mouth for future arguements...

and seeing his face all burst out laughing ...
while rey just frowned..😆

pheww!!

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chetna yogini

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Posted: 14 years ago

#387

note :

guys !!!

its exam time so
i will update after 20th march

n promise will be back with big bang...

love
chetna

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Nikki

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Posted: 14 years ago

#388

😊That was really good and thanks for the pm I can't wait till your exams are over and we get another amazing update👏

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chsripriya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#389

awesome amazing great fantastic mindblowing wooow update dude plz update as soon as u r exams r over and thnx for pm me i love martin the cook😉

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Maneet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#390

Awesome its sooo amazing luved it especially the part wer rey slaps the doc n kriya cleans his wound awww kriya so caring...n cuming to the note will waut for ur update n gud luck for ur exams...