FF on PhAb (I am complete now...) part 2 updated

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devraniharish

@devraniharish

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

@thiku 🥺Aapne wo likha hai jo hum serial main dekhna chahte theee. ab toh PhAb aur bhi yaad aane lege hain... Please write more like thiss ... Great My Dear👏 👏 👏

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thiku

@thiku

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Thank u to all fr the likes and support which gives me a courage to write more but hoping that now i will not bother u with more fr a small time gap...

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avantika-akshi

@dazzling_akshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

wowww.👏 ...i luvd it...pls pls update yaar...i hv started dreaming 😍those sequences...fantastic👍🏼...muahhh 😆...update update update...!!!!

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thiku

@thiku

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Akshi: I have written it as a single story with out any continuation... But once u said to update it, yes I will try but I am not sure actually I stoped thinking abt it there, now I have to explore abt the possibilities of extending the story sorry fr this sort of an answering but it was the fact...

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avantika-akshi

@dazzling_akshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: thiku
Akshi: I have written it as a single story with out any continuation... But once u said to update it, yes I will try but I am not sure actually I stoped thinking abt it there, now I have to explore abt the possibilities of extending the story sorry fr this sort of an answering but it was the fact...

its okay..i m jst crazy abt phab...now we wont hv any phab scenes that's what makes me sad...no need fr d update..u can update nly if u want...

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thiku

@thiku

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

I never thought of continuing this one but since I got a tread and which can be connected to this and also since Akshi asked me for a continuation, here I am going with a FF on PhAb. pls tell all ur comments good or bad.
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Part II

It was raining hard out side and the time is abt 10 in the night, Haveli already fell into deep sleep except one, Phulwa. She is very much restless and cannot even wink her eyes. Now a days she is too much interested in sweets that at this time of night she wanted to eat Jilebi!! She cannot control her longing fr that. She looked at the peaceful sleeping figure of Abhay. " Humeh ethne museebath par dalke kuth chainse soo rehe hai" She told in a low voice, it sounds angry but her face with a sweet smile and endless passion. She ran her hands through his silky hair without waking him up. She gets up and left to kitchen.
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There was only a very dim light in kitchen since she dont wanted to wake up all so put the low volt bulb. She was impatiently searching everywhere in the kitchen but she failed to find it.
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Abhay opened his eyes when his hands cannot get the touch of Phulwa where it expect her presence. Where does she went at this time of night? Abhay looked fr her in the bathroom and then went out of the room, down the stairs, he could now see the dim light in the kitchen.

He entered the kitchen. Phulwa was talking to herself abt the Jilebi daba. Now she knows that somebody purposefully misplaced it so that she fails to find it out since everyone now a days upset abt her very much increased liking fr Jilebi, her eyes filled with tears, and then thought to her self how childish I am becoming just fr a jilebi I started to cry. She made a sigh and went back to the bedroom.
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When she enterd the room she found that the room is lighted and Abhay is not on the bed. He must have been wake up fr the bathroom, Phulwa thought and prepared a very good lie to tell Abhay else he will going to tease her like any thing. she lied awake fr abhay to come, then she noticed there was no sounds fr the bathroom. she gets up and knock at the bathroom door, Abhay, kya kar reheho? Abhay, then she slowly opend the bathroom door to found it empty. Then where does he gone at this time? She went down to search fr him, but failed to find him, then she thought of terrace but at once denied that idea since it was raining too hard. She decided to call Babu fr help.

As she passing the corridor a strong hands grab her's and pulled her close. It was complete dark there but she can find the familiar fragrance of Abhay easily. He was wet she drags him to the light. he was completely wet, water drops falling frm his hair, "Abhay ap ithni barish me kya karne gaya dha?" Phulwa's voice angry but deep concern in her eyes. She removed water frm his face and hair with her saree.

