FF on PhAb (I am complete now...) part 2 updated

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Here I am going fr a very bad attempt to portray how Phulwa finally uncover that great thing to Abhay... I really tried it in a lot of ways but finally get attached to this...

Edited: Mimi you done it before me!!!!!! But I cannot resist myself frm posting it since I wrote it completely before i am coming to the forum and seeing ur post pls pls pardon me dear... but have to say u done a better job than me. I never thought of delivering it soo funny.. ha ha still laughing on stupid Abhay. Ya will leave my comments there it self... But sorry mimi posting this. I thought fr a long time, but u know I cannot control me frm posting it. I worked that much on it. Sorry. But good to know that our thoughts collides.
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It was a beautiful sunny day. All are sitting fr the break fast. Phulwa is serving it fr all. Abay asked Phulwa also to sit but she passionately denied him by telling she was not feeling now will take it after sometimes. He as usual warn her to take it fr sure after sometime and said a bye to all then looking into her eyes deeply, she knows the meaning of his that staring come along with me to the door... Now a days she can even find the words hiding in even his single looks. This man is now herself. She followed him to the door and as usual he hold her hands and hold her near to him and placed a kiss on her forehead she just closed her eyes and feel the warmth of his nearness. Then looking up into his eyes she told a soft bye and apna khayal rehna. He nodded and said, "Thum bhi." While watching Abhay moving away and getting into the jeep she think " May be I am going to give u the most important news of our life today Abhay"

When she went back to the Haveli, Takurain, Dadi ma and Gouri were already engaged in reading the Holi book. Gouri reading two others listening and Dadi ma explaining the things. She asked fr the permission to go out. Gouri offered her company but stop her by telling she should be there with them. Phulwa was going to take her report she had given that check up yesterday and they told her to send the reports but she insisted she will come and collect it. Since she wanted to share that news with her Abhay first, since all her happiness is just because of him...

While holding the reports in her hands it was shaking, yes finally it come true she is going to become a mother. She wanted to tell it Abhay at once, but then control her self. She wanted to watch his excitement and happiness at that moment with her eyes. How much she is willing to see him as the happiest man on this earth... Then she was thinking how tell abhay abt her mother hood she tried soo many lines but nothing seems to be perfect. then her car pass bye a flower shop. She asked to stop the car. She was thinking of buying some red flowers to decorate the room since Abhay loves Red. She also brought some candles of different color and shape... then pictures of some cute babies. While looking into the pictures she was thinking of her own kid, its just few months remains to meet him/her. even that thought made her feel a strange feeling, which never can be explained in words only can be feel frm the depths of one's heart... especially a girl's.

It was around 9.00 pm. Abahy's time to arrive at home. She once more looked into the room, just make sure is everything clear. And also to her self. She was wearing the red color sari which Abhay give her, with untied hair. Room was completely lighted with candles. She already pasted the kid's pictures in the wall. The room is full of flowers. In the middle of their bed she wrote with the petals of deep red rose " You completed me as a woman Abhay" ( their bed sheet is in white colour and she kows English by now ) and around that she planted candles in the heart shape. She heard the foot steps of Abhay coming closer she hide herself in the corner, she was blushing already.

He opened the door by calling out her name, but on seeing the room decorated and in full of candles he stood stunned, then on moving towards the bed he read the lines, You completed me as a woman Abhay. His heart was jumping with joy, his eyes were searching fr only one thing now, that beautiful lady who gave him everything on this earth, who only can gave him the happiness he felt at this moment. He found her standing at the corner completely losing herself in his happiness even she forgot the reason fr it what matters her now is her Abhay is very much happy he was smiling like anything, joy is overwhelming inside him. They stood staring at each others fr a long. They said nothing but understand all they are just made for eachother and today their life get all the happiness it deserves. He slowly moved towards her and placed his hands on her to feel the first touch of his kid. She placed her head on his shoulder...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Athira...lovely work 👏👏...loved reading it...wish we had really gt to see something like this...and u know na grt men think alike😃😃...thats me and u
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh beautiful Athira! Everything is making me cry now. I'm just missing PhAb too much at this moment.😭


You mad me complete as a woman Abhay. His heart was jumping wit joy, his eyes were searching fr only one thong now, that beautiful lady who gave him everything on this earth, who only can gave him the happiness he felt at this moment. He found her standing at the corner completely lossing herself in his happiness even she forgote the reason fr it what matters her now is her

So well written Athira. She was his everything. Without her, he cannot exist.

He slowly moved towards her and placed his hands on her to feel the first touch of his kid. She placed her head on his shoulder...

Oh beautiful. I would have loved to see it on screen. This would have been a perfect PhAb moment.

🤗I know I have not done justice to your post Athira, because im feeling so down right now. Im sorry.😔 Thank you for writing this piece. Every single line written on PhAb is precious and special now that we won't see them.😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ho no Ami I made u feel down????😕 Ye humarah eradha nehi dhi... I just wanted to make you all happy, Ya I can understand in wht sense u said it, will miss PhAb always, but you know there is a proverb in our land it says We have to stop singing when our sound is good, that is every thing should end in its good times itself or else people will get bored of it, even we will start crying fr Phulwa end, and feels happy that it ended, and will forget it fr ever, but now our Phulwa and PhAb will be in our mind fr a long time
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow yaar ye bhe superb hai.
Sach me bohat maza araha hai ye sara scenes par kar jo hum sab phulwa me dekhna ko taras gaya the aur ab tu phulwa end hogaya hai .aisa lagta hai tum sab ke post na serial ko phir se start kardeya hai. Ye sab dekhna ke hasrat tu adhori rahgaye mujhe ab rona araha hai sorry
thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow. That was so BEAUTIFUL Athira! 👏

So many beautiful emotions in just a few lines...brilliant work. True becoming a mother is the biggest joy for any woman and indeed it makes her complete. And you have described those emotions beautifully here; could feel them.

Now a days she can even find the words hiding in even his single looks. This man is now herself.
I love this line because its so true for PhAb. They really have become a part of each other now. I cant exist without the other.

Once again beautiful piece of writing, wish we were given chance to watch such scenes on screen. None the less its great reading them here. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Duray & Anu Mimi & Ami thank u soo much. The real satisfaction can be get only frm the true heart touch compliments so here I am satisfied today...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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waooo what a post its so beatiful thanks 4 posting it🤗 i m missing my phab i want this fan fiction in phulwa but... its not possible now😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautifully written...thanks for bringing these beautiful moments alive, i always wanted to see them on screen.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow lovely piece Athira!👏👏

I think you really portrayed a very important element missing from the show, and it was sweet the way she decided to reveal it to him:)

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