FF on PhAb (I am complete now...) part 2 updated - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sidra and Dolly: 😲 am I seeing and reading correctly? is it sidra and dolly? Really nice to see u two commenting on my FF. I thing fr the first time... I am now impressed by my work. Thank you soo much fr liking it and commenting on it. These are some cute moments I wanted in the show, even before they shows PhAb track i wanted to see these kinds of cute scenes b/w them... simple, sweet, dhoda takrar bhahuth zyada pyar... but we missed all these in the serial... kash if it get a few more month extension, chodtho jo hua so hua, ab bhathal tho nehi sakthi na? So I thought FF he sahi.

Thank you soo much fr the commenting dear once again, really get surprised to see u two commenting on a FF.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: beebutterfly

LOL, that's really sweet Athira, Can totally see Phulwa looking at patijee sleeping and feeling slightly annoyed at her being awake tadaping for Jalebi😆

Yes since our dear PhAb is soo much sweet what all we (Phans Of PhAb, POP) should have to be sweet. Ami I was thinking of u all the way when I was writing abt sweet and u used the word sweet in the first line of ur comment, when i read it i was 😆 ye "ladki kabhi sweet ko jodega nehi... iske pyare pathiji ko bhi adhi rath sweet keliye bhagna padega "😆 😆.


I loved it when she used to do that in the show😍 So sweet and PhAblike to do that. *sigh*
And in the serial I think her fav. hobby was doing that, i remember that when ever she was sitting near him, she used to ran her hands through his hair. When he was talking abt that Shivani, when she was sitting near him and Dr. Arjun talking, another time it was kullu instead of Dr. But i always loved her doing that, it was a simple action but with a lot of love and care in it.

Oh, our abhay cannot bear his patni to be away for a little while even? sweet sweet sweet😊😍
No way he needs her by his side always. He got her after a lot of search how could he can let her away fr even a while. Again 😆 vo bhi 3 times, UR super SWEET Ami 🤗


Oh, uff thinking of Phulwa wiping his face and hair and him looking like a little boy all drenched is really too romantic. LOL, our dacait is domestic only for Abhay😆

Remembering the day of drive, but here Abhay is little changed instead of that angry attitude wala face he was soft, caring and with a smile now. Phulwa the same a little worried and a lot caring.


Athira, that's beautiful. Abhay would do anything for Phulwa, not surprising he went out in the rain to get her jalebis😍

Yes he will do anything fr his princess, to make her happy, to get a small smile frm her. he is such an adorable Pathijiii...😊

Hehe, that's so like PhAb, they are one moment lost in each other, then the next laughing. haye, feeling nostalgic😍 Remembering the time when he gave her the gun and she started laughing😆

Yes this was one of our PhAb mark scene exactly copied frm many moments in the serial.


Athira, im glad you updated because it's awesome👏.👏 Would love to read more😊 so whenever you get more ideas, post it, ok?😊

Oh surely, I was not sure at all that all love this part or not, infact I have a greater feeling of people dislike it but feels good that ur all liked it and thank u soo much fr that. and ur analyzes was too good I loved it ami as usual. 🤗 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sidra08

@dolly ...we will meet at FC and CC both ...the FC will be opened soon ..right now Jia has given me job of compling my comments and a make one post of Abhay Phulwa story so doing it 😆there is one CC already there don't you know about it ...😕

sidra wheres that CC?? i don't know abt it!!😲😲 give me either link or address!!and who r on that CC??😊
@athira i'd already told that i m not much lover of FFs esply romantic ones written by fans but i just read ur FFs & both parts r written so b'fully that i wrote abt it!!👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was SUPER cute and sweet! 👏

Aww she was eager to have some jalebi but still did not wake up Abhay and was so careful not to disturb him. So thoughtful of her, always thinking about others before her.

She removed water frm his face and hair with her saree.
Sweet! That reminded me of the drive scene. :)

Abhay went out and brought jalebies for her at that time of the night? How can be someone so sweet and considerate? Abhay is the best pati! 😳

Lovely piece Athira!! Wish we had gotten a chance to see something like that in the show too. Great reading here, continue soon. :))
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey Athira ..don't be so mean i have posted comment on your one more scene that you created ..pehla yeh wada hum nay kiya hay forgot about it 😆well i read only fan fictions of my type actually had some bad experiences with them at some places so don't read much a bit hesitant to read them😆 it won't end getting my mood spoiled ..but your really lighted up my mood so cute ..i wish we could get that Jalebl scene in serial...it would have been sho cute ...🤗but colors you 😡🤢cannot even say anything to this channel its already a blot on name of channels 🤢



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ameres

That was SUPER cute and sweet! 👏

Thank you Anu fr liking it. 😊


Aww she was eager to have some jalebi but still did not wake up Abhay and was so careful not to disturb him. So thoughtful of her, always thinking about others before her.

Yes that is what is our Phulwa. It was her lovely hubby if she can be soo much thoughtful and considerative fr others how much will be fr others...
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She removed water frm his face and hair with her saree.
Sweet! That reminded me of the drive scene. :)

Yes It was created frm that.

Abhay went out and brought jalebies for her at that time of the night? How can be someone so sweet and considerate? Abhay is the best pati! 😳

He is the best. You know what, before my marriage I will force my would be to go through all FF here and ask him to watch Phulwa episodes frm terrace scene, I am sure by reading and seeing all these, my hero will be super romantic like all of us here and I could enjoy a beautiful romantic life😳 😆 😆 .

Lovely piece Athira!! Wish we had gotten a chance to see something like that in the show too. Great reading here, continue soon. :))

Ya ofcourse, after hearing this much of good words who can keep away frm writing something. 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sidra08

hey Athira ..don't be so mean i have posted comment on your one more scene that you created ..pehla yeh wada hum nay kiya hay forgot about it 😆well i read only fan fictions of my type actually had some bad experiences with them at some places so don't read much a bit hesitant to read them😆 it won't end getting my mood spoiled ..but your really lighted up my mood so cute ..i wish we could get that Jalebl scene in serial...it would have been sho cute ...🤗but colors you 😡🤢cannot even say anything to this channel its already a blot on name of channels 🤢






Oye my sweet heart dont be I am sorry kan pakadthi hum. Yes I do remember u commenting that. But really got surprised on u two commenting abt a FF. really and I do remember once you said abt how u hate to read FF, so on seeing your comments I was really 😲 (Shocked) and happy that was just out of this world fr a bit. since it means that my ff has some effect on people, u know that how good it feels and I am not mean i wanted to tell you u made me feel soo spl today all of u who commented her made me so spl, Anu Ami Dolly You all since i was soo down with my own work feeling that it was not soo good. I would say u two especially made me feel too spl since u two rarely comment on FFs. Thank u soo much once again.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@Athira ..acha hay aur kan padko😛kidding 😆actually the FF's i read by mistake if you read it you will feel sorry for yourself...why you read even one word 😆thats why i don't' like reading them much 😆apart from few people like Jia's she never wrote anything here 😡and you have gained my trust too so will read yours 😳do write more


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Posted: 13 years ago
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athira...loved your Jalebi scene😊...very very cute and sweet😊...keep writing and keep entertaining us😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sidra: I am jumping now you know, fr any one gaining once trust in any thing is the biggest achievement and I will try my level best to keep ur trust in tact and once again thank you fr giving me ur trust, it is not easy to give it to any one... and now onwards when i write something i will be extra careful and try the best to give you all the best eventhough may be fail in some areas but never fail entirely. 🤗 to u

Mimi: Thank u yar.
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