Both entered into their room. Phulwa get a towel and give it to him and also give him cloths to change. Then only she noticed all through the way abhay was holding one of his hands behind, like he was hiding something frm her. What happened to ur hands Abhay? Phulwa asked
Nothing, why?
Show it to me.
Why Phulwa kaha na kuch nehi.
Now Phulwa geting more panic hold his hands and forcefully bring it to front, to only found his hands with a packet of jilebi... She looked up at him surprisingly, her eyes filled with tears.
My phulwa needed something and i cannot fulfill it? eisa hua he kya? Ha rath dhi, bharish dha but to my luck one shop was there and Jilebi was there.
Phulwa stood on her knees and placed her head on his lap , hum apse bhahuth pyar kartha hum abhay. Abhay smiled and said, Ha I know that, but now a days you started to think abt these jilebies than me. Phulwa looked at him and both stared eachother and then break into a laugh.

Sorry very bad attempt, i know, with lots of problem, pls pardon me.

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Ami

@beebutterfly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Now a days she is too much interested in sweets that at this time of night she wanted to eat Jilebi!! She cannot control her longing fr that. She looked at the peaceful sleeping figure of Abhay. " Humeh ethne museebath par dalke kuth chainse soo rehe hai"

LOL, that's really sweet Athira, Can totally see Phulwa looking at patijee sleeping and feeling slightly annoyed at her being awake tadaping for Jalebi😆

She ran her hands through his silky hair without waking him up.

I loved it when she used to do that in the show😍 So sweet and PhAblike to do that. *sigh*

Abhay opened his eyes when his hands cannot get the touch of Phulwa where it expect her presence. Where does she went at this time of night? Abhay looked fr her in the bathroom and then went out of the room, down the stairs, he could now see the dim light in the kitchen.

Oh, our abhay cannot bear his patni to be away for a little while even? sweet sweet sweet😊😍

As she passing the corridor a strong hands grab her's and pulled her close. It was complete dark there but she can find the familiar fragrance of Abhay easily. He was wet she drags him to the light. he was completely wet, water drops falling frm his hair, "Abhay ap ithni barish me kya karne gaya dha?" Phulwa's voice angry but deep concern in her eyes. She removed water frm his face and hair with her saree.

Oh, uff thinking of Phulwa wiping his face and hair and him looking like a little boy all drenched is really too romantic. LOL, our dacait is domestic only for Abhay😆

Now Phulwa geting more panic hold his hands and forcefully bring it to front, to only found his hands with a packet of jilebi... She looked up at him surprisingly, her eyes filled with tears.

Athira, that's beautiful. Abhay would do anything for Phulwa, not surprising he went out in the rain to get her jalebis😍

Phulwa stood on her knees and placed her head on his lap , hum apse bhahuth pyar kartha hum abhay. Abhay smiled and said, Ha I know that, but now a days you started to think abt these jilebies than me. Phulwa looked at him and both stared eachother and then break into a laugh.

Hehe, that's so like PhAb, they are one moment lost in each other, then the next laughing. haye, feeling nostalgic😍 Remembering the time when he gave her the gun and she started laughing😆

Athira, im glad you updated because it's awesome👏.👏 Would love to read more😊 so whenever you get more ideas, post it, ok?😊

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ButterflyOnRose

@ButterflyOnRose

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

wow Athira i never read fan fictions much read yours now very well written really loved both parts 👏

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dolly

@tiny15

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: sidra08
wow Athira i never read fan fictions much read yours now very well written really loved both parts 👏

sidra i agree wid u!! same case here!! but athira 'd written b'ful & nice FF!!and i wanted 2press like button but thot i"ll post sum reply & that 2 cudn't do bcoz of sum apprensions regarding FFs!!

and 2day after reading 2nd part i m replying!!

gud work athira!!

@sidar after this forum where"ll we meet & chat abt PhAb & JayGun??😕😃😃i know we can meet on FC &CC but if u visit sum oder forums then do tell me!!i'd stopped watching all colors shows except paricahy bcoz of sameer soni & my mom who watches this show!!.and at 9.00Pm sumtimes iw atch lifeok or imagine or sony.😕😕

Edited by tiny15 - 13 years ago

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ButterflyOnRose

@ButterflyOnRose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

@dolly ...we will meet at FC and CC both ...the FC will be opened soon ..right now Jia has given me job of compling my comments and a make one post of Abhay Phulwa story so doing it 😆there is one CC already there don't you know about it ...😕

